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Reviews for Naruto/Temari one-shot collection

By : sandersnw
  • From pureblood05 on June 28, 2007
    Hey, there are a lot of people who like Temari/Naruto. The only goon one I"ve read is by Demongodofchaos, I would really love to read a T/N smut fic. From what you had in this chappie, I know you could do it well. I can only hope you will acknowledge my earnest request. One piece of constructvie criticism though: making a chap longer really would make it better.

    -purebloodprince
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  • From rasoba on February 21, 2007
    ok make one lol tem/naru is my favorite parin to lol
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 21, 2006
    It was a good lemon, and I liked the characters involved, but I think it sounded a little weird coming from a first person perspective as opposed to a general one.
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  • From ANON - Tactician on October 19, 2006
    There realy isn't enough Temari/Naruto pairing if you ask me or Ino/Naruto for that matter so please contine.
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  • From ANON - darkness in the light on September 28, 2006
    YEAHA YA!!!! write it plz. i will review every one
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  • From ANON - solar phoenix on September 24, 2006
    the first lemon wasn't bad, but I found it lacking in background.
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  • From ANON - lazy on September 21, 2006
    naruto and temari on there honeymoon but please add a new chapter
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 25, 2006
    kfj
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  • From ANON - Josh on August 18, 2006
    I hope to see more from you. When can we see another story of Temari and Naruto by themselves then accompanied by someone else this is ok but you just have to work on your writing a bit it is hard to understand what you mean in the beginning and please update soon
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  • From ANON - kiryuu on August 10, 2006
    This great. I'd like to see a Naruto/Temari/Tenten pairng. Keep up the excelent work
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 08, 2006
    awsome
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  • From ANON - BecauseICan on August 07, 2006
    It was ok for a first try. but thats why onshot collections r so good. if u keep writing in this ur lemons will get better and better. It just like anything else in the wolrd. If u don't practice then u won't get better.

    Nexttime try to lengthen it a bit. Try todiscribe as much as possible. if ur face isn't red wile ur writing it then it needs more.

    and remeber its all Because I Can
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  • From ANON - Josh on August 04, 2006
    Well first off you started a lil out of person didn't know who was doing what. But you made it an ok fic but you need to work on the talk of the three and make sustain the character a bit and I would like to see a Sakura,Naruto, and Ino
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  • From ANON - Jinxy13 on August 03, 2006
    I wouldn't mind seeing a Naruto/Temari/Kin or Tayuya, but that's just me. you've effectively hit on my favorite already.... looking forward to more PWP! maybe even (one day) some WITH PLOT! (jk) cya
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  • From ANON - realist on August 03, 2006
    i like it and i hope that you will make more of these ****
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