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By : feisu
  • From ANON - yura on November 02, 2006
    If you ask me you should continue!!
    The story is great, it'll be a shame not to
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 19, 2006
    I'm too lazy to log in, but I hope you'll update soon.

    It's a really cute but sad plot-line, so I hope to read to the end and find out what happens.
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  • From ANON - Leena on September 11, 2006
    Yaay, something of a problem. And Sasuke, ya poor lil pretty boy u_u;. The 'looking through the window' bit made me think that someone else was stalking Sasuke, instead of Naruto as I assumed it would be. But, Naruto is still very calm seeming for a guy who was faced with the love of his life being raped. Quiet anger I understand, but I would think he'd be a little peeved just finding out before calming down.
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  • From ANON - Leena on September 11, 2006
    It... it's interesting. But I was banging my head against my desk by the fourth chapter. Naruto's life is seriously Too Perfect. Everyone loves him, he's seemingly all knowing and mature and smirky, he's 'even be more loaded than Uchiha and Hyuuga together'. It's just... too much currently. At this point, I would pay to see him at least a little jealous, too. Really. Or uncertian, or irritated, or something. Sasuke can't be the only one with flaws.

    ...and I sort of miss Sasuke, too. All he's been doing is... well... being jealous. And Sasuke seems to have no friends D:.
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  • From ANON - Wings on September 09, 2006
    Omg! I love this. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Wings on September 09, 2006
    Omg! I love this. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Inuki on September 09, 2006
    all i can say is....

    OMFG YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE YOU GOTTA YOU GOTTA YOU GOTTA YOU GOTTTAAAAAAAA!!!
    i luv ur story it's sooo cute... Sasuke a little wussy, but i kinduh like it that way cuz it just makes
    him all the more cute, and he doesn't seem like such a emotionless bastard....the way you write, you actually give him some feelings haha....so...please update soon
    i'll be waiting

    ;D

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  • From ANON - snow_angel on September 08, 2006
    if you haven't found a beta, i will do it for you, just email me back. put the name of the story and your penname-author name in the subject so i know who you are pls.
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  • From ANON - Luthien Wildglen on September 07, 2006
    You had me all excited; I thought it was an update! Oh well, guess I'll just have to find other ways to amuse myself, like being your beta, if you still need one. I would be happy to be your beta. As I said I really like your story and I would hate to see it not read. I’ll leave my email address, so if you accept my offer, send me an email. Regardless, my best wishes for you and your writing.


    Dryad1789@hotmail.com


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  • From ANON - Luthien Wildglen on September 06, 2006
    Alright, first things first. I'm very intrigued by this story. I like the role reversals that you've done with Sasuke and Naruto. However, you really need to find a beta. This is a great story, but the grammatical errors are really bad and take a lot away from the story. I noticed that a few chapters have been beta’d and I can’t help but find that hard to believe. The only thing I can think of is that your beta only checked your spelling and nothing else. It’s a beta’s job to also make sure the grammar is correct. If you find a beta that possesses good English skills than you could have gold here. Apart from that, I would really love to see you continue this story, and find a good beta. Good luck. My best wishes for you and your writing.


    Dryad1789@hotmail.com
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  • From DemonBlaze on September 06, 2006
    The story is good so far and the last two chapters were great.
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  • From ANON - kittycat on September 06, 2006
    I LOVE THIS STORY SOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UP DATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Xaxy on September 06, 2006
    I love when Naruto is the "man" in a relationship x3, I hope you update soon "nods"
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  • From ANON - Demi on September 06, 2006
    no dont stop. I must say that you are a very good writer at the end of the chapter you just cant help but move onto the next and then get dissaponted when you find out that its not out yet. so dont stop writing you have talent.
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  • From ANON - File200 on September 06, 2006
    For the reader's benefit, I suggest that you separate the paragraphs with two spaces instead of one. It's hard to read when your story is clumped up all in one blocky chunk.
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