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Reviews for A Devil In the Moonlight

By : EternalTwylight
  • From yarande on August 21, 2007
    This was hot, dark and almost perfect.

    "Who's your Daddy?" wrecked the atmosphere for me though. It went from fucking hot to ridiculous because of that for me.
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  • From MissAsuka on August 20, 2007
    Beautiful! That was simply AMAZING- wow.
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  • From swordheartoftheforest on June 26, 2007
    I love your word choice in all of this. It's perfect. Beautiful language. :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 08, 2007
    That was deep!! Kudos!!!
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  • From Tricia1224 on April 12, 2007
    I think Kakashi and Sakura are my favorit pairing. I will have to check out your other writings. Very good. You are very talented.
    Thank you
    Tricia
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  • From ANON - Jesie on August 23, 2006
    That was so well written and romantic.I still feel so emotoinal about it well done


    * sniffles* so cute!
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  • From ANON - Clemen on August 21, 2006
    That was a wonderful fic. The details and plot are amazing. I really enjoy reading your fic. Look forward to reading your future works. Until next time, take care, and god bless.
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  • From ANON - darksoul on August 20, 2006
    WHOA!!....u've got some great talent there!!....the plot's amazing!....plz continue it!!
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  • From ANON - koham on August 20, 2006
    That was really good!...the plot was interesting....hmm...are u gonna continue it??....if so....then..update soon!
    anyway..keep up the great work!!
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  • From ANON - mel on August 06, 2006
    Yes, yes, yes, you must continue this story! More, more, more - please??
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  • From ANON - Deanna on July 21, 2006
    It's dark, that's for sure, but that's not the problem that your reader has with what you're writing. Because with the way you write, your reader is swept up in the story. Your problem is that your chapters are fragmented and confusing, (a little of which is understandable considering Sakura's state of mind, but this much is rediculous) and we're not certain where this story is going. Try to make your chapters longer, and try sending them to a beta-reader to make sure that your plotline can be followed. You have great potential and talent; don't waste it.
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