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By : littleolmee
  • From ANON - lo on August 07, 2006
    This is just a good story. i really like your view points on some things. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Mystaira on August 04, 2006
    *pout...pout...cry...mourn...* I wanna see what happens next! ;_; One of the best fanfics I've read(ignoring spelling and grammer errors(which is actually kinda hard for me cause I have a habit of correcting those alot, even my sister's... speaking of if you ever need a beta to read through and correct grammer and spelling... >.>;)). ;_; I hope you continue soon, I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - HellQueen on July 19, 2006
    About your usage of the suffix -dono, I believe you are incorrect. According to the information I have the suffix is a variation of the old Japanese word "tono" meaning Lord, which means that it is more formal than -sama, and generally reserved for very high ranked individuals, like the Hokage. The suffix is rarely used today as it's usually considered somewhat archaic. In the manga "Lone Wolf And Cub", the authors of which carefully researched the time period (Tokugawa Era), it is frequently used. The Manga also includes a lexicon of all the unfamiliar term used in the series.
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  • From ANON - hentai-monkey on July 19, 2006
    wow. that's all i've got to say about this story. you've got excellent plot progression and you've got wonderful control of whom the characters are and who you want them to be for yourself. this is an amazingly beautiful story and it's wonderful to read.

    the only thing i would have to point out would be the simple spelling and grammatical errors that flow in the story. while distracting, they are easy to ignore, a beta reader would be perfect.

    however, disregarding them, this is still an amazing story. please, keep it up and update soon. (i'll be checking for more) please, write more soon, i look forward to more from this story.
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  • From ANON - lauryl on July 19, 2006
    It's sooo good! Even though I usually don't like stories that have a tendency to move at a somewhat relaxed pace sometimes, I really like this one! An excellent style of writing! And the sasunaru is so sweet. Can't wait for it to be updated!
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  • From ANON - baka-tachi on July 18, 2006
    I love this story, I think it is also the first of its kind where naruto has fox spirits and such. I just really like it
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  • From ANON - Neko-Chan on July 18, 2006
    yay!!! finally, some action!! XDD
    Yasuo's speech was great ^_^ his description of Naruto was cute ^^
    good job! cant wait for more!!
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  • From ANON - lo on July 18, 2006
    Nice, I like what you do with relationships of all kinds in this story. Not many people have such a developed concept in their writing. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Mikkie on July 16, 2006
    OMG I LOVE this story.. please please PLEASE go on with it.. fast... *puts a katana to your trouth(?)* don't finish it and die
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  • From ANON - Neko-Chan on July 15, 2006
    hahaha, i like Kakashi's way of courtship, straight to the point ^_^ great chapter, cant wait for more!!!
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  • From ANON - lo on July 15, 2006
    Nice job. You are getting a handle on the 'then' and 'than', but there are still a few missplaced.
    THink:
    Than= comparing
    Then= Timing related
    I really love this story, and I like where it is going, keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - shadowolf on July 13, 2006
    Chapter gfour is the sam4 as chapter 3 where is chapter four i love this story and would like to contue to chapter 5
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  • From ANON - lo on July 13, 2006
    Great job, I am glad that you changed the summery, now the reviews will come in. Nice job. I like the whole Lee and Sakura thing, and her revalation. He really is a good guy. So many other people make him out to be a freak, I hate that it is so shallow. I really like what you did, it made me grin. Again this is a good peice of work.
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  • From ANON - Neko-Chan on July 13, 2006
    -pictures Naruto nizzling his kit retainers- kawaii ^_^ good chapter! The fight scene was good stuff! hope you update soon!!
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  • From ANON - mscs3 on July 12, 2006
    Very well written! I love this story and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Me
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