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Reviews for The Top Floor

By : mirandler43
  • From yersifanel on October 07, 2006
    Your story is very orifinal and I find it very interesting, I am still sad for what happen to Neji, you see, I like him a lot and you ShikaNeji paring is cool, but poor Neji... I want him back!!! *sob,sob* I wonder what will happen to him in the future.... NEJI!!!! *sob, whimper, SOB* Anywat, cool story.
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  • From ANON - Vincent Valentine on October 06, 2006
    that chapter was definitely worth the wait-but i cant help wundering, does kyuubi have anything to do with Naruto's sudden suicidal episodes???
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  • From ANON - americanXminority on October 05, 2006
    I'm a nazi...and have to point out that YES I typo'd and am NOW correcting it...
    I meant to say "...just don't keep US waiting for months and months at a time."
    That is all....sorry x_x.
    I love this fic, yo...
    *Shifty eyes*........
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  • From ANON - americanXminority on October 05, 2006
    *Flails uncontrolably*
    Holy shiza.
    Seriously, I love you guys for writing this fic.
    I *heart* angst mixed in with humour and love!
    It makes for a lovely cocktail, no?
    Haha, so yeah ummmm...don't stress too much about updating all the time.
    Your [you and KandKL] life is important.
    Just....don't keep up waiting for like months and months at a time.
    It'd KILL us, lol.
    I honestly CANNOT wait for more, but I'm gunna have to, huh...:P.
    Keep up the kickass writing, and I'll keep with the reading and reviewing thing.
    :D
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  • From ANON - yaoigoddess99@hotmail.com on October 05, 2006
    ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! the story is so good- it keeps getting better and better! NARUTO *cries* i feel so bad for him, not to mention Sasuke! >.<

    So i decided to tell you that everytime i check me email i look for the update and when i find it i drop what im doing and read. Makes me sounds....erm, like im in need of a life? but i thought i just had to tell you that your story has drawn me in that much, lol.

    Keep up the great writing ^^
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  • From ANON - Miko hanyou on October 05, 2006
    Thank you for putting this chapter up, i was wondering if you gonna update it or abandon it. Post the chapter soon! You rock!
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  • From ANON - Briryan on October 05, 2006
    Loved this chapter!) You are forgiven!P Poor little Naruto so close that time. Kiba didn't even know what he was doing. Hehe. That was some fast party set-up. Kiba was so cute during the party, too. Yay for Naruto in getting somewhat control of himself, and for Sasuke for not totally losing it. As for requests, can Neji come back? Looking forward to the next update.
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  • From ANON - Kuu-ish on October 05, 2006
    YOOOSH! Naruto is getting better!! Though there's a large gap between him and Sasuke still.. x_x Hopefully they won't let him leave any time soon? x.x!!

    Great chapter, thanks for updating! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Saphire Dragon on October 05, 2006
    Wow... Let me just say your chapters are very long. A lot of the time when chapters are 'that' long I eventually just start skimming over some paragraphs if they seem boring, however I did not do that with your fic. The plot is great! Oh and by the way, just trying to imagine a laughing Gaara, let alone sickeningly happy go lucky hyper Gaara... whoa. I really did laugh out loud while reading this. Normally its like eruptions of laughter on the inside if I find something funny... But now it was on the outside. I really LOVE your grammer and writting skills! There where only maybe two that I saw throughout the entire fanfiction! I bow to you! I absolutly love it when autors have good writing skills. I really can't wait to read more, I look forward to the plot and thankfully I don't fear for the spelling, grammer, and sentence structure! (
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  • From ANON - Me Loves you on October 04, 2006
    **(Thingy cut my other review off)**

    Stupid question I know, but it had to be asked. I mean, I'm freaking out over here. I might have to read this chapter again, then again, and maybe once more. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS! Anywho, GREAT JOB, LOVED IT, AND PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ANON - Me Loves you on October 04, 2006
    What? I get a reponse just for stating the truth? Well, rock on then. Not only that, but I've pretty much have been reading this from the beginning, just not reviewing. Bad me, I know. Sorry.

    Anywho, We need to like talk about this chapter, now. Seriously, the birthday party was just an awesome thing to through in before what went on with Naruto. Gah, don't even get me started on the detail in this chapter. All the words, actions, scenes; I was like having a heart attack while reading and all I really have to say is: Poor Naruto! I mean, cutting himself with Sasuke right there!? JESUS! I'm going to have to say 'update Please!' other wise I might die.

    I know I said this before, but it's totally got to be true with your talent. YOU.ARE.GOD! Also, Is Naruto gonna be okay?
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  • From ANON - ObsidianLace on October 04, 2006
    How in the HELL have I not seen this story before now! Ya'll made me miss work today just so I could read this thing all the way through. (Well I was sick but I was going to go anyway....wut I was!) I'm not one for long reviews since I'm lazier then Shika, whom I love in this fic.
    Ok so fav parts so far:
    Naruto being a suicidal germaphobe (All this from the guy who drank spoiled milk)
    Shika and Neji's relationship (so heartbreaking)
    Sakura talking to herself (gives a whole new meaning to Inner Sakura)
    Ino introducing herself as other people
    KIBA!!!! (I wanna take him home with me and he shall be my Squishy)
    Sasuke laughing and being human for once
    Naruto and Sasuke's utter need for each other

    You girls really out did yourselves with this one. The characterization is wonderful and makes you really feel for them. (and yes the smexy stuff is hot too *blushes*)
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  • From ANON - Donedin on October 04, 2006
    This was a great chapter, I really enjoyed the nookie! Can't wait for you to post again. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Artemis-sensei on October 04, 2006
    This chapter was awesome. The lime scene was hot. =P And the party was great, and the ending was brilliant. Naruto's healing to! ^^ Lee is great to, I love him lots. And the whole thing with Sasuke trying to explain using trees.....ha ha. ^_^

    *fangirlish squeal* You're reading Angel's Touch!? Yea! Even if you haven't reviewed, just knowing your reading makes me smile. I'm not as good at personality keeping as you are, but I'm glad you seem to like it. *dances merrily*
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  • From ANON - Rei on October 04, 2006
    YAY!

    OK this is sooooooo good
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