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By : looli
  • From Vague on February 29, 2008
    Hey there, I was reading your story and found that you have amazing talent as an author. This is why I am taking some time to invite you over to my website Laefe E-Publishing. I’m looking for young talented authors who have it in them to make creative original works.

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    All I ask is that you give Laefe a look and see if it might be where you would like to further progress in your quest to writing your ultimate story. Thank you for your time and I do hope to hear from you soon.

    Emi Baptiste
    Admin of Itsuwari.com and Laefe Epublishing.

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  • From GMHR on February 16, 2008
    It's been a long time since you've updated this and I hope you haven't abandoned it. Every so often I re-read it and hope that there will soon be another chapter.
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  • From Vague on May 05, 2007
    Hello Author,
    I am a huge fan of yaoi and have started a site archiving all the good yaoi fiction. I am glad to say that your story has made it into the archive. Congratulations on telling a truly moving tale.

    About the Archive:
    The archive is nothing more than a site which links directly to good stories. I do not claim your story as my own but rather I encourage others to read and review it as it deserves that recognition.

    Your story is linked at http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php?showtopic=40. If you would like it to be removed from the archive or are concerned about anything then please send me an email. I will be glad to answer or remove it. Thank you.

    Vague
    Administrator of the Yaoi Fanfiction Archive (YFA)
    http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php
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  • From on February 03, 2007
    OOOHHH I LOVE THE STORY.
    I CAN'T WAIT FOR THEIR 1ST KISS.
    I HOPE IT'S SOON.
    PLS PLS PLS CONTINUE.
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  • From ANON - burr on January 10, 2007
    the last chapter was not a crap! but i wish the story would speed up a bit. naruto's still not showing any interest in sasuke, and it's past 10th chapter already.. the interaction with uchiha's fun club is really amusing :). sasuke seems a bit too ooc for me, since he's always blushing and panicked when near naruto, but i guess it's just your interpretation.

    anyway, thank you for this wonderful story :). it's a good reading, though as i said i wish for more narusasu interaction, or at least naruto showing some interest in sasuke already. keep up the good job! :)
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  • From ANON - Saria on December 18, 2006
    I have been waiting to read another chapter of this story, I can´t belive it´s finally out.
    I love this, Sasuke is so funny (at least i think that) little Sasuke seems so cute, sakura desesperates me and i don´t understand why Naruto doesn´t care about Sasuke the poor thing I want some kind of action between them!!!!!
    Hope u can write soon another chapter pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeese I´ll be waiting ;-)
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  • From ANON - outlander_girl on December 18, 2006
    Dude, i'm in love with this story! i feel so bad for sasuke though, all that pent up sexual frustration. NARUTO NEEDS TO GET A CLUE AND THEN FUCK THAT BOY SENSELESS.
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  • From ANON - Luthien Wildglen on December 14, 2006
    Oh my goodness! How strange, I was just thinking about this fic the other day, and resigning myself to the fact that this story probably wasn't going to be continued. I'm so glad that I was wrong! I thought the chapter was rather interesting. I have to admit though that it feels like the fic has reached a plateau. It seems like Sasuke has absolutely no chance with Naruto, and to be honest, its a lot more interesting when there's still some mystery to the fic. A little interest on Naruto’s part would be nice.

    However I really like the idea of Gaara and Ino being a couple. I haven't seen the pair before but I think they make a lot of sense for each other. I do have to say though that I really don't like it that Gaara smokes. I just can't stand the habit. I'd love it if Gaara quite for Ino.

    Anyway though, all in all, I really do positively love this fic and I hope you update soon. I don't care whether you like the chapter or not because I thought it was great. I hope you continue this fic.

    Regardless, my best wishes for you and your writing.


    Dryad1789@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - aria on December 14, 2006
    YATTA! you update!! i'm very happy~
    poor Sakura and Ino...but, Sasuke's heart blongs to Naruto, ne?lol
    keep up your great work. please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Darling_425 on December 11, 2006
    Yay! An updaate! Yippi! I'm so happy! Thank you!
    This chapter is great! Made my day!
    Love you!
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  • From ANON - Savin-me on December 10, 2006
    God damn it! When Naruto will notice or start making moves on Sasuke! Oh the nerve!
    Sasuke stop being shy boy and do something drastic (use your possessiveness, get drunk if that will add courage etc.), throw Sakura away and kiss him finally! Then everything will move on smoothly!

    Don’t mind my rant and update soon! XD

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  • From saxis on December 07, 2006
    I love this fic! More NaruSasu-ness, please?! :D
    Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Just Passing By on November 26, 2006
    Ack! You stopped! A curse on you!
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  • From ANON - Niel on November 17, 2006
    ... ... ... ... This is... WOW!! I LOVE YOU!!!
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  • From ANON - Teodora on October 26, 2006
    this story is soooooooo cool. i love it! :D it's really nice . i really like it. so can;t wait for the next chapter! :D good luck on your writing ! :D
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