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Reviews for The Top Floor

By : mirandler43
  • From ANON - Houseki on August 09, 2006
    woot finished chap two and still loving it! big thanks to ladygizarme who mentioned your story to me today ^__^ i love the interaction between kiba and naruto, it's too adorable. neji vs sasuke.. not surprising :p now, shika/neji that's an unusual pairing..cute in this story though ^___~

    So when do we learn more of Sasuke's past? Soon I hope! mm on to the next chap!

    Houseki
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  • From Houseki on August 09, 2006
    Nyaa! I just started reading this and I almost cried in the first chap!! The scene w/ Kiba trying to take the blame for Naruto so he didn't have to go...so sad! I can't wait to see who all else is in the institute with the boys...this could get interesting nfufufu.

    Keep it up! *on to the next chap!*

    Houseki
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  • From ANON - dengrymme on August 09, 2006
    I really like the way you write, that you write about very sad things, and also very funny things. I really laughed when I read this chapter, and I really looking forward to the next one. It will be fun to get to know the new patient ^_^ Anyway, very good fic so far! Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Kedo on August 09, 2006
    Good chapter, again. ^^
    Still.. I want more Neji. Altought this is a SasuNaru fic, but still. xDD
    So.. I'm waiting the next chapter.. And Make it sooon.
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  • From ANON - Fuyu ni Kodomo on August 09, 2006
    Oh my GOD!
    Lee?!

    xD Thats great, oh man I can just FEEL this getting better and better by the moment.

    Aw.. poor Sasuke though, but yay for him and Naruto getting closer~

    I almosted cried at the part where the fanart took place ;_; so emotional.

    Please update soon~~
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  • From ANON - Briryan on August 09, 2006
    Great chapter!) Poor Sasuke. Hope he gets better soon. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Looking forward to reading how they react to the new person and finding out why he is there!P
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  • From ANON - CJ on August 02, 2006
    I can't remember if I reveiwed for this already or not...but I will now:) I'm loving this story...it's sad that Shika and Neji are being seperated though :'( Hope to see more of this story later, I'm looking forward to finding out why exactly Sasuke is there...he doesn't really seem to be showing many signs of mental illness.
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  • From ANON - dancingkitsune on July 31, 2006
    i feel so bad fer all of them.......i cant imagine having to deal with that...like, one friend nearly dead, one friend in handcuffs for nearly killing previous friend, one friend stops takign their medications and goes completely off the hook, and one friend sad and uncompriehending.........that really sucks..........

    and if yer horrible fer finding that little skit funny, then i must be sick fer finding it hallarious xDD;;;;;;
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  • From ANON - Germaine(too damn lazy to sign in) on July 30, 2006
    Damn, this is such a good fanfic...I just totally LOVED the ShikaNejiShika fluff in this chapter... Never really cared for that paring before...Anwyay, great chapter! I know it's hard to write stuff like this together with someone else who doesn't live to close to you so I really admire you guys!

    keep the good times rolling!

    hugs n'love

    germaine
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  • From ANON - CJ on July 30, 2006
    That was sooo sad :( Please update soon, I'm anxious to see what happens
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  • From ANON - Ningi on July 29, 2006
    Umm... hi! I've been reading the fic since you started, but chapter three inspired me to draw! It's not very good, but since I'm one of those bad readers who rarely leaves reviews, I thought this would be nice too. I figured it be nice to let you know that your fic inspired someone. ^^;;;

    http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b32/ningiakimbo/naruto_thetopfloor_blue.gif

    Great work and lots of love,
    Ningi
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 28, 2006
    this is so my favourite story on this site....do NOT stop writing it!
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  • From ANON - Briryan on July 28, 2006
    Wonderfull chapter!) Looking forward to reading more of this story!
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  • From ANON - Tora on July 28, 2006
    woo excellent job guys ^-^...hope to see updates soon >.> just don't take forever getting to teh gewd Naru/Sasu parts...ne? w00t!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 28, 2006
    First of all *HUGE SQUEAL* I actually have tears in my eyes either because I'm that happy a third chapter was up or because I just woke up or it was that intense and pleased me very much. I'd been thinking about this story the last couple days figuring you two might update soon. And then there it was, first story at the top! I am in love. I love Naruto and Sasuke in this, I just adore what you're doing. And I loved how Kiba attached himself to Sasuke. Then, that scene with Naruto, and I felt guilty that I loved that they got a chance to be alone! And it was so so touching. And then you broke it up with the manhandling comment. It was so realistic and sweet and blah. And I liked Naruto's blushing and how he was angry Sasuke got to see his file. I loved all these things, it was done just right! But I'm starting to wonder if Sasuke really doesn't have a problem or maybe he's got a really bad one that he doesn't realize is bad because he thinks he's normal? I can't wait for him to open up to Naruto! And for Naruto to get back! Aww And Shika and Neji, I find that pairing unusual (for me to read) but that scene about ripped my heart out. Thank you for making it so long that it didn't feel rushed or neglectful of loose ends. I so want more, this is totally one of my faves to keep an eye on!

    And that little thing at the end cracked me up! You're not the only one who thought it was funny XD He's trying, he's trying!
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