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Reviews for Kingdom Of Demons

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  • From ANON - sabs on August 07, 2006
    plzzzz continue ur story i really like ur plot its very interesting specially naruto n sasuke plz hurry n update !
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  • From ANON - Eizzie on August 05, 2006
    write morebefore i kill you -_-
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  • From ANON - Mystaira on August 03, 2006
    Subarashii!!
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  • From ANON - yesh on August 02, 2006
    awsome!
    i love it
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  • From ANON - jazzy on August 01, 2006
    I have to say its a good combination of angst and humor I likey. Good use of cursing by Naruto and Iruka is great too. Keep'm both feisty! Cause fiesty's hot.
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  • From on August 01, 2006
    I like it! Sasuke's wings are wonderful! I've always liked wings... Damn weasel... Please write more!

    Seisai
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 31, 2006
    UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - SparkAngel on July 30, 2006
    wow, so far i'm liking this fic.
    hope you update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - losthimagain on July 30, 2006
    ^^ I've read this some were before....^^ Please post more soon!
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  • From ANON - Gazette on July 30, 2006
    Update soon, I like this story. I usually don't like stories where there is going to be MPreg but yours is an exception. ^_^
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  • From ANON - T.k on July 30, 2006
    i like this story. please update. :)
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  • From ANON - Jessica on July 30, 2006
    My friends all absolutely love Naruto but I was never really into it until just a couple days ago when they forced me to start reading the mangas lol Immediately I needed some Sasu/Naru lovely-ness and decided to pick at your story first!!
    ~Ok now that I've unnecessarily explained myself..OMFG I LOVE THIS STORY!! Please please PLEASE update sooooon!! You will be showered in chocolate if you update soon!! ^.~ Promise! Lol And hey, if you need someone to beta for you, I'd be happy to; I help out alot of my friends with going over their work for them. My email is RockN.RollQueen@hotmail.com, if you're interested in getting someone to beta.
    ~Either way update soon because I can't WAIT to see what happens next!!

    XxJessXx
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  • From ANON - aria on July 30, 2006
    i love your story! what does happen next???
    i can't wait for the next chapter...keep up your great work!
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  • From ANON - Bronwyn on July 30, 2006
    I really don’t see why you’re getting good reviews considering your use of grammar and the English language. I read only a paragraph in and was surprised at all the mistakes I saw. Here are just a few:

    The sentence, “The child walked over to his mother severed, bloodied head,” should be “mother’s severed head”. What you need is mother’s to show that there is just one and that it is her head (possession).

    You also used the word disembodied completely wrong in the sentence that says “head was disembodied”. Disembodied means something, like a voice or a hand, coming from an unseen person. It also implies that it is to be used to describe ghosts or other such strange happenings. You meant to say decapitated, which means to behead somebody or something. Thus you could say “her decapitated head”.

    I really don’t have the time or inclination to go back and pick out all your mistakes. Needless to say you need a beta reader because as is, your work is unreadable. I apologize if English isn’t your first language and if that is the case, you still need a beta reader even more. Good luck with any future writing you do.

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  • From ANON - ded - entirely too lazy to log in on July 30, 2006
    yo. Nice story, iu'm liking the hell out of it actually XD usually i don't read fics like this because...because DAMN IT Itachi pisses me off, Same with Oro-teme. - stabs ITachi and Oro plushies with pins- DIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEE!! However this story seems promising reguardless :D I look forward to more ^__^ Ja ne!
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