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By : mirandler43
  • From ANON - Teaspoon on September 12, 2006
    I can't wait to see what happens next! lol I just wanted an excuse to post in here. Go AFF REVIEWERS!!! Anyway, I'm concerned about Sasuke's progress and how long he'll actually stay in the place. I'm also concerned about Shicka adn Neji. Will Neji ever come back? Don't get me rrong I like Lee and want to keep him, but I miss Neji :( ANyway AFF! AFF! AFF!
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  • From ANON - myloveforyou on September 12, 2006
    This was so good. I love this story so much. I feel bad for neji and shika though. Kepp up the good work!!
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  • From ANON - Nadezhda on September 12, 2006
    Omg! A competition! For that I will reveiw this chapter! *does a nice guy pose* 'sides, I have a grudge against ff.net from back when I was like... 12 or something. I totally don't remember what it was for, but you can count on my reveiws to back you up here!

    Uh, anyway... Lovely story. Very original plotline! When I first read about this story, I wasn't sure I'd read it or like it, since it was a bit... AU, ya know? Like, more AU than most AU fics. But then I started reading, and all my preconceptions melted away and my appreciation grew along with the characterization of your most wonderfully written Naruto kids. I love this story now! Oh gosh! Can't think of anything more to say! So I'll leave!
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  • From ANON - Nao-chan on September 12, 2006
    -sob- I wanted Neji to come back~
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  • From ANON - EG2 on September 12, 2006
    I LOVE this fic, it is sooo cute!!! I know you guys are busy with school/ work, but know that it makes my day to see an update to this fic. Keep up the good work =)
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  • From ANON - lone-lycan on September 12, 2006
    Ha Ha that's funny. I picked up this story from rasengan's plugs. Anyway I've to love this story. It's just to hilarious to stop reading. But I'm dying to know, where the heck did kiba come up with the name Nar-Nar!?
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  • From ANON - sadistickiss on September 12, 2006
    *dopey smile* The end of every chapter of this fic always leaves me feeling really happy ^^ Like I've been swimming in cotton or something else equally strange. I'd just like to thank you for updating, and hug you until you're purple for being the utter most fantastic author(s) ever XP. This chapter was hilarious ^^ Ooh~it was also kinda hot ='x'= Kya, thanks so much for updating, do it again soon =P!
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  • From ANON - lilly-chan on September 12, 2006
    Wheee! another chapter! *bounces around the room*
    Shika, walking in on them... *giggles* I'm pretty sure my face turned red just reading that.^^;
    Man, where the hell did they put Neji? It sounds violent O_O *worries about Neji's *cough*sexy*cough* hair*
    ~Lilly
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  • From ANON - Me Loves You on September 12, 2006
    Okay, You are totally gods. Like seriously, Gods! I love this story to death and you wrote it so it makes you all special somehow. Lol. I love the whole SasuNaru scene and let's just call it DAMN HOT. GO YOU. Neji's write was another awesome part to the chapter, it worked really well and such. NOW, With the table scene I was laughing so hard because I could really see that happening. So what does this all equal? AWESOME! lol. Keep up the great work and everything, can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Pumpkin. on September 12, 2006
    Oh yeah!
    You updated again. Good chapter.
    Is it possible that Neji could visit Shika sometime.. The letter was good.
    I hope you update soon again.
    Go NejiShika and SasuNaru! And Kiba and Lee, too!
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  • From ladygizarme on September 12, 2006
    yesssss!! *glomps you both* on their way to bigger and naughtier things i see!! sweetness ^__^ i just love it so much, the way you described everything between them, so new and experimental and exhilarating!! i can't wait to watch things progress even more. also the song in group made me giggle.. i feel like a dork, knowing it from the first verse.. even more of a dork knowing i'd be snorting and reading begrudgingly like sasuke and shika on the outside, but singing like kiba on the inside if i had to read it lmao oh yeah, and kiba's whole 'see fire engine toy that makes noise, chase boy to take toy, get caught up in chase w/hospital staff' was funny.. i wonder how quickly they actually found him.. and if the lady ratted him out when they finally came in the room :p yeah so anyway, glad the new chap came out, LOVED it, don't worry if it takes a little longer between updates (as update-hungry as i am, i'm not one to talk about updates taking a long time :p so nya)

    oh yeah and on a final note: yay, letter from neji!! aww, neji saying he fought to keep his hair, cuz it was one of shika's favorite things, that made me teary.. i hope shika can write him back!!

    ~ lg
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  • From ANON - Artemis-sensei on September 12, 2006
    O.O

    And apparantly I'm not the only person that calls myself Artemis here. Soooo...hee hee. I'll start referring to myself as Artemis-sensei. k? ^_^ Hope that makes it less confusing.
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  • From ANON - Artemis on September 12, 2006
    Glad I amused you. ^__^ Anyways, god I love this story. I loved the Sasuke fake sleeping thing. It made me laugh cause it reminds me of how I'll run off and pretend to sleep when my little cousins go all crazy. I was starting to worry about Shika/Neji, but the letter at the end was a nice addition. And god, Shika walking in on Naruto and Sasuke. Ha ha. ^_^ The toy story song...god I was laughing the first time Shika read it. I can't believe I loved that song to. So mushy... XP

    Can't wait for the update, and it almost seemed for a moment like Sasuke was retreating to his uncontrolled emotion moment there at the beginning of the story. But anyways, the chaos from beginning to end was beautifuly played. Well done and update again soon! ^_^
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  • From ANON - yaoigoddess on September 11, 2006
    WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH NEJIIIIIII!!!
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  • From ANON - hanyou-elf on September 11, 2006
    thank you so much for the email about the new chapter, it definitely helped after a long day of school that sucked (and still isn't over... not for another three hours...) i'm glad you liked the review, and i meant everythng i said in it. you are both amazing authors and i loved reading the new chapter. i was, and am continually impressed with the level of work that i see here. it's amazing what you both are able to accomplish with your words. you make me flow along with the characters and expirience what it is they are going through. not many authors are capable of that and i love your stories. you both are amazing and i love this story. i anticipate the next update soon... (hopefully)

    now, about the story, i love lee like this. it's highly amusing to see him fluctuating so severely from happy to depressed, and how about that... falling into shika's care. i love that! it's so cute! (huggles lee) but i have to say the interaction between sasuke and naruto was absolutely delicious. i loved their almost journey into citrus fruit (so close... so close) you've done an amazing job with their characters, with the work needed to write and create this story as well as you have. you've impressed me with your story and i love it. and, aww, i'm glad to see shika happy. he deserves a little happiness in the midst of it all, and separation from neji has to be hard. how is that going to affect his relationship with lee (not romantically or anything, but as a friend) i notice his continuing to warm up to lee, but with this letter from neji, will he be friendlier, or will it make him curl into himself as he remembers their time (limited though it may be)?

    gah... i love this story. good luck with all of your busy school and work life. i know you'll need it. please, keep writing, take care of yourselves, and update soon!

    ja ne!
    ~hanyou-elf
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