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Reviews for Giving In

By : shirokada
  • From ANON - setsue on July 04, 2006
    i wll beta for you! i'm good at things like that.

    the story is really god so far,sojust e-mail me if you want me to beta.

    nalcanis@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - airhead622 on July 03, 2006
    u no if u wanna continue the story do so
    but don't let the readers influence u
    if u weren't gonna add another chapter then u
    shouldn't have posted this in the first place.
    but yes it's a great intro. to a seemingly smutt filled story
    and i like it alot!!!
    and yeah u do need a beta, e-mail me and i'll b glad
    to b of assistance!!!
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  • From ANON - vixenia on July 01, 2006
    YAY i liked this story. its a great getaway from always reading too many naruxsasu sex stories as good as they are. update K. bai bai
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  • From ANON - Reemu-Chan (not signed in) on June 30, 2006
    oh no, DO continue ^^ Yes, you may want to get someone to Beta your work, but your story is still readable. If you decide to continue your fanfic, I won't mind being your beta. Unless, that is, you already have someone in mind?


    Ria ^.~
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  • From ANON - amy on June 30, 2006
    not bad.i thought it was intriguing
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  • From ANON - shishio on June 29, 2006
    It's way to early for me to give you a deffinent answer on this, but I like the direction of the story. If you want, I'll beta for you. My e-mail address is fireprincess59@yahoo.com, e-mail me and I can look over your chapters and such. This story is pretty good so far, I like the way you are portraying the characters. Most people go into a ooc type of thing, heck, one even put Sasuke in a pink dress, though I forgot what it was called....
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  • From ANON - blue_genjutsu on June 29, 2006
    Loving the story so far and I hope you continue it! :)

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  • From ANON - Konoha Chick on June 29, 2006
    Please, please dont stop writing, I want to know what you have in mind for what Sasuke is plotting. Those two seriously need to stop dancing around eachother and get it over with. bye!
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  • From ANON - Death Angel 101 on June 29, 2006
    It's good
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  • From ANON - lo on June 29, 2006
    Your spelling 'pale' very wrong, fix it and I might be able to continue reading.
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  • From ANON - themirror on June 29, 2006
    i like it...so....more chapters ^_^ yay!
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