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Reviews for The color of wine and roses

By : maui
  • From GothicLolita13 on March 27, 2008
    This is such an excellent story, you really got into Itachi's head, this is one of the very select few stories based on Itachi between fanfic, and AFF that is actually amazing. I love you writing style, althoug sometimes you can slightly tell it's not your first language I have to say your writing is more eloquent than most english authors out there. Hopefully one day you will update again because I have just been raving about your story to all of my friends and even they are interested to know what is going to happen next!
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  • From SkippingAlice on March 04, 2007
    I love this story! I hope to see an update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - oztan on January 09, 2007
    I like Kakashi & Itachi part. I wonder if Itachi will try it on his Sasuke.
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  • From ANON - DirtyD on November 15, 2006
    I Love the KakashixItachi pairing your story had me going from the first chapter even when it was just an OC, now I crave for another chapter, I hope you do plan to continue this and haven't fallen off the face of the planet.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on November 04, 2006
    More than cool m'dear.Itachi is droll,for a thirteen year old.Kakashi is up for Times,that's f'sure.Update pleeeease.
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  • From ANON - Shosuro on September 29, 2006
    Holy hell! That was hot and interesting! I found it very informing about itachi! I hope you update soon! I will be waiting!
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  • From ANON - XD on September 24, 2006
    ur doing so well for a story with a plot like yours! update soon!!

    but please :
    no kakaita
    oroita is acceptable i guess
    shisui/ita i don't see thatoften so ya
    ita/sasu,ita/naru, akatsuki leader/itachi i'd die for!!
    no kisaita!!! that's just cruel to itachi!

    i'd be happy to see unusual pairings like hidan/itachi too!

    of coarse, like many people say, u don't have to smut in every chapter. but i've always been anticipating some shisuixitachi action. please do it soon!
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  • From ANON - blisblop on September 12, 2006
    this is great you are one of the first to use the lack of characteristics to make a beleivable character.i really love what you have done with Itachi.Incest,well since sasuke seems pretty jealous and Itachi can't go catting around yeah,have sasuke start it.* or ( is hardly an infant,thats when pubery starts in boys so gopher,bt that I mean they can come .Besides,lets face it these ninja kids are way advanced and are hardly treated like children,as unable or febble minded or phycically undeveloped.I have a sasuke fisting Itachi fic and not for revenge either...you can use chakra use,not many do,sexually funny cause most ninja would feel crippled with no chakra.Shi....his reactions,his refusal of his cousin is really cruel and I'm confused why he punched him...sour grapes?How destructive.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on September 12, 2006
    Sex is unplotable?I think you did a damn good job.It didn't interupt the flow......it was rather interesting.His father is a drip,as always.
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  • From Moiranna on August 26, 2006
    I really like this story. Thoughtful, and making us see a side of Itachi that we haven't really seen before. I like the way you portray his thoughts and make it questionable to whom he will kill.
    Kaka-Ita sounds wicked *sniggers* But please, even though I like Uchihacest in general, I'm not too fond of when Sasuke is 7-8 years old... that just squicks me.

    Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - flying blowtorch with a bubble wand on August 19, 2006
    ooh! yesyesyes for uchihacest!!!! either shita and/or itasasu, please! incest is best!!!!!!! -grins pervertedly at thought of characters from naruto having hardcore sex- -nosebleed- hee hee hee...oh, and as for kakaita, yesyes to that too!! uke!itachi rocks!!!!!!! -giggle- -drool- so does slutty!itachi......gtg before i pass out from bloodloss and pervertedness... -waves bye bye cheerfully- I'M NOT HIGH!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - None on August 18, 2006
    I don't like KakaIta at all, so i'd request for Itasasu instead, and ShiIta over that!!
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  • From ANON - cepheus on August 16, 2006
    I'd like to NOT have uchihacest... *coughs* this is the only incest i can't seem to like (even though lately... er... let's leave it at that).

    but apart for this, wonderful chapter! ^^ I really like how you're going on with the plot. the uchiha family is really rotten inside, in many ways, but at the moment of your fic it stil isn't that clear. shisui is still fighting but i do wonder why can't he just... renounce and fuck the shit out of itachi? *snickers* obviously we don't ask you smut every chapter, that would ruin the fic. don't worry. to be here on AFF.net you don't need to write lemon in every chapter. *pats*

    as for now, itachi whoring himself off for fun is making me snicker. loudly. i mean. that is a way of looking at him I never thought I would appreciate. i often think the exact opposite (he would never dwelve in such trivial and useless things) but in the prospective you give, it's just perfect.

    can't esplain how amazing i think this fic is. you should deserve more reviews.

    ^^

    until next time,

    Ceph
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  • From ANON - Sir Magus on August 16, 2006
    KakaxIta? YAY!!! i havent read many stories wit that pairing so it should be interesting as for Uchihacest it doesnt matter to me if u wish to exclude it. great chapter by the way. pls update soon!
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  • From sris on August 16, 2006
    I'm absolutely loving this fic. And boy is Itachi a mess. I think it would be better not to go for uchihacest when Sasuke is only around 8 years old. But of course it's your call ^_^ KakaIta yum and earlier I was actually really expecting to get some ShisuiIta but I think it's great this way. Please update soon!

    At least in the 2nd chapter you used except when it should have been expect or accept.
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