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Reviews for The Top Floor

By : mirandler43
  • From ANON - Anon on September 11, 2006
    LOL like hardcore. Ok, first off, competition with ff? Yeah, good luck. This is an "18 and above sight" (yeah, right), and ff is filled with lovely, uh, much younger people. So, you should be proud that we (old, seniles) have reviewed as much as we have! Hehe. *Goes to eat prunes* Ugh, this makes me feel lousy this time you updated so fast? Well-planned plot my ass, it'll be next year before I'm happy w/ the next chapter thanks to our pep talk! Yack, don't wanna think about it, but thank you for the plug.

    Ok, story, right. Awww. And you switched perspectives which was different than usual. I liked the opportunity of following Kiba and Shika more closely, but can I just tell you... oh that scene with Sasu and Naru. Ugh, if it was possible, tightening of the pants would have been an issue for me. Gosh, and I'm rarely "turned on" by stories, but I was like yikes, cold shower, party of 1. Ugh, and then Shika interrupted it? Damn him! OMG, but then that Sasuke finished while the other two were out there and he walks out all relaxed. That is SO Sasuke. I did also like the scene at group, as well as the scene before it when they're eating cereal. It was so easy to picture and was very fun. I like how you write them as mature boys, but at the same time, they still act around the 14 or whatever age they are. *Growl* though, too bad Sasuke's off limits cuz the boy is hawt. He always says just the right thing, so I can see how Naruto can't really control himself. They are so super cute together. But I thought Neji's letter was sooo sweet, but not fluffy at all and it broke my heart because I was like, what if that happened to Sasuke and Naruto? But it better not, or I shall kick you like a bad drug habit. *oh squee* It was angst free for the most part, and I am appeased w/ the lovely SasuNaru bits (but ack, I hope Naru didn't have a hard on problem when he gave Kiba a hug). That would be awkward. LOL!
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  • From ANON - Briryan on September 11, 2006
    Great chapter!) Very funny with Lee giving Kiba the Heimlich maneuver,. even after the fact that what was caught was freed. Yay finally heard from Neji!! Glad to hear that he is doing well. I wonder though what Neji would think of Lee. Do you have any plans on having Neji come back? Looking foward to the next update. Oh ya, good luck with getting the more reviews!P
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  • From ANON - MiniMew on September 11, 2006
    Yeah, it's me again. You see, I forget to tell, I found this side: http://www.psychiatry24x7.com/
    It's a good site, if you're running out on information about the disordes. I just thought I'd let you know. =^.^=

    ~MiniMew, still running for water
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  • From ANON - MiniMew on September 11, 2006
    It's me again! You'll never EVER be free of me! *Cough* The humour you promised was definietly (is that spelled right? o.O) there. Never thought I should say this but, LOL! And when Shika got Neji's letter... You gyus make me feel so warm and fuzzy on the inside... I just went 'Awwwwwww'. Great writing as usual, a couple of minor details missing (It was a comma. Yeah, I notice these kind of things. -.-;), but just great. I promise I'll let you know if something seems out of hand. *Nods*. And people's gotta start rewieving some more!!! XD
    Now, I've got to get some water, I feel a headache coming (I've been plagued by it for THREE DAYS now!! Feel sorry for me...*sob*).
    Till then

    ~MiniMew, running after water and a headache pill
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  • From ANON - Rei on September 11, 2006
    Finally!!!
    and it was well worth the wait.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 10, 2006
    nice.
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  • From ANON - LemonsLuver on September 10, 2006
    OMG THIS is like the best Mental story I've ever read. Even though I've only read three good ones, this story is at my top. I just couldn't stop reading it. I was up until 3am finishing the last chapter. O o O I wanna be one of the people who knows when you are gonna update the story I'd totally will be waiting XD! I really like the whole stories plot and theme. I'm actually glad you didn't put Gaara into the plot(well he was) becuz as much as I love Gaara, he just doesn't talk, and the fact that he had personality changes, seeing Gaara bouncing around is just creepy. And I LOVE Lee in this story,I just can't get enough of his Youthful energy XD! and kiba is just adorible. Hehehe when I was reading the pervious chapters, Naruto should be Kiba's 'Mom' and Sasuke his 'Dad' (hehehe my little mind is playing with me, thats wut they(sasu and naru acted towards Kiba)) WOW this is the longest review I've ever made on AFF.net. That is a very good sign,the more I review the better I like the Story/chapter. OK enough of my babbling can't wait for the next chapter. XD
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  • From ANON - yuki on September 09, 2006
    scary but good.
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  • From ANON - Steph on September 08, 2006
    It hits home (if you would like further details, e-mail me). I will continue reading.
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  • From ANON - yuri-chan on September 06, 2006
    Awww. So sweet, like sugar-overdose sweet. XD *luffs you guysh* XD
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  • From ANON - Raine Mizukage on September 05, 2006
    OMG I LUV THIS STORY!!! Kiba's hilarious ("HE'S NOT TALKING!") LOL!!!, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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  • From ANON - Donedin on September 04, 2006
    Ok, your story is really really REALLY good, I emencely enjoyed the Lee thing, but now he is kinda getting annoying! lol. Anyhoo just wanted to say that I am really impressed with your work and can't wait for more! ^_^
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  • From ANON - myloveforyou on September 02, 2006
    Oh I love this story soo much you guys are such good writes!! Please E-mail me when you get the next one out I would be so happy!!
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  • From ANON - MiniMew on September 02, 2006
    Here I go again! They finally kissed! Aaaw, cute. And Sasuke being molested. *grins*
    As before amazing story. You still keep very much on line with the factual. And how Naruto reacted when he thought Sasuke and the others soon were going to leave him, was a usual (as scary as I think it is) reaction, as mental interrupted people often is afraid to be left or have things changed. Very good description. You still have the power to drag me in and see the things happening. I just... Great. It's great. *faints*. I hope to read the next chapter soon enough. And I'm looking forward to that humour you promised *evil grin*.
    'Till then!

    ~MiniMew
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  • From ANON - Pandora on September 02, 2006
    Aw... when Naruto was about to lower his head into the water, oh the emotions T-T
    I almost *cried* xD
    Poor Naruto... I honestly feel sorry for him, but hopefully now that there's some SasuNaruness going on, things will pick up~ ;3

    I'd love that email notification on updates, so I can read it as soon as possible ^__^
    Cause I really love this story, how you portray the characters, the emotional roller coasters, and the written details~

    Please update soon ^_^

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