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By : littleolmee
  • From ANON - lo on July 11, 2006
    This is a great story, but you constanly mix up 'then' and 'than'. Try this when you finish writing a chapter read it out loud or have someone else read it. Again, nice job. And the only reason you are not getting reviews is b/c I think you have oc in the summery, so many people try to sneak in marysue's when they do the oc thing. Try re-doing the summery. But over all grreat job. (I hope you do not make this some sort of marysue, I don't think you will) Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - lo on July 10, 2006
    A little long winded at points, but this is really really good. I really like this. Just remember to look up the difference between 'then' and 'than'. But over all you have done a good job.
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  • From ANON - lo on July 09, 2006
    This is pretty good, well written, and so far the story is good. But you are canstantly switching 'then' and 'than', these are not interchangable. But this is good. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Neko-Chan on July 08, 2006
    lol, offical sake man ^_^ i want one!!!
    good chapter, cant wait for more!!!
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  • From ANON - Neko-Chan on July 06, 2006
    Great fic!! I love the storyline so far ^_^ the merger was a great idea!! it fits the manga well ^^
    lol...that last chapter really got me...Naruto being mothered by hookers!! lol!!!!
    Cant wait for more soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - eirisbadluck on July 04, 2006
    I'm really enjoying this story and can't wait for the next chapter to be up. Your writing style is very fluid and the idea is very original creating an all around great story so far....Hope you update soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - False-Image on July 01, 2006
    Yay!! Thank you for sending me the email telling me about this! It brightened my day =) Aww! Sasuke and Naruto are getting along so well! It kind of sucks that Naruto's so much stronger than Sasuke now. Please update soon! I can't wait to see how the fight with Kakashi goes ^_^
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