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Reviews for Not every thing is as it seems.

By : arora1
  • From Jelp on March 20, 2008
    Wow! This is a really intense story. Are you going to update it? I know it's been over a year, so I don't know if you're planning on continuing it or not. I hope you do. If not, thanks for at least having a well-written first part to the story! ~ Jelp
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  • From Onawa on July 28, 2007
    WOW! What a great story so far! I really hope you are planning to continue this! If you have a email list to notify when you update...Please include me!
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  • From crazychemgeek on July 13, 2007
    Yay - another awesome story from you. Sasuke is such a bitch *sigh* but I love him anyway. I can't wait to find out more, like the reasons behind Sasuke's treatment of Naruto (was it Itachi or Orochimaru???). And will Naruto ever be able to forgive Sasuke. It's hard to get over abuse of any kind, especially when it comes from a partner, or someone you love (and we all know Naruto loves Sasuke).
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  • From on March 31, 2007
    *pokes*

    Just wanted to let you know I'm still hoping for an update on this story.

    XD

    I hope you are well.

    mydarkerside
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  • From anf600 on March 14, 2007
    I have read both this fic and "Broken" and these are both great. Broken was TOTALLY AWESOME!!!! Some of the best writing - you had a good beta, too. Noticed your writing in this fic is also good but more spelling/grammar errors. Need a beta? Give me a holler. I am going to try to read some more of your fics. Please keep writing. Enjoy the Navy. I was Army. Believe me Navy is better but anything combining military intelligence is an oxymoron...which is why they always screw up assignments, etc. :)
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  • From on February 21, 2007
    Today was a re-read day of my favorite author, yeah! I was just thinking, it would be very interesting to get a chapter from Sasuke's point of view. Though maybe that would give too much away too quickly. *sighs* Especially at chapter 3. All of a sudden, I really, really wanted to see that chapter rewritten in Sasuke's POV.

    Well, I still love this newest story from you, the angst is cathartic, and I hope that you find to update soon.
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  • From Jackee on February 19, 2007
    I say it every time I review your fics, but i hope it doesn't get old;

    I love it!!

    Can't wait for the next part!! :3
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  • From esquisitepetal on February 10, 2007
    I love your story, I like stories where Sasuke is a basket case.
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  • From DemonicTenshi on January 22, 2007
    Really good chapte, I can not wait too see what happens next. Please update soon
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  • From Adi on January 21, 2007
    i love love love this story
    i've never actually read a naruto fic with the a similar story line to this
    and im really curious to see where you take this.
    i read just another day in paradise, and i have to say, that fic broke my heart.
    i was tempted to read your fic broken, but im thinking it might be a little too hardcore for me
    but i do adore this one, and i hope its as long as the other two!!

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  • From anapana83 on January 19, 2007
    Wow, this story is going in a direction i had no idea about. pretty good. Can't wait till the next update for sure.
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  • From on January 19, 2007
    Just finished reading this chapter again, read the entire story straight through the other day, and I just have to gush. I love your work. I really do. There's an insightful edge to your stories that delves deeply into psychological pain, illuminating hardships of the human condition and how people struggle through. Plus, you really suck the reader in, really pulling us into Naruto's inner world to the point that I for one was agreeing with Naruto, and getting angry with Naruto, and wanting to beat snakes and dummies with Naruto. You have good details that show what's going on. Like in the kitchen scene where the kitchen isn't described as a burnt out hulk (which is cliche and seen pretty often). Instead there are blackened cans lying on the floor that have exploded because the fire boiled their contents. The cabinets are dilapidated and the frames are just left. There's a hole burnt through the wall where the stove stood. Vivid, sharp and brilliant imagery.

    Now some fangirl gushing...*ahem*

    OOOooohhh NOoooooo!! Is Sasuke going to be okay? He's not going to get sent to the mental hospital, is he? Are you going to tell us what happened to him and why he has scars in unpleasant places?!? Poor Sasuke!!

    But poor Naruto, too! Does Sasuke care about him and just doesn't know how to show it?? Will Naruto be able to save Sasuke from himself? I noticed it was a two bedroom apartment...XD mayhaps they become roomies and start their relationship from scratch?

    Oh, this story is dark and angsty but it's not suffocatingly angsty, and it's so *good*

    update, update, update!!

    *ahem*

    Anywho, I hope that Japan is nice, and I'm not gonna lie--I hope you find oodles amount of time to write. XD
    Have a great day.

    mydarkerside
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  • From Shosuro on January 19, 2007
    MOre more more more more
    more more more more more
    more more more more more......
    need I say more?

    Can't wait until you update!!

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  • From Hestia on January 15, 2007
    Ok--I'm totally against the mission were Konoha nins kill an innocent family--that I can't see MK condoning. But other than that I'm pretty hooked on this. Wow, the scars in Sasuke's butt--hmmm, it's starting to all make sense. I hope this doesn't have a dreadfully sad ending--even if it doesn't end with Naruto and Sasuke working it out, I hope you at least get Sasuke to merely depressed, not violent and suicidal. I'll be looking forward to the update!
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  • From Hellagoddess on January 15, 2007
    Oh my god i cannot believe you updated this! I thought it was another of those awesomely-written, abandoned stories you see all over the place!

    Please keep writing this! I really like your style of writing, very easy to read and follow. Good story with, it looks like, some real-types issues affecting them.

    Keep up the good work!

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