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Reviews for Not every thing is as it seems.

By : arora1
  • From ANON - animehead on January 15, 2007
    This story is amazing. So much angst. Their personalities are completely in character. I can't help but feel sorry for Sasuke, and sorry for Naruto as well. You have a very good thing going here. I can't wait to see what you have in store for next chapter.
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  • From nekochannya on January 15, 2007
    This is very interesting and well thought of. Sasuke's being his usual difficult self and Naruto's being stubborn... Finally thinking about himself... but that doesnt help things along... I am dying to know what happens next... please Naruto! Dont let Sasuke get carted off to looney bin! He's a good man, a bit twisted and difficult but he loves you in his own way... Those scars in his rectum points to being dealt a worse hand than Naruto himself had... right? Poor Sasuke... I cringe with the sole thought... please... happy ending? *offers cookies* Update soon, ne?
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  • From roely on January 15, 2007
    poor sasu! he was rape right! is this a sasunaru fic or narusaku ? anyways its a good story you have insight into the mind!
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  • From on January 15, 2007
    *grumbles* Do you know that you have the reviews set to only accept logged-in users? I had to go and set up an account to review this story. I was kind of promising myself I wouldn't, as I neglect my fanfiction account too much as it is. Ah well. I had to review this story. So, yes, I've been waiting three months or whatever it's been for this thing to come out, and as always, you do not disappoint. I could maybe have wished the chapter was a wee bit longer, but I'm definitely not going to complain...you are probably the only author that I would purposely set up an account so that I could post a review for you.

    Ah yes, a review...hmm. I loved it? I love all your works, and I constantly go to your profile page to see if I possibly missed an update. I just about spazzed out when I was browsing the titles of the newest updates this morning when I saw your name and then I realized it was this story that I have been so anxiously waiting for an update.

    I thank you for not killing...certain characters (we know who I mean), and I thought that the use of the soap opera scene was truly inspired. I really appreciate how well you've shown Naruto's agitation by him going so far as to move and to call Sakura names. The part about beating up snakes--lol. And then the part about the dummy? T_T.

    I'm anxious to see how Sasuke reacts to Naruto, and how Naruto will react to Sasuke for that matter. It's all so very dramatic and intense and angsty (yet not so angsty that I want to cry). I hope that you will have time to work on this piece, though rest assured, I will wait another three months for the next chapter...though please, please, please don't do that to me?

    Mayhaps I'm a bit dense, but I still have no idea what is going on in Sasuke's head. Heck, when that little soap opera bit played, I was much of an accord with Naruto!! And you know how the eye skips some lines sometimes when you're reading? I thought for a second it was Sasuke Naruto was opening the door for, not Sakura. But then Sakura sprung that little speech on Naruto, and I was all like, well Naruto, you and I were a wee bit wrong.

    Guh. I love that I can't fathom what's wrong with the bastard. I hope for a happy ending and an update.

    Sincerely

    rachael

    p.s. I always signed my anon. reviews w/ rachael. I think there may be quite a few...XD

    ...well at least close to one for each chapter anyway... :)

    now I must go and reread the entire fic and see all the wonderful nuances you've tied together (like I KNOW there was something in chapter 1 about Naruto thinking he wanted to get a new apartment...I love the little details like that).
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  • From Menow on January 15, 2007
    This is great. I have one word of advice: Take out the part about the buzzer going off when he gets to the corner and put a slight more emphasis (I do mean slight) on his stomach growling. You see, without the 'buzzer at the corner' remark, there is a chance that your readers will forget about the food as well. Then we can experience Naruto's realization with him (leave us a little worried and shocked). This would just help you get a little bit more of an emotional investment from your readers. Other than that, great job and I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - rachael on November 28, 2006
    still waiting for update...what going to happen! You have to continue! Please?
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  • From ANON - YoukoMinamino on October 20, 2006
    I usually don't review, unless I REALLY like a story. I love the way you explain everything so clearly, and still manage to leave questions. I'm dying to know what will happen next! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Misha on October 19, 2006
    Amazing story! I really enjoyed it, I hope everything turns out ok for them! Can't waite for the next update, don't kill Sasuke :( lol. Keep up the awesome work !!!

    ~x0x0
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  • From ANON - wendyghost on October 17, 2006
    oh, please update soon, it such a good story!
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  • From ANON - rachael on October 17, 2006
    "He did not get it.

    Any of it.

    Any reason why Sasuke was acting the way he was now, was far beyond him."

    *wails* dear arora! It is far beyond me as well! I can hypothesize this and think that but I just don't know! And I want to know. So you must update!

    (And please don't you dare kill Sasuke. I do not think I can forgive you if you kill Sasuke.)

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  • From ANON - Anon on October 17, 2006
    wow, seriously, this is an amazing story! post more (please!)
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  • From ANON - FallingStAR on October 16, 2006
    OMG i THOUGHT YOU WOULD NEVER UPDATE AND HERE YOU ARE WITH ANOTHER UPDATE! Omg he's not dead is he? What is naruto going to do? Is it going to cause trama with seeing sasuke like that? omg you have to update soon!
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  • From ANON - Carla on October 16, 2006
    Where are you going with this story? I have no clue! Obviously, Sasuke was raped or sexually molested/iniciated when he was in Sound but that does not explain why would he do what was done to him to Naruto. Confused with the fic and I hope that this story does have a happy fic and that it ends in some kind of good standing between Sasuke and Naruto. I mean in a good couple relationship.
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  • From ANON - Hypnotic on October 16, 2006
    Omg!! Just wow...so good! This is like....crazy! Man...I was torn between being sad and upset the first chap. then just down right angry like naruto in the second chap. but now i'm so scared?! I man I'm confused and scared...just wow...I hope sasuke is going to be okay...I hope naruto is going to be okay...man...I know I'm not okay! I can't wait to see your next update!
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  • From ANON - leasan on October 16, 2006
    damn, and here i was thinking I'm slowly giving up my addiction to yaoi...
    I haven't been visiting the site as often as usual so I was happily surprised to find out you're writing a new fic. And a really interesting one, oh the twisted minds of the Uchiha kin... How I love thee :)
    Usually the riddle is in the plot, this time it feels like it's merely in Sasuke's mind. But knowing your brilliant plotlines there's much more to it all than is seems, right? *looks at the title* :) Hopefuly it's more than "orochimaru was using him", not that I mind the idea, Orochimaru is one creepy pedophile lusting over Sasuke's body, but that's just too obvious, I bet you have more tricks up your sleeve, so I'm looking forward to the next chapter, as always :)

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