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By : bean1498
  • From azurarose on January 11, 2008
    Please please please continue this. It is one of the most wonderful stories I have ever read.

    I was kinda hoping it wouldn't be Shino (especially after seeing an incredibly hot pic of him and Kiba).
    This truly is a great story and I can't wait for the rest. *goes off to give Shino a hug*
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  • From earthbender068 on January 11, 2008
    Really good two chapters. I was so exicted to see that you had updated. I am happy to see that Sakura is really trying to work through the trust issues she has with Shino. I can only hope their relationship can be salavaged. I am happy that you had Shino remind Sakura he is a man and will have natural body reactions. Now I have to wonder if Kiba was his partner, and how that would affect Sakura's relationship with him. I think I may have stated this before, but I would really like to see those two develop an actual relationship. I like Sakura would have taken Kiba replacing Sasuke's kiss with his own as sign of jealousy. Maybe he is getting a little protective, let's hope so. :)

    I have only two things to "criticize." Are the kunoichi in ABNU only used for sex? I'm not sure if they are assigned to any other type of mission that doesn't involve them being used or attacked. It seems their sole function is to have sex. If so then Sakura is destined to be alone. (could be why Tsunade is also alone?) Sakura was right Sakuse's wife could not sex outside of their marriage, even for a mission. I'm pretty sure none of the other shinobi in the rookie 9 would allow their wives/girlfriends to continue as ANBU, knowing what they know.

    The second is I know that it is necessary for Sakura to "grow and change" because of the experiences she is having, but I hope you don't take away her spirit and turn her completely bitter. (or a complete whore for that matter) One of the reasons I actually like Sakura is her attitude. She isn't a bitter person. She's fun loving and happy. I know, I know, she was betrayed, but I hope she can move on and smile again. Thank you for letting her heal Shino's wound. She is still compassionate, not even wanting to hear Shino cry that morning or her concern from him at her apartment. Maybe she will soon come back to herself.

    I know that you started this with the idea of a one shot, but continued it, so I am curious to see where you are taking the story. Is it just an adventure for Sakura learning her own sexuality or is it a journey for Sakura to move to the next level as a nija, or finally is it a path for her toward a true relationship with someone who cares for her and she also learns. I do think it's going great and I love your writing style. I hope to see another two chapters soon, or even three! :)

    geekygirl068@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - ami on January 10, 2008
    not logged in so cha...nice 10th chappy. plz update as soon as possible its really interesting story
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 10, 2008
    Man this is good!!! I couldn't, wouldn't guess it was Shino. He is my favorite! I love the fics Kitsune...I forget her whole "name", writes about these two. Please tell me they get back on good terms???
    Okay, you have to write what you feel, but I so love SHINO!!! Great job!
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  • From roxnroll on January 10, 2008
    I so didn't see that Shino thing coming. Out of all of them, I never would've guessed Shino. I kinda feel sorry for Sasuke though (I'm reviewing 9 & 10 at the same time here. Will there be any Sasuke action? That would be nice. Although, Kiba and Kakashi are all I need. Can't wait to read more.
    Rox
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  • From PrplGrl on January 10, 2008
    Yay! An Update!
    Very well done once again!! Keep up the great work!!
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  • From ANON - anon food on January 10, 2008
    I like how Sakura is a progressing character even if it is difficult at times to read her slow transformation. She is not one of my favorite characters in the series but your portrayal so far has her growing on me a bit. The story seems to be going more from just romps in the sheets to more of a character growth in other directions as well(bit of a lurch there, though, to have her all of a sudden an ANBU member, perhaps hints of her candidacy could be thrown more in the beginning in in a back edit?). You have her going through trials and changing in fits and starts from a fluffy, plastic piece to something that can be viewed as a more rounded soldier/shinobi/ninja.

    I will admit to having a hard time reading how she coped with finding who raped her and initiated her hazing. It is hard to see why she couldn't take a more objective view to the participants, namely after identifying Shino and finding out that everyone goes through similar if not worse experiences (again namely Shino), but how you have stylized her and understanding that emotional reactions can resound in people that can take forever to overcome (if ever), I am coming to accept that is how she progressing as a character right now. In reference to being more objective towards Shino and the rape, I am not condoning rape, especially as a part of a hazing ritual or training, and not saying that Sakura (or anyone for that matter) should forgive and forget with open arms. Rationalizing it away and letting bygones be bygones would not sit right. But I can understand how your are fitting the act and her reactions into your story world. I suppose I would hope that eventually she will get to the point where she toughens up to be the kind of warrior she needs to be to survive and do her job but still be able to keep her humanity, which I believe was the point of Tsunade's tough love speech. I suppose I am hoping that she comes to realize this and the many parts to what happened to her and put it into perspective, that it is hard to pinpoint only her as the victim in the situation as it is portrayed and that she needs to depersonalize it for her own sanity and in becoming a professional. But she's just not there yet. It's the waiting for this part and seeing how you will bring this about, if at all, that keeps me reading.

    So, in a very long winded fashion, I like your story of Sakura as more than just a naive sex doll but a working, growing ninja who is dealing with life (and some of its very interesting moments).
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  • From SirStalkingwarrior on January 10, 2008
    holy crap...i never guessed it to be shino....
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  • From SirStalkingwarrior on January 09, 2008
    lol...that whole put of thing with kakashi and kiba was funny. awesome job. very hot!!!
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  • From SirStalkingwarrior on January 08, 2008
    that was amazingly hot chappy(ch4)
    wow...friction causing awesome...lol
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  • From SirStalkingwarrior on January 08, 2008
    lol...wow amzing job for both chappy 1 and 2. i'm off to read the rest.
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  • From kateridemonica on January 08, 2008
    YAY!!!!
    I've been waiting for this update! Gasp! It was Shino! Never saw that coming... really, you had me racking my brains trying to figure it out. I am so happy you updated!

    KaS
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  • From fangirlqueen on January 08, 2008
    I absoultly love this story! and i also love shino sakura pairings so i was a little more into the last chapter than most ppl. I love shino and i feel bad for him and sakura. He did what he thought would be best and is willing to deal with the consequences.i also liked the fact he still threatened her to teach her to really fight back.
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  • From dirtygirl42 on January 08, 2008
    I definitely missed several updates lol, but I'm so glad to read the continuation of this story. The first half was delicious smut, but I'm even more impressed at how you've turned this into a really fascinating story. I'm looking forward to reading more about how Sakura survives her training and her evolving relationships with the men in her life. Thanks so much for posting this story!
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  • From Tricia1224 on January 08, 2008
    This just keeps getting better and better. I am still wondering why no one else went after Sakura. Great chapters. I am definitely looking forward to the next one.
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