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Reviews for Unfinished Business

By : AkiraDawn
  • From ANON - Sayomi XD on August 04, 2006
    can't wait till the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Moiraine on August 03, 2006
    PAKKUN! YAY! Kurenai faints...:P Wow, I wasn't expecting that! Awesome!
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  • From ANON - Sayomi XD on August 02, 2006
    that is soooooo sweet!
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  • From ANON - logophobia on August 01, 2006
    this chapter is an example of why i like your writing, it isn't just pure sex like alot of people's stories it shows actual relationship.
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  • From ANON - Moiraine on August 01, 2006
    Anko won't want to go back to fucking....you know it. :P She'll be hooked. That was an awesome chapter, I loved it, I like emotional chapters, and the Come Come Paradise thing was hilariously awesome. And PAKKUN! As long as a chapter has Pakkun, I can't not say anything about him in my review. I love him! He's awesome! Pakkun should go around looking for love and prance in on Kurenai and Asuma, then Kurenai comes in in her stilletos and lingere and says "I think this is yours." and Puts Pakkun on their bed...:P I'm obsessed, just not enough stories have Pakkun! He's the greatest little puppy ever! I feel bad for Shizune.
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  • From ANON - windsoftiti on August 01, 2006
    wow Shizune and Hayate are like me... anyway nice job!
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  • From ANON - Moiraine on July 30, 2006
    Shizune is a prude for this crowd. Lol. OMFG, I freaking love Pakkun. He's sooo awesome! I bet you think I'm borderline obsessed, but he's sooo awesome, I luuurve him, he's not in the series enough. I love Kurenai's cooking. "That's my specialty. Boxed things." :P Kakashi's kinda quiet, but that's in his character. He seems to like making fun of Kurenai in the series. I dunno, it seems like something to put in there. Gosh, I love this story. Thank you!
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  • From ANON - windsoftiti on July 27, 2006
    hmmm shes not pregnant aye? well, nice job!
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  • From ANON - Moiraine on July 26, 2006
    YEEHAW! PAKKUN! I love that dog! He has to stay forever! He's the best thing so far! God I love him! He's soo funny. Pakkun should be like "Anko, I'm sorry I've been so mean to you. In order to apologize, I'll let you touch my paw." That'd be hilarious! Anyways, I kinda wish Kurenai would have been pregnant. And Please tell me that they aren't going to be drunk the whole time, bleh. It'd get a little redundant. Anyways, thanks for the awesome chapter, and I hope you have fun on vacation!
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  • From ANON - Terri on July 23, 2006
    Yay sequel. Cant wait for the update.
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  • From ANON - Sayomi XD on July 23, 2006
    hehehhe can't wait to see wut results Kurenei has when she gets to the mauntains! update sooN!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 23, 2006
    The idea is a good one, to say the least, but staying on the point and not going into too much pointless detail would make the story a whole lot better; Getting a Beta would be a good thing. Too many details on pointless parts, and going completely off the point drags the story on and can make some readers lose interest quickly. Other than that, everything else seems perfect.
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  • From ANON - windsoftiti on July 22, 2006
    This is going to be very very interesting.
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  • From ANON - james on July 22, 2006
    its great just like inside on the outside it now one of my favorite storys
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  • From ANON - Moiraine on July 22, 2006
    I can tell that a lot of this story will end up being semi-awkward moments with poor, dear Kakashi trying to imply some sort of marriage to Anko, and she's going to be too dense to get it. I love that you had Pakkun. You should so have Pakkun around, almost 24/7, he makes things soooo great, and he's basically Kakashi's pet. I am so excited to see where this goes next! With all that alchohol...gosh, will there ever be a moment when they aren't smashed? Good bye livers....yeesh.
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