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Reviews for A Little Harmony

By : antagonist
  • From beerbelly on October 11, 2007
    AAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHH NNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! why does shika still have to end up with damn stupid ino???!!!!! that alone ruined it for me!! AARRGGGGGGHHH!!!!!! >_
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  • From ANON - tsb on October 24, 2006
    wow this story kicks ass! I never thought I'd find sth with this much insight into characters, humor and well PLOT on a site like this! I think the best thing about it all is that somehow you managed to actually keep everyone IN character which is a nice change compared to other stories out there. The last chap was a lil confusing at first but it turned out pretty cool once I got what you were doin with it ;> I so hope you plan some sort of sequel to this! And I don't really care if it's not as awesome as this or turns out strained or whatever I just can't WAIT. Ya could do a different couple from that crew or sth or include more main characters but you have GOT to write more!!!!
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  • From ANON - Inus_Kagome_Forever on October 09, 2006
    Okay, just went and looked at your sum for your story again and... hahahah, I don't know how I missed the [complete] heheheh. Yes.... how funny.... good job.
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  • From ANON - Inus_Kagome_Forever on October 09, 2006
    Noooo! I didn't know it was only 7 chaps!!! I thought... ::starts crying:; You have to make a sequel!! okay not really, but it would be sooo cool! This was sooooooooooo great! I felt a little bad for Ino though... Poor Naruto and Gaara too. But does it HAVE to be over? (++++++)


    Inus_Kagome_Forever
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  • From ANON - CrazyRabidBlonde on October 09, 2006
    I was listening to "Naked" from chapter 5 on. On repeat. This story is amazingly well written, with the perfect amount of details. The plot is original and you kept it interesting. Kudos to you!
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  • From ANON - Inus_Kagome_Forever on October 04, 2006
    I couldn't stop at chapter 5! Damn, but I really do have to go to bed... you had to leave that cliffy there? lol. Thankfully there WAS another chapter already up though :D Other wise I would have died! lol, Great, so fucking great! I love it! Temari's the second coolest girl in the anime, i think. Hinata first (and talkin bout girls, not women, cuz that have to be... Tsunade) lol so I'll read more soon as I can. This story is so great, just can't stop saying it. If only there was enough time in the day...

    Inus_Kagome_Forever
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  • From ANON - Inus_Kagome_Forever on September 17, 2006
    I feel I've read quite a bit of your stories today... three in total, not that I've finished what you have up so far on this one (only on chap two) If only you didn't need sleep... how much more could you get done in a day? But yes, very good! I like this pairing! Always thought they looked good together, well after seeing the epsiode where she save Shikamaru (missed the chunnin exams cuz I skipped ahead so that was the first image i had of her and Shika together, but of course I've seen all the eps up past that now.---obssessed) But good, I like it! can't wait to read more, if only my eyelids didn't feel like they weighed a ton! And my bed didn't look so comfotable... hmmm....yes, but unfortunately it does. So hopefully i'll have more free time soon. till then,

    Inus_Kagome_Forever
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  • From ANON - Tulisha on August 26, 2006
    i don't normally like shikatema, but this seemed to work really well....it gets the full credit it deserves
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  • From ANON - WS on August 22, 2006
    A really good story, you made it really believeble, I like it.
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  • From ANON - Nikoli Korinov on August 19, 2006
    Well, for your first lemon, it seems pretty kick-ass. And I personally don't think that the ending is that corny. It did seem a little rushed, but nothing wrong with that if it doesn't hamper the story too much. If I had the 10-scale from MM, I'd give your fic an overall rating of 9, because there is room for improvement, such as recognizing your limitations (unless you get in some writing practice with a beta or something, I wouldn't suggest attempting another action scene), but for the most part this fic exemplifies your mastery of the basics of English writing, namely proper grammar and the successful utilization of colloquial language, while still providing a damn good story for the reader.
    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - tasukigirl on August 18, 2006
    LEMON! May I request that you write more shikatema lemons in the future? ._. I thought you did a great job =D
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  • From ANON - twilight garden on August 18, 2006
    this was a really good story i liked it alot.
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  • From ANON - logophobia on August 17, 2006
    THAT was your first lemon? that was one of the best lemons ive ever read! i am definatly going to read red light district
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  • From ANON - tasukigirl on August 15, 2006
    Awww, I just discovered this fic today and I totally love it. I'm a big time shikatema fan and I love how you've captured their personalities. I can't wait to see more. :)
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  • From ANON - c2 on August 14, 2006
    You've got a great story here, especially because of how music-focused it is. And because it has ShikaTema in it. :D Please continue.
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