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Reviews for Rakuen no Ai

By : Hellagoddess
  • From ANON - tsutanai on June 22, 2006
    Awesome, very well done, I was sure it was Sasuke and Naruto! Very nicely written too, I hope you have some more fics for me to read! :D
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  • From ANON - tallia on June 20, 2006
    ^^ it was gorgeous. especially wen well with the music i was listening to. some wierd classical music and then as it ended the beat went up and it went faster... till it stopped with a bang. *grin* :D it was very nice..but um... you tricked me. /:P
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  • From ANON - Emaruto on June 19, 2006
    Oh My God...
    I was like...
    SO SURE
    SOOO SUUUREE
    that this was NaruSasu
    You have NO idea
    at the end I was just like, "Nani?!"
    Well written though.
    congrats.
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  • From ANON - yaoi_means_gay_in_asian on June 18, 2006
    I didn't know who it was until the very end. I know I was picturing Sasuke and Naruto, but that's because they are my favorite pair! ^.^ Great Job! It was hot and sexy.
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  • From ANON - airhead622 on June 18, 2006
    i thought it was NaruSasu to b honest....
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  • From ANON - Haru-chan on June 16, 2006
    It's Shika and Neji! So cyuute! ^w^

    I actually thought when it mentioned long hair.. That it was Orochimaru and Jiraiya as kids.. >_>
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  • From ANON - Pepp on June 16, 2006
    ^^ *purrs* I loved it!

    Nice and hot!

    Steamy, even! ^^lol

    Well, my guess, at first, was Sasuke bottom, because of the black air comment...
    I thought naruto top, even though I dont usually go for him in any position but uke (^^lol)..

    Then i thought Sasuke bottom again, but with Neji as top!

    Until I noticed the mention of LONG silky hair, in whatever way you put it, I didn't think Neji, but then I did, but couldn't fathom the laziest Nin of Rookie 9... ^^lol

    I see him more of a bottom, you see, with the fact that he wouldn't have to do too much... ^^lol

    I liked it though..

    The fighting to sit next to each other part was kawaii!

    Great job!

    10 outa 10!
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  • From ANON - Talking_Butterfly on June 16, 2006
    Oh my - that was hot AND cute. A combination I absolutely adore. And a ShikaxNeji even! Keep on writing like this! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Ken Ken on June 15, 2006
    I admit, I thought it was Sasuke and Naruto at first. Seemed like one talked too much and the other too little. Then I thought it was Sasuke and Shika. Girls fighting to sit next to the latter and the other was a genius. Never guessed it was Neji and Shika. Good job.
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  • From Houseki on June 15, 2006
    Ah I was only half right!!! I was at first going Nar/Sas..then it was Nar/Nej all the way up until the end when the hair time came into play...then I was like..'hmm only shika and neji have their hair tied back, wth? is it sas/nej?' lmao And then when I went back through in the beginning it should have been blantenly obvious when he said he wasn't talking and no one would care as long as he wasn't complaining. *sigh* Ah well, that was an excellent ficlet! You're a very good fic-ka and I'm about to check your profile to see if you have any thing else to read!! ^__^ mmm I am in dire need of Nar/Shika...perhaps you could fill the void of good Nar/Shika fics and write one up? *bats eyelashes* ^__~ Hehe would be awesome, I'd write one (pretty tempted too) but I got loads of other fics I need to update so I'm gonna have to hold off or put it in my 'Plot Bunny' folder.

    Anyways, thanks for the entertainment of excellent writing skills and a cute, but short, story ^__^

    Houseki
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  • From ANON - smurf-chan on June 15, 2006
    some really great lines there.

    I personally thought the pairing was sort of obvious; there were too many little clues in the text that gave it away. That could have been just me though *shrugs*, either way I liked it.
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  • From ANON - AmberZombie on June 14, 2006
    Oh man that was sooo hot! ::fans myself:: You are one great writer! I guessed Neji right but I thought the other one was sauske.
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  • From ANON - sapphirexkat2 on June 14, 2006
    omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg

    ARE YOU KIDDING ME?!!1!1 THAT WAS SO FREAKIN' HOT AND I THOUGH IT WAS NEJI/SASUKE BUT IT SHIKA/NEJI!!


    wahhhhhhhhhh

    but besides the pairing, this story was wonderfully written. I like how you had the beginning, and then backtracked to the events that led fully into the lemon.

    this is the second greatest shocker since Gai/Naruto, written in a similar, mysterious character format...

    nice jobbbbbb!!
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on June 14, 2006
    lol, I loved this. I figured it was neiji but I didnt even know till the end that the other was shikamaru. Even the "troublesome" comment didnt clue me in. I thought it could have been Naruto up until the whole letting the hair down thing. Annnnnyhoo, loved it. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Kari on June 14, 2006
    I was sooo sure it was NaruSasu XD Great job!
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