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By : mirandler43

From ANON - Minen on December 22, 2006
common dawg.. i NEED some chapters soon :D this is like one of the best stories i ever read! hurry hurry:P
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From ANON - eowyncat on December 21, 2006
so i messed up my email. *headdesk* it's eowyncat9@yahoo.com
thanks again! you are teh awesome!
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From ANON - eowyncat on December 19, 2006
Your story continues to draw me in. There isn't a chapter that I dislike so far and you build up the characters so well. And I wasn't majorly upset by your portrayal of bipolar disorder (which is rare). Lee is clearly a rapid cycling bipolar 2, so he doesn't have the dangerous manias that can manifest themselves in paranoia, suicide, or doing crazy shit. I'm bipolar 1 (the bad kind) and I have to be on medications, or I wont leave my room due to paranoia, or I'll become suicidal, or dangerously angry, etc...but there are a lot of people who have manageable bipolar disorder. It's nice that you portray it that way and not the super-insane-crazy way that most authors like to portray it as. I just wish I was more like Lee and less like myself (I'm kind of bitter right now due to the fact that I had to take a semester off of school because I had/have to figure out the right meds. It's been hell. Ataxia, acathesia...). Anyway, that was really personal and rant-like, so I'm sorry. But coming from someone who has seen the inside of a psychiatric hospital more than once, you are doing a very good job. Thank you. *hugs*
eowyncat@hotmail.com
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From ANON - raaaasengan22 on December 19, 2006
Okay, ready for my update now. Actually, well, okay, I can wait until after Christmas. I was reading Angel's Touch and it said you updated, but that must have been from a while ago, and I figured you would have told me! Well now that I said that (because it's tradition to bug you!) I'm gonna go try to do some shopping!!!!!!! *HUGS*
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From ANON - Pandora on December 18, 2006
Ahhhh, I love this chapter, moreso than the others~

So emotional... those NejiShika scenes always have me nearing tears ;_;

But the SasuNaru stuff was just as cute, I love how Sasuke was all concerned and posessive.

I'm really, REALLY getting into this fic.
And plus I love talking about this fic with some of my friends who read it too~

In the hallways inbetween our classes, when we see eachother, we go on sometimes like;
"Oh my god! When Naruto tried to kill himself again, I almost cried!" "I really feel sorry for Sasuke though, Going through all that" "I know~ But You have to love and pity Lee, too.. JOYOUS YOUTH!" "I just want to see Neji and Shika happy together..." "Ah~ I love Neji's hair~"

Yup, whenever you update, usually we have squeals of delight from the smut, or all emo-y from the angst.

That conversation is usually with me and my friend Kassi, we both are hooked on your story.

Please update soon~
^___^

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From ANON - Artemis-sensei on December 17, 2006
glad to see everything went well! ^_^ I loved this chapter super much. The locust thing had me laughing all the way to the 'funeral'. XD Just seeing Sasuke freaking out about the locust but trying to act macho... XD And then when Lee came in, I was like...uh oh... And then Shikamaru just casually killing it after all the fuss. *still laughing at the thought*

I'm not a big Shikamaru/Neji fan, but your story makes me love it and I even enjoyed that little lemon. Hope for more soon. ^_^ *have to go work on the next chapter of my story now to. ^^'*
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From ANON - Breanna on December 10, 2006
Im pretty sure this story is too awesome for it's own good, lol. Seriously. I absolutely love it. Need updates though. :]
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From ANON - MiniMew on December 03, 2006
I've just been on a two weeks (sunny) vacation, and now I come home to this. Aah, life's good.
This chapter is as awesome as ever. Great barthroom scene by the way! ^^I just love your style of writing. It gives me delicious goosebumps. *shivers*
This is actually the first time, I've EVER read Neji/Shika, I just realized! Not that I don't like the characters, but I've never seen this pairing before I started reading your story. Now I adore it! How do you do it?! It's amazing! *Gets stars in eyes*. Can I worship you?

~A tanned and happy MiniMew
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From ANON - yaoilover914 on November 30, 2006
wow that was really really good!!!!!!!!! i love this story so much!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - ladygizarme on November 29, 2006
Omg! Idk if you�ve noticed my absence as I�ve been horribly horribly sick with pregnancy, but I�m back (mostly�well, shouldn�t have anymore trips to the hospital at least, until �the big day� but still can�t get online as much as I used to, but anyway..) and FINALLY getting to catch up!! So, here goes for the last 2 chapters (typing this while I�m reading): omg! Such bad timing kiba, you�re lucky you made it to your cleaning alive!! But damn, Naruto walking in on Sasuke still getting himself off and how Sasuke got him goin� again, hot DAMN that was great! I�m so happy they finally got off together! If shika had interrupted them again someone woulda DIED lmao! Ah, and everything they did for kiba�s party was so sweet, and I totally giggled with how lee got kiba excited about washing his hands lol but gasp! Kiba saw Sasuke and Naruto being affectionate and where the fuck did Sasuke come up with his trees analogy? Lmao!! Lee�s explanation by hand gestures made me totally giggle, and naruto�s reactions were hilarious too XD but it�s nice it�s not a secret, at least to the roommates anymore� Naruto asking shika for advice was kinda cute lol, and the lil mention of Sasuke singing a lullaby to kiba gave me hearteyes ^__^ and omg, when the fact of tenten carefully putting the sharp knife down was specifically mentioned, I just KNEW it�d be left behind and Naruto would find it!!! I KNEW it!! *SOB* and reading about the change go through Naruto, how he was conscious for it this time but couldn�t do anything about it.. I could feel how scared he was, and held my breath until he was finally able to get Sasuke to notice!! And god, then I had to hold my breath again when Sasuke started freaking out in his mind from the thoughts of it always being knives and blood� poor Sasuke! I mean, jeez, poor Naruto also obviously, but damn is sasuke gonna be messed up from this too.. at least he was somewhat comforted by realizing Naruto knew this time and there�s hope for him! and awwww for Shizune and shika doing what needed done to help Sasuke and keep him from freakin out more, especially awwww for shika�s hand in it, that was very sweet.. now to the next chap..

Ok so first off, aah I wanna know what lee�s phobia is too! And lmao, tenten knows, I loved Naruto blushing �twelve shades of fuchsia� haha, greatness.. ack but stupid Naruto has to go and think he has to leave Sasuke so he doesn�t LEAVE him leave him *sobsob* good goin on convincing him otherwise Sasuke lol (and as hot as that was, what Sasuke said was even more meaningful) and almost even better was Naruto returning the bj gesture despite his germaphobicness, AND sasuke�s reaction! XD oh yeah, is lee�s phobia just that he can�t take meds? He�s scared of the meds in general, or how they affect him or what? *scratches chin* I suppose if that�s an issue of his, it shall be addressed further.. omg, oh lmao, oh roflmao the whole locust episode, hahahahahaha!!! That was freakin hilarious, leave it to shika to take care o� business while the boys contemplate the thing lol! Poor lee and not getting to name it before shika �murdered� it (heh) And yayayayaaaaay!! Shika and neji got to see each other (and *ahem* SEE each other) again!! Ahh *happy sigh* that was so sweet, and nice of Shizune to set things up for privacy lol, ah they�re so sweet together, thinking of shika crying when he had to leave makes me wanna cry too! But alas, thinking this story will be over in only 5 chaps makes me want to cry more, it�s so good I don�t want it to end! *sigh* but I know it has to eventually ne� so I look forward to watching the rest unfold!!! As always, love it, keep it up, you rock ^__~

~ lg

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From ANON - innerchild on November 26, 2006
omg, i loved the bathroom scene. i read it twice it was soo good. and the bit with neji and shikamaru always makes me want to tear up. it was sweet and angsty, and i loved it. i can't wait until you guys update!

-inc
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From ANON - Steph on November 26, 2006
I was so close to bawling when Neji and Shika said they loved each other. This chapter was so pretty.
Lee and the locust made me laugh my ass off. The fact that he's an ultra-rapid cycler amuses me to no end. But "just bipolar"? Every mental illness is bad and scary and rough in its own ways. Still, awesome work.
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From ANON - Hellagoddess on November 26, 2006
Oh...and Lee with the locust was the funniest thing i have ever read...you have him so in character i'm having touble believing you didn't create him...
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From ANON - Hellagoddess on November 26, 2006
Oh god...the NejixShika...i'm actually crying. How heartbreaking. For them to feel like that and be apart...not knowing when they'll see each other again... god it just rips my soul out...

Wonderful that you've updated. I'd be more enthusiastic (considering i actually got up from my computer and did a little dance when i saw there was a new chapter) but i'm quite sad from the last section. Amazing story and great to see it progressing again. Please keep updating regulary...it makes me sad not to know what's going to happen. ( i don't ever want this story to end...)

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From ANON - americanXminority on November 25, 2006
Oh my gawd!!
That was so fucking GREAT!
Now, I'm a HUGE SasuNaru fan...but that whole NejiShika portion was fantastic!!
I cried like such a little girl and loved every minute of it.
Ku-fucking-dos on NejiShika lovin' in this fic.
Also, I thank you [you know I and the other readers appreciate it, of course ^_^] for updating again.
I honestly cannot wait to read the rest.
I'm extremely excited X3.
Love you guys.
:D
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