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Reviews for Tranquil Morning

By : Carola
  • From Sinslayer on December 27, 2007
    that was so swwweeeettttt!!!!XD
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  • From sasquatchsnake on October 09, 2007
    Precious. I think writing it in the present tense really triggered something. Also the switches between second/first and third person narration were very smooth. Great presentation. I love the pure element in this piece. I'm gushing, sorry.
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  • From ANON - sadistickiss on August 15, 2006
    That was so sweet ~. I loved Sasuke's thoughts, they seemed so muddled and confused. I was actually hoping for more angst ^_^, but hey it's your fic! Am I allowed to make a suggestion though? I don't like your summary XD haha.. yeah I know you don't like summaries, but you really should sound more confident in your summaries, it makes people wanna check it out =D. Probably shouldn't mention you don't like summaries, and don't put a '?' at the end of "slight angst". Have something like: "Sasuke's been wanting to confess to Naruto for so long. He finally thinks he gets a chance to, but will his feelings be returned? Or will his worst fears be realised and he is forced to face rejection..." Muahaha~~ did that sound over dramatic? ^^.

    As I said! Sweet fic! It was excellent, I love confessions, they're so adorable. Keep writing XP!
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  • From ANON - themirror on July 07, 2006
    it's beautiful ^_^
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