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Reviews for Selbstmordversuch

By : chinohana
  • From ANON - bloodyramen on April 28, 2008
    I liked it very much! I've just read it again, and I think it's really beautiful. I like the idea of the double blade:)
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  • From ANON - Rach Rach Rachel on June 22, 2007
    This made me burst into tears almost as much as Naruto did! T.T
    I really loved it! Im so glad i found it! Btw I thought it made perfect sence!
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  • From ANON - KaiPhoenix on June 19, 2007
    thank you for not making them jump right into a heated make-out session or something like that...this was much more believable...and it was sweet...
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  • From Rosebud on June 18, 2007
    Wow, I liked it!
    Good one-shot! ^^
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  • From ANON - dyessie on April 20, 2007
    ur cool.. the story was awesome, though it was short.. but still, i love it.. thanks for writing.. ^^
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  • From ANON - ann dragera dragonclawz on April 10, 2007
    this if my absolute favorite story. - i've had a copy saved at home for the past year!
    this fic along with one other inspired me to write happy birthday, my fic.

    it's even posted and completed!

    i just could never refind it afterwards to leave a review. but i absolutely love this fic!
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  • From Fyra on April 10, 2007
    Great One-shot. Well done though I should point out something, Im not sure if anyone else caught this.....It kinda threw me off(if it didn't then I wouldn't say anything:P)
    Here it is......
    Sasuke just stared at him. He then lowered them on the bed, trying as he could to get into a comfortable position (A/N: mind out of the gutter, you twerps! Out of the gutter! Out! Now!!!), spooning the younger against him.

    Okay so they are at the bed.....but then after some dialog you had this...
    Sasuke gathered Naruto in his arms, carried him to the bed. The sheets were all over the place. They had brown patches every where, some were still lightly red and damp. Doesn’t look like it was in the wash for a long time…

    uhhhh....he was already at the bed and was laying down beside Naruto.... Unless you were to switch them then that would make a little more sense. Brought to the bed then lowered. It doesn't make sense to lower then bring to the bed eh? :P

    Anyways it was a good onesot, and I like how it was written....I look forward to reading your work again. Just keep in mind of the actions of the character
    Ja ne!
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  • From Belovedlovex2 on April 10, 2007
    wow powerful! i like you can making it longer. maybe you should continue. i would like that. i thought that it was really good.
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  • From ANON - chineseartist on March 22, 2007
    it's different, but it's nice. there are times when you just want to read a good story with guys, and then there are times where you just want sex and lots of it. This would be an example of the former (obviously, i mean, duh!) so, it was a fun read, and i totally understand how sometimes the story just writes itself and all you do is stare at the computer screen while it happens. i look forward to reading other stories of yours. good luck.
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  • From on February 27, 2007
    awwwwww, that was cute...sad but cute..i love it! i always end up writting stuff that stuck on my mind too it clears the mind don't it? ^^
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  • From ANON - dace on January 05, 2007
    to be honest this story cought my attention because the title was german. Do yo speak german? for I would love to have someone to talk to! oh and I like the story!
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  • From ANON - Okita on January 04, 2007
    Wow, this story ... one shot ... thing, was really very well done. i love the way you portrayed the character's emotions more through what they wanted to say as opposed to what they actually said. Wonderfully done, keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - biteme on January 04, 2007
    This is the best naruto suicide fics I've ever read! You're really great continue like this you're wonderfull!!!
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  • From Lithiel on January 04, 2007
    Hey
    First a question: are you German?
    just wondered 'cause of the title ;)
    and second:
    I hope you'll not be offended by anything I say now, but...
    I think it's a bit... fast? dunno how to put it...
    I mean... you explained everything, good reasons for Naruto's suicidal tendencies and stuff.. but feeling-wise it lacks a certain something.
    I really don't know how I can explain this to you, but for me, it feels a bit..."shallow" (it's really not the vocab I'm looking for, but I can't quite find a fitting one, sorry ^^*)
    I guess what I'm missing is a explanation for Sasuke's behaviour or...gah... it's really difficult to explain this *drop*

    the other thing which kinda was... a disturbance, were the comments in brackets... it's one thing to do this in comedy fics and like you explained at the beginning it's what you write most of the time, ne? so I guess you're really used to do it, but I think it's not fitting for a darkfic, at least I feel that it disturbs the sad scene ppl see in their minds when they read the story.

    BUT I don't want to just nag ^^*
    'cause there were some things I really liked about this FF, or I wouldn't have reviewed ^^*
    "“No… nngh… do-don’t leave… don’t stop… please don’t…” don’t humiliate me after this, don’t abandon me, don’t mock me, don’t leave me…
    “I won’t…” I won’t leave you, I won’t hurt you, I won’t abandon you…"
    this passage for example... I really liked how you let them finish the sentences in their thoughts ^^

    so... well
    like I said earlier, I hope you don't feel offended by whatI wrote
    baba
    Lithi ^^/)

    PS: If you ARE German, feel free to e-mail me and I'll try to explain what I tried to express, cuz it's really difficult to do that in a foreign language ^^**

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  • From ANON - animehead on January 04, 2007
    I thought it was wondeful and very emotional. I really liked the "Why" part where you had them think so many why questions, but left them all unasnwered. It was very deep. Great job, really. Nice work.

    ~Animehead
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