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Reviews for Not every thing is as it seems.

By : arora1
  • From ANON - aria on October 16, 2006
    i love it.
    maybe Naruto and Sasuke love each other...i almost cried when i read last one.
    can't wait for the next chapter, keep up your good work!
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  • From ANON - Nyuchan on October 16, 2006
    Way to few reviews in my opinion...

    Normally i don't like angsty/suicide what not stuff.. but your story setting is interesting!

    I'm glad you've updated and hope to read more from this fic soon
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  • From ANON - Jane_lane on October 16, 2006
    Dude your story is powerful as all hell. You made me cry.
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  • From ANON - rachael on October 14, 2006
    OH JOY! A new story from you! I must say it just made my day. You see, I came to aff and I couldn't find anything to read, so I think to myself, "Hey, let's go and reread something by our favorite aff author arora!" And so I hop over to your profile and lo and behold! A new story! YEAH! This is uber interesting and I really can't wait for an update. It's so tense and I want to know what Sasuke is going to do and what Naruto is going to do and what Sakura is going to do, and, and there's just so much going on and it's so well written and I'm so glad that you've posted a new story!!!

    Please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Psylocke on September 29, 2006
    haha, i loved chapter 2!!

    please update soon, can't wait to see more of this. :)


    (and will there be any NaruSasu?)
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  • From ANON - Sabrina on September 14, 2006
    I just wanted to say that I really love your story. Angst with just enough hope of a relatively good ending! Please continue to update!
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  • From ANON - kyuubigirl on July 31, 2006
    Shit, this is just as intense as Broken, but damn your writing is getting even better. This was actually the most intelectually stimulating story I've read in a long while. It's got a perfect flow, as in the timing just seems spot on. And every time I read something and pleaded for it not to become a stereotypical response, you didn't let it. Examples: Naruto actually staying angry with Sasuke (rightfully so, dammit), he never gives in and says, "Oh Sasuke, I love you, I forgive you" (barf), that's not what your Naruto would do. Another one: Naruto thinks Sakura's cute still, but Naruto realizes he has no chance. For a second, I was afraid suddenly she'd be all in love with Naruto and they'd get it on (barf again, wouldn't fit the characters you're building), and then with Sasuke, I'd think, ok, you're going to make Sasuke back off because it's harder to deal with the tension of him harassing Naruto. Yay, you did it again, Sasuke remains a harassing prick, if he wasn't a harassing pirck he wouldn't have done that to Naruto, would he.

    And you did another thing a lot of writers won't do. You made Sakura smart. She is very smart and intuitive in the manga now so there's no sense in pretending she's not in the shinobi world. I like that you didn't make her seem uber uncomfortable about finding out why Naruto is bleeding, and that you had them talk about it. She could definitely put two and two together. I respected that a lot. And then that you had her slap him at the end. That fit her character just right.

    I am so super impressed with how you handled this. I really love your stories. I've always found them so dark but thoughtful and intelligent with a very subtle (also dark) humor. Please tell me you're going to write more. I like it when my mind's all stimulated by not so typical characters. Sorry the review was long, I get excited by really good stories. And I kind of like to let the author know they made me think and all that.
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  • From Genderless on July 30, 2006
    There are a lot of stories out there where Sasuke takes advantage of Naruto. The customary storyline is that Naruto ends up liking it and they live happily ever after.
    Thank you, dear God, thank you, for not writing that. I don't care what you do with story from here on; I'm satisfied just with the rage and judgement Naruto delivered unto the Uchiha bastard. Thank you.
    But, you know, it would still be great if you wrote more.
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  • From bean1498 on July 30, 2006
    Fantastic!!! I love this story, despite how depressing some of it is. :) It's that kind of fic though and a really good one! I really adore Sakura in this one too. She's not the moron that some try to portray her as. I like the way you've written all of the characters and I can't wait to read more. I look forward to seeing how this story plays out. :)
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  • From ANON - DarkendStAr on July 29, 2006
    dude I came apon this story and its good! Keep it up! I can't wait for more! What is going to happen between naruto and sasuke are they going to work it out? Or does sakura need to knock some sense into sasuke! Blah I wanna know! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - STARR* on July 29, 2006
    WOW. This is such a wonderful fanfic. It is really well written and you have a really nice plot going. You pay nice attention to detail and are covering things thoroughly. I really hope you update soon. I can't wait. I'm sorry I'm giving you one of those "Great fanfic update soon" reviews, I'm usually able of giving a better review however, this fanfic is just so good I really don't know where to begin, it’s just that good.
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  • From ANON - Neko-Chan on July 29, 2006
    hahaha, Sakura bitch-slapped Sasuke
    Great chapter, hope you update soon!!
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  • From ANON - losthimagain on July 10, 2006
    ^^ I love it! It's sad but it's nice! Is there more? I hope so!
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  • From ANON - mmm on July 08, 2006
    i have read your other stories and know that you do good work, i can't wait for the next chapter because i know that you'll make it interesting.
    ahh the wonders of a plot. a good one.
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  • From ANON - Mekhet on July 03, 2006
    I love your work it's so angsty, bastard sasuke is so cool, too bad it's not like the manga where he's.......well let's just say he's different. Keep up the good work.
    They need to add something to stop double posts like spell check or a delete system, sorry.
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