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Reviews for The Top Floor

By : mirandler43
  • From ANON - kaiswings on July 19, 2006
    Akkk Nooo ...wait im not sure what happend...did he attack naruto? but neways great story so far i want it to be Sasukes evauation so we can see more into his mind...and what type of pills he has to take OR he may go all crazy uciha style on Nejis ass muhahahahahahah!

    love

    Kaiswings
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  • From ANON - Cindy on July 19, 2006
    I just can't say enough how nicely written this is and how unique it is for the Naruto FanFic genre.

    I feel like I have a novel in my hands. It has a potential for character exploration that the traditional ninja stories (which I love too, of course) don't. I am holding my breathe to see where you go with it.

    Thanks for yout time and talent! :)
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  • From ANON - Briryan on July 19, 2006
    Wow this is getting good. Can't wait to find out what happenes.
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  • From ANON - kyuubigirl on July 19, 2006
    Eep! Oh I liked this so much, I am so sad it only has 2 chapters. I like this idea, and I actually haven't read any other stories like this. And I kept thinking of Girl, Interrupted the entire time. (Gee, I don't know why.) But Naruto is exactly what I would expect! I like how you made him the seemingly calm, normal one but inside he's probably the craziest one of them all. I also like how Sasuke's kind of the outsider, and it's easy to see why he gravitates toward Naruto! Gosh I love Naruto in this! I really like all the characters.

    And yes, it's already dark, and what's cool is that you're being subtle about what's "wrong" with each boy. You're showing and not telling! That's good, yay! Aww, but poor Naruto, I could just feel it click when Sasuke said Neji looked like he was trying to kill him. Why Uchiha, why put ideas in that cute boy's head? But I am so interested in seeing where this goes! I hope you update soon (the both of you!) Sigh...
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  • From ANON - Sin on July 19, 2006
    Awesome. That was totally wonderful. Good writing skills and over all effect. I totally love it more then words and can't wait for more! ^^ Good job.
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on July 19, 2006
    the first evil cliffie! damn i wonder what the hell neji had in his hand or what naruto did to make him leave the room. the part with kiba and neji was pretty funny. i would've thrown the frisbie at him too. you two are doing great so far. your grammar and spelling is fine and the flow and length of your chapters are great. ^__^ see ya next time.

    ~Devious
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  • From ladygizarme on July 18, 2006
    loved chapter two, too... the interaction between naruto and kiba is very sweet.. and yes sasuke really isn't acting himself is he.. i wonder when we'll find out more about his problems.. and neji! yikes! did sasuke's remark about neji looking like he was going to kill him put the idea in naruto's head to make him do just that? or was that all something else? kyaaa i can't wait for the next chapter! *bounces with impatience*
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  • From ANON - Pho on July 18, 2006
    I think this story has a lot of potential. I wanna know why Sasuke's there. Tell me! Tell me! Good job so far, and I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - dancingkitsune on July 17, 2006
    I like this so far, please continue ^ ^
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  • From ladygizarme on July 17, 2006
    very interesting start, i like the characters you've put together and each of their characteristics so far that have landed them in the top floor of the mental institution.. i'm eager to see more of everyone, especially naruto and what sasuke is in for.. i can't wait to read more!!
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  • From ANON - Cindy on July 17, 2006
    UNIQUE! Well written and leaving me wanting more. :D
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  • From ANON - Gazette on July 17, 2006
    I like your writing style~ :d

    You're the one that reviewed me, rite? Thnx~ Very first reviewer! Um...for the amount of chapters, I'm not sure yet...Probably around five chapters. I'll try to update soon~
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on July 17, 2006
    poor babes. i'm very interested in finding out the others backgrounds. nice work. looking foward to your next update.
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  • From ANON - Uke on July 17, 2006
    I want chapter two!!!
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  • From ANON - Drakend4 on July 17, 2006
    AWESOME! this soooo Good. please continue.
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