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By : mirandler43
  • From ANON - kaze uzumaki on August 11, 2006
    your story is awesome plz continue
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  • From ANON - losthimagain on August 10, 2006
    O.O Oh god! RUN AWAY! You brought Lee in?! *faints* What's he going to suffer from? Do I even want to know? Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Rasengan22 on August 10, 2006
    I feel...so...emotional now. How could you do this to me? Guzzah. I feel, uh, depressed? Bah, that chapter was so good and so long. Ok, right, the reviewing part. I'm glad Naruto's back, and my heart got all fluttery when Kiba called the sock monkey Nar-Nar. And I like how Naruto got possessive over Kiba, because well, if Naruto's like 14 then he's not this supper Buddha on the mountaintop that he sort of is pretending to be (I mean, hello, he's crazy), so I like that he got mad. He's not perfect. Yes, I know he tries to kill himself, but still, someone's gotta kinda be the alpha male when boys become a pack. (what? i don't know what i'm saying). And finally, Sasuke goes nutso. And I can't say, why didn't he go nutso before because you gave him the trigger of the news story. That scares me that he freaks out when any sort of projectile reminds him of a knife--and it's even more interesting that he sees Itachi attacking Naruto. And the subtle things that you're writing between Sasuke and Naruto... the smiles, the looks, the hugs, whatever, they're very wonderful for building said relationship--Gosh I loved the part where at one point Sasuke was reassuring Naruto that he shouldn't feel bad about Neji and then it flips and Naruto's telling Sasuke not to feel guilty. This is the part that made me feel weird, because my last two years of college I had a similar relationship with a friend, where I was messed up and so was she--and when you get people together with sorta psychological problems they feed off each other. One will sort of get excited when one of them... loses it, because that one can feel better about themselves (secretly), while the other one gets excited from the attention and their own self destructive behavior. And if one is sort of on a downward spiral, the other one might sort of follow--out of guilt or something... I don't know if that's true about all of it, but if you do more research as their relationship progresses... it seems Naruto and Sasuke could sort of save each other or they could both sort of fall even further into their illnesses. Makes for dark stuff. *GAH* That's why I was depressed, but good story, sorry to blather on... and I'll be interested to know what you do with Lee... he'll probably make it lighter, but it looks like he might get on everyone's nerves. I'm curious as to why you chose him... though he poses no threat to interfering with any "relationships." And damn Shizune for being such a psychologist, they're always like, just practice yoga and medicate yourself and you'll be fine. Guh, not that simple. And I'm waiting for Kiba to go nutso on Naruto or Sasuke. ANGST! i need some air. I friggin' love your story so much.
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  • From ANON - Punkin02 on August 09, 2006
    Well, now we know why Sasuke's there. At least he didn't hurt anyone with his...outburst.
    Oh no...Lee is going to be their new roommate?!?! This could get interesting.
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  • From ANON - Shadow Walker on August 09, 2006
    OMG LEE!!!!!!!! That was just too funny! I love your fic and the way you've written the guys are believeble, can't wait until the next chappie! Anyway, what is Lee going to be?
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  • From ANON - Fatkat on August 09, 2006
    Omg. I know already, it's Lee right? If it is you've got yourself a loyal reader and reveiwer. :D You have no idea the kind of fan I am of him. D: So many stories leaving him and gai-sensei out of. xD

    The stories good so far, The sasuke hallusanating was cool, D: But he made Kiba confused. >> That's all I have to say...
    No wait,

    You better update or I wont like you anymore,

    Peer pressure, is it working?

    I give up,
    Please update.
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  • From ANON - Jay on August 09, 2006
    Yay Chapter! I love you peoples and your story. GO YOU. Can't wait for more, cause let's face it. this ROCKS!
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  • From ANON - Germaine(too damn lazy to sign in) on August 09, 2006
    OH NOOOOOES! (hehe nose...*poke* *poke*)
    Not Lee! YUUUCKY! oh well, I guess you could call him crazy...

    Love the fic so far...I'm quite happy with the fact that it's not a pointless fic with just a load of lemon or/and fluff... I LOVE YOU FOR MAKING SOMETHING WORTH READING! I miss the fanfics that you could just read for hours and hours and somehow you never got bored! You're fic is one of those...even though it was 22 pages I think I read it in like...half an hour...And I'm a slow reader so that's fantastic!

    Continue soon!

    Hugs n'love Germaine
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  • From ANON - Rei on August 09, 2006
    Oh god its just ahd to be Lee!
    whats going on with Neji?
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  • From ANON - loveless on August 09, 2006
    LEE in a mental hospital?????? Thats funny! Great chaptet, its great that sasuke has finally opened up. Itz sweet that he was thinkinhg about naruto but poor kiba was the one attacked! please update when you can!
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  • From ANON - yaoigurl91 on August 09, 2006
    WOW! LEE? i cant wait to see what happens next. things are going to be more crazy then it used to be! Please update when you can and great job on the last chapter it was very long!
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  • From ANON - Houseki on August 09, 2006
    Oh good god...LEE?!?!?! wow....things are going to get a bit more....crazy, ne? and yeah, wow...this was a long chap..go you two! woot! hehe ahh finally sasuke breaks down..good for him, bout time we see his bit. poor kiba though...pretty sad that he had to take it out on him. but tooooootally kawaii that he was only thinking of naruto when it was happening. he *hearts* naruto sooooooooooo much
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  • From Trollmia on August 09, 2006
    Of course I'm still on board... Had a touch of seasickness... but now I'm good again.. *lol*
    Yeah, that was one hell of a long chapter... And a good one too. I don't mind waiting if the chapters look like this in the future too :) *winks*
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  • From ANON - Houseki on August 09, 2006
    Emotional rollercoaster much? hehe wow...such drama. gotta love it! i love how protective sasuke became of kiba after being there for only a few days. poor shika though, man. he totally loves neji and you take him away??!! how cold! lol i hope he visits often ^__^ does this mean they might get a new roommate as well?? hmmmmm *taps chin* *cocks eyebrow* guess i'll have to wait and find out, ne? *shrugs* ah well...time to hit chap 4! keep it up! love it!

    Houseki
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  • From ladygizarme on August 09, 2006
    ah! you got fanart, that's awesome!! and since i have permission to say it again *lol* this story is awesome, i love it so!! the mental institute theme is one of my latest 'things' when it comes to naruto ficcage, and yours is the one i look forward to the most, it's like the most original of the AU-setting ones.. and this chapter was awesome! and loooong!! *sooo happy*

    so, yay! naruto's back! i knew shika would be upset w/him still, but i'm glad he still understands naruto couldn't really help it... and things got a lil heavy with naru coming back and being jealous of sasuke having 'been in charge' basically of kiba while he was gone.. tis understandable ne, but i'm glad it didn't escalate too much :) shika and kiba conspiring together in order to keep the peace was cute/funny, and then sasuke looking at him suspicious after tenten's remark made me giggle..

    and yay, sasuke had an episode in front of naruto! (wow am i messed up or what.. poor sasuke but.. i was looking forward to such a situation *looks sheepish*) *loved* the bit of SasuNaru fluff :D and can't wait for more as things progress!!

    and LMAO for lee being their new roommate, ohhh i HAFTA see how this goes XD

    and.. lol i totally forgot to say last time, but the little IM thing about naruto tryin to be killed by neji was funny.. and the thing this time also made me giggle.. well, it's good not to be TOOOOO serious all the time, esp with a 'serious' subject matter, ya gotta lighten up at least every so often right?!

    anyway, can't wait for next chap!

    ~ lg
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