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Reviews for Taiikusai

By : tasukigirl
  • From ANON - Carla on October 07, 2006
    Where to start? You have me in a very hard position with the pairing...I do like the Gaara/Naruto pairing but it is so painful to know that it is making Sasuke suffer. I usually dont read this king of fics as I prefer Boy/Girl fics but recently I have a penachant for Naru/Sasu fics. What brought this on ...How would I know. Nice plot, very well developed. All the characters have very adept personalities and you have a nice way to tune into this and bringing it out. I like it. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Otaku_myst on October 01, 2006
    aww man, I'm kinda glad that Naruto didn't break up with Gaara. I thought it was heading towards that direction, but I guess I over-read some details. ^_^ keep it up, I love your story. If you have the time, can you email me when you have your next update? thanks in advance!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 23, 2006
    omgggg *cries for sasuke* ok, up until ch. 8 or something i was like alright, sasuke deserves this because hello, sasuke in reality is a jerk and took naruto for granted in this story... so you snooze you lose applies here. but omg, he has to witness the stuff in the bathroom, then naruto taunts him in his own house AND rejects him? ok, at least sasu wasn't hiding in naruto's apartment hearing those words to Gaara because MY heart broke into a million pieces. And I AM a SasuNaru freak, but I also believe in the happiness of ALL characters (nerd, nods, yes), so ugh, it breaks my heart that as happy as Gaara and Naruto are together... you're planning on SasuNaru? *criiies* At least Sasu sort of deserves it (and I love Sasu), but now Gaara's heart has to break after everything he's been through? OMG, please send me a teensy bit of fluff? But I do love it, I thought ch. 8 through 10 were just awesomely done. And I was never distracted by the scene/time changes or POV changes... I actually think it's better without the things indicating a change in POV since they sort of interrupt the flow. I think it's normal to switch POVs in different paragraphs, but then again, maybe I'm doing something wrong cuz I write that way, too...

    oh and also since i haven't reviewed yet, lemme just say... your lemons are really hot and well described. it's not like "hi, i'm zoning out while writing a sex scene," it feels like you as the author are right there dealing with the scene and making it as realistic as possible through the physical actions! still though, m'heart hurts for sasuke soooo much. i actually want to hug him since naruto didn't.
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  • From ANON - Sasukes_master on September 21, 2006
    omg i love this lol you're really good keep up the good work i don't have any advice for you though sorry ^_^'
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  • From ANON - Chelsea on September 21, 2006
    YES!!!!!! finally garaa and naruto! TOGATHER!!! HA!!! and they say mindcontrol dosent work. but anywho, THANK YOU. you have no idea how hard it is to find garaa/naruto. U R MY HERO!


    P.S. I love !!!
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  • From ANON - kaesaku on September 21, 2006
    yay!
    an update!
    *twirls around*
    aww~
    i really like the whole narugaanaru thingy goin' on,
    but i can't help but feel sorry for sasuke..
    he is a little pitiful..
    ahehehe~
    anyways, hope you write soon~
    i'll be waiting!
    ^^
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  • From ANON - inusgrl666 on September 09, 2006
    please update soon i'm dieing to know wat happens
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  • From ANON - yue on September 05, 2006
    hmmm for some reason that message gaara got sounds kinda fishy....
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  • From ANON - Luthien Wildglen on September 04, 2006
    Oh my God, even when you are writing something that is completely serious, it was hysterical and it didn't take away from the scene at all. I love your writing style and your new chapters were fantastic! Oh, and I completely agree with about rape fics being terrible so I'm really glad that you aren't going to include any of those situations in this fic. That would ruin this fic, and that would be a horrible thing to do to readers such as myself. I do have one request though, if you are going to do a change of scene, some stars or something would be a huge help because sometimes there are random large spaces between paragraphs and there isn’t a scene change, and sometimes there is. It would just be nice. Anyway though, keep up the great work. I eagerly await your next update.


    Dryad1789@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - shishio on September 04, 2006
    Yes, you're being /way/ too mean to Sasuke! Poor guy... Other than that, I like this story, it's got a nice plot, the bet is funny, and Naruto being with Gaara and then getting caught in the bathroom by Sasuke, though a little sad, was funny in it's own way, due to an inside joke.
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  • From ANON - kaesaku on August 31, 2006
    aww~
    poor sasuke~
    T_T

    but that's ok, i dun think ur so mean or sumthin'..
    ish okay with me~
    ^^
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  • From ANON - avila7989 on August 30, 2006
    AWWWWWWWWW POOR SASUKE I CAINT HELP BUT FEEL SORRY FOR HIM!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!
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  • From ANON - lalala on August 23, 2006
    Man, I feel really bad for Sasuke. Even if he is a giant jerk. Can anyone say "breakdown" >_>
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  • From ANON - Celess on August 21, 2006
    I'd vote for a Gaara rape in next chapter... mwhehehehehehe.. Sasuke being so angry rapes Gaara... yeah...would be really nice!
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  • From ANON - kaesaku on August 20, 2006
    aww..
    poor sasuke~
    but, naruto has to choose one.. and well, that one's gaara.
    no arguments there!
    ..loves either of the two boys for naruto~
    ^^
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