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Reviews for Selbstmordversuch

By : chinohana
  • From ANON - Fuyahiko on January 04, 2007
    i liked this one-shot a lot. it was so sweet but at the same time depressing. I could never picture naruto being suicidal cause hes so happy but after reading this its like i got to see another side i was blind to. glad u didnt put a lemon it wouldnt have seem to go well with this. And for once sakura wasnt a u know what. ^ ^
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  • From ANON - innerchild on October 08, 2006
    it made sense... but i don't understand what the title of this is... or what it means. maybe i'm just stupid though... hehehe... loved this, though. very well written.

    -inc
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  • From ANON - shishio on July 25, 2006
    -Cries- Oh, that was too sad, and too sweet. That was a real tear-jerker!
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  • From ANON - Sakura-Laurel on July 14, 2006
    That was awesome. I loved it. Quick Q though: what's Selbstmordversuch mean? Sounds kinda Germanic or possibly Dutch. My email's sakura underscore laurel 6 6 6 at yahoo dot com, in case you wanna email me with the answer. Thanks for the great read!
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  • From ANON - chelzi on July 07, 2006
    this was an interesting and good fic. it was (for the most part) well written, and i liked it a lot. i'm wondering what the title meant, or if it was just a little random...? oh well. thanks for the good read!^^~
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  • From ANON - shikamauru on June 14, 2006
    very beatuiful and greatly written kida puts a twist in the way u look at the chars in the show now i always thought it would be sasuke who slit his wrist and left this life for the next please write more please
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  • From ANON - Reemu-Chan (not signed in) on June 13, 2006
    I disagree. I really liked this piece. It was poetic in a fluffy/angsty way. I loved the begining especially. Sasuke's "infatuation." Ya know, there's something nagging at my head. Normally, when people plan to commit suicide that is, do they really attack their wrists first? It's quite often that I read it in fanfics. But....well actually, nvm. The part that always affects me worse in the story is where Sakura had avoided Naruto. Even though that part was short, it's one of those things that make me feel even more sorry for my poor lil blonde.


    Ria
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  • From ANON - Akanika on June 12, 2006
    Whatever your smokin', I want some.... your...um... story was....uh... good?


    -_-?
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  • From ANON - ann dragera on June 12, 2006
    LOVED IT!!!!!!!

    Honestly, it was very well written and easily believable. Especially with the way that Naruto has always been treated. Normally i really don't care much for the suicidal stories, though i do like the more neglect/abusisve (really dislike major abuse, rarely like the ones with rape unless it has a good plot and ending).

    even with the suicidal undertone, it has just the right amount of - history? - to back it up. and the fact that you brought in sasuke makes it even better to me. (loyal sasu/naru fan) plus i don't care what most people will say - there is too much between those to two for them not to have something - they understand each other too much.

    the only thing i saw wrong (at first) was the kunai and dagger - as far as i know a kunai is pretty much the same as a dagger - but i take it that what was really meant was a kunai and an - eastern style dagger? - which was pretty clear in the next paragragh

    also - i loved how you used kyubbi - having it to cause naruto to relive the pain by reopening all the wounds? - now that was interesting.
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