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Reviews for Patience

By : Jackee
  • From ANON - JENNIFER COOPER on March 28, 2009
    DAM LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEE"n ITTTTTTTTTT!!!! SOOOOOOOOOO DAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMM SSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEXXXXXXXXXXXXXYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!! ^__________________________________^ HELL YAH!!!! BABAY!!! MORE PPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!
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  • From RyuuOokami on June 15, 2008
    Heh I liked.
    I also think you did th lemon just fine; like when Sasuke wanted to quit after he got off. Most people forget that the sex is practically over when you have cummed.
    Good job. *small smile*
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 24, 2008
    (I review as I read.)
    I take it that Naruto and Sasuke are already in a relationship and Sakura either has no idea, or is just desperate. . . . I like the paragraph beginning with “Naruto simply shrugged as he watched her leave.” The part where it said “he headed for the other direction” seems kind of symbolic.
    Oh, great, the dattebayos announce themselves. -_- . . . Yeah, I figured he would hate that. . . . He doesn’t have to be complicated, he just has to be unpredictable.
    Oh yeah, that vision is beautiful! . . . Heh, “as long as the idiot didn’t take forever to get to the point.” Oh, Sasuke, that is the point EXACTLY. ^_^ . . . Aw man, he did it with Orochimaru? (*gack*) XP . . . Yeah, I can see Sasuke as a masochist perfectly. Maybe a little sadistic, too. . . . Boy, he’s flexible, too. . . . I dunno, Sasuke, I don’t see the appeal either.
    Cute. ^^ Nah, I don’t think it needs a sequel, it’s fine as it is.

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  • From PriestessNaruko on September 18, 2007
    I really liked it ^^ Sasuke being tied to the bed yummy >///
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  • From ANON - blisblop on January 04, 2007
    Sequal,the first time he totally enjoys dry sex with Oro,,can be flash backs as Naruto fists him.Use the contrasts even though they are both intence sensations! Very nice work here.Very.
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  • From ANON - sadistickiss on October 14, 2006
    Kyaaa... *shiver* I'm a SasuNaru fanatic, but it's nice to see some nice NaruSasu sometimes ^^. After all, Sasuke is just too *pretty* to be full-time seme XP! Anyway, nice kinky smut! Hehe, love the bondage XD! Thanks for writing it, it was awesome XP. A sequel would be cool, if you're up to it =]. Keep writing~!
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  • From ANON - tiffany on September 26, 2006
    *try’s to stop drooling* long aufe to type. Alright i would like to say awesome work very nice the hand cuff thing awesome! the foreplay told genius very well wrote and the ending was just right! awesome job hope to read more of your fan fic’s soon!
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  • From ANON - Trollmia on August 11, 2006
    Hmm, remind me not to read this at work again.... it's dangerous to my health and my boss is looking very strangely at me when I'm moaning and panting while working.... hmmmm...
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  • From ANON - Suki on July 25, 2006
    *nods head* yes yes I do believe that you should make a sequel to this. *nods head again* It would make for a very interesting peice to find out how Sasuke gets back at Naruto. *grins thinking of the possiblilties* I can't tell you how fun it is when an author does that. It always makes the story a little more interesting when you know that one of the couple intend to "get back" at their partner. Finding out how that happens has to be the best part.
    So in conculsion, you need to make a sequel!!! I shall be waiting impatiently for that to happen and hope that in the end you take me up on my sugestion. After all this was a completely and totally erotic peice and I most deffinatly would love to read another like it really soon.
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  • From ANON - rAiNwAtEr on July 22, 2006
    This was indeed a cute story. I personally love Naruto as the seme. It is rather hard to find a story that portrays Naruto as the seme and some what keep his personality intact.
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  • From ANON - Neko-Chan on July 21, 2006
    that was HOTT...deliciously hott!! great fic! cant wait for more!!
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  • From ANON - Kayo on July 21, 2006
    *evil laughter* Oh that was so so so hot! A very good one-shot, and I think that there should certaintly be a sequel!!!!! The only thing I didn't like about this fic, >.< , was the mentions of how Sasuke developed his affinity for really rough dry sex while under Orochimaru's care. Makes perfect sense, but...you know, it's /Orochimaru/ *blech* that snake-b*****d. I don't like him when it comes to Sasuke. But otherwise it was all enjoyable! It's great, too, that Sasuke or Naruto isn't always seme. It's better when they switch. Felt the ending was slightly rushed...but it wasn't too bad.

    For a sequel I am quite fond of there being more toys. XD And maybe dessert (whip cream, chocolate syrup, strawberries...fruit, in general). Sasuke doesn't like sweets, but I see no reason for Naruto not to use them. Hmm...dunno what to say as the semi-plot behind the sequel though. Maybe Sasuke wants payback and it backfires? Or maybe you could do a trilogy? *puppy dog eyes* And in the next, Sasuke dominates and they go through roleplay, like Master and Slave, and Sasuke uses some of that famous Uchiha willpower to make Naruto beg? Then, Naruto counters with dessert...and toys...and other stuff. Ok, just throwing ideas out in the dark and rambling on and on. So I'll shut up now.

    Keep on writing and I can't wait for a sequel, but take your time. Ah, if I could only know instantly when it came out. ;_;

    Kayo
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  • From ANON - lo on July 20, 2006
    That was quite nice. I like the relationship you put them into, it worked very well and of course was verey sexy. Nice job.
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  • From ANON - Pic's Pixie on July 20, 2006
    That was great, amazing hehe though alittle disgusted with 'where' and with 'whom' sasuke first learned to love dry sex but still great fic, i do hope there is a sequel, maybe sasuke gets back at naruto by teaching him to love being the uke with dry sex, since naruto taught him to enjoy forplay and all, and maybe add in some more emotions instead of just the sex though i loved that part muchly lol
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  • From ANON - DevilLived on July 20, 2006
    Loved it, the whole story was beautifully written (if it's even right to use beautiful in a smut fic... LOL). The ending was very sweet.

    Great job!
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