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Reviews for All in Time

By : boyarina
  • From ANON - GedaKitty on August 21, 2006
    Tis Interesting. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - crash and burn on August 19, 2006
    o you got to add a new chapter this is a great story.
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  • From ANON - Josh on August 19, 2006
    Nice update but you jump from being in the forest to in a village's outskirts and they have to fing four women and Sakura is now Naruto's fiance to enter the village and try to find the person they are looking for hope you clean the chapters up a bit and make them a bit more understandable. Great story though
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  • From ANON - Josh on August 14, 2006
    Hey nice story hope to see an update and like the way you had Naruto and Sakura kiss for the first time. Kinda funny that he is somewhat in an unconscious state and falls on top of her while kissing her at the same time. Hope to see a new chapter up from you on this good story.
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  • From ANON - Gavin McBaine on August 13, 2006
    Hey, Great story love the minor things and the major plot line is funny and slightly romantic A+ keep writing
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  • From ANON - Zendura on August 12, 2006
    Nice keep it up and ill keep reading :)
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  • From ANON - GedaKitty on August 12, 2006
    Please keep writing this. Nyao. I like it a lot.
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  • From ANON - Wrathchylde on August 10, 2006
    Ahhh. Glad you put this here. It's impossible to wade through all the yaoi and horrendous stories to find something good, so I stick to the sub categories. Anyway, great story, though you have a little trouble with tenses at some points. They seem to work out as you get writing, but they're mildly noticable. Other than that, great stuff. Makes me with AFF had alerts.
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  • From ANON - Nowhere Man on August 10, 2006
    Interesting that I'm the only one to review this. But this is turning out to be a nice little Saku/Naru fic. Dare I say it, even one of my favs. But i think you'd get better responses if you placed it in the Het section.
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