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Reviews for The Top Floor

By : mirandler43
  • From ANON - what the hell on October 30, 2006
    Dudes, I'm seriously boycotting this story because it's written by the biggest liarpants in the world! And you know what, when it comes out, I'm reading and reviewing on ff.net! I hate you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Love,
    Rasengan22

    *hugs*
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  • From ANON - innerchild on October 30, 2006
    u just had to stop there, didn't ya?! it was getting so good. gah, i wanna know what happens next! and naruto's getting better! yah! i'm happy for that, and nice job with how they explained they were "together" to kiba. hehe... two trees. sasuke completely lost me on that theory, and himself. the poor guy. anyway, please update soon.

    -inc
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  • From ANON - Auri Kurohoshi on October 28, 2006
    UPDATE ALREADY!!!! IM DYING OF WITH DRAWL!!!!!
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  • From ANON - innerchild on October 25, 2006
    gah, i'm still not done with this story. i hate school... takes away too much time from my reading and writing. the bastards. anyway, i will finish this story soon! cause i really do love it. the relationship between naruto and sauske is so cute, and i like how lee is bipolar.... perfect character for that... mental issue. anyway, i got a question. how old are they? r they 12 or something?

    anyway, i hope this helps you with the review little... competition u got between ur friend. have fun!

    -inc
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 24, 2006
    is there any chance we'll get an update before Halloween?
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  • From ANON - Rasengan22 on October 22, 2006
    Waaah. Traditional whining for update here. Tonight!!! Do it!! You two are so gr8, please keep up the g00d work, upd8 soon!! LOL, did I do that right? oh and this story is so KAWAII!!! i'm such a good fangirl ^_^ but seriously, i'm expecting good, angsty things here with naruto's situation... and as always... i'm curious as to how you're gonna have sasuke react. quite a pivotal chapter probably. no pressure hehe
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  • From ANON - innerchild on October 21, 2006
    i just had to review this chapter 'cause of the little naru and neji scene at the bottom. no, u guys aren't horrible ppl for thinking thats funny... at least i thought it was funny. sorry its taken me so long to finally get a chance to read this story. my stupid computer has been... toying with me. it lost my paper for humanities class, froze every time i touched it, and then kept me up all night buzzing at me.

    it really does hate me. or it did, until i broke the desk its sitting on. maybe i scared it.

    anywho, i love this story so far. now i gotta go finish the next chapters!

    -inc
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  • From ANON - Colleen on October 15, 2006
    Excellent story. Very thoughtfully done and well written.
    Keep up the good work.
    Thank you!
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  • From ANON - yuei on October 14, 2006
    Lol, it's been fun reading this, them in an insane asylm and all, and since you asked for reviews so nicely; its not a problem that you tend to be slow at writing since your writing is so well done, and really you captured them all near perfectly, when you pay close attention it does seem as though they all belong in an insane asylm, even narutos suicidal self seems likely, i mean with as much hate as he gets sure;
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  • From ANON - seraphym on October 12, 2006
    okay, first I have to squeal like a true yaoi fan because this is my favourite fan fic to date! Love love love it! Definitely the best story I've read in a very long long time. I would really love Shika and Neiji together again, but I can almost see and Shika Lee. Naruto and Sasuke need to get it one ASAP! Amazing character development, I am constantly surprised by the twists of the plot, and the interactions of the characters. Can't wait for the updates!
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  • From ANON - kiba1350 on October 10, 2006
    I have to say that i have fallen completely in love with your story and i can't wait to read more. I would appreciate it if you would email me when you make an updatee. Thanks
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  • From ANON - LemonsLuver on October 09, 2006
    TREES?!?!?!?!?! Wow that has got to be the most weird explaination of being 'together' I've ever heard of.
    Omg Lee and Shika trying to teach Kiba whatNaruto and Sasuke were doing, Priceless!
    Kiba was just sooooo CUTE in this chapter >.
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  • From ANON - Fatkat on October 08, 2006
    D: Wow, this chapter was great. Kiba's dream was amusing, and Shikamaru waking him up was even more so. The party was awesome. The way Kiba was all apreciating the smaller things in life. I was so happy for him. Rock Lee was so cool in this chapter, I like the way he helped out, I can't say how much I love your Rock Lee. Wow, the scene with Naruto seeing the knife was all "Kiba knocked it down!" before I even read it, dude, I like how you used it for that scene. You really know how to get the tension rising. I was pratically cussing at the monitor. I was all "SASUKE DO SOMETHING YOU IDIOT!" But that might be because I'm retarded. Anyway, the tension, it had me pulled close up the the monitor, praying that Sasuke would notice in time. Thank god he did, I was getting scared for Naruto. I love the way shikamaru comforted Sasuke like that, it was very sweet.

    D: I just notice I said Like, love and was all in this review.

    Please update, and remember, we're pressuring you to update. PEER PERSURE! D: fall for it this time.
    -grin.-
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  • From ANON - sadistickiss on October 08, 2006
    That was... Ara.. I can't even... You guys're so... I swear I'm your number 1 fan *_*
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  • From ANON - Akuma Nikushimi on October 07, 2006
    That is an wonderful fanfiction and I love the parings...
    its really well thought out but I have to ask
    a personal questin...have you ever been to the hospital
    because the way you describe it is almost the actul way it is...

    I hope Naruto gets better and I can't wait for Niji to come visit...
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