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Reviews for Revelations Of The Mind

By : Gavin
  • From ANON - TVO on June 23, 2006
    Yeah I wasn't really happy with this chapter.

    First of all if, Naruto transferred Kyuubi power to Sakura, shouldn't it be healing her?

    And the whole business with Sakura being the kyuubi seal is a little contrived, even for Naruto. I don't get how Tsunade is able to figure all this out. And I would think she should be a little more concerned about the state of her apprentice.

    I'm also not cool with Naruto and Sakura being aware of any of this. It sort of deflates a lot of the drama that you don't see Naruto wanting to make this conscious decision himself.
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  • From ANON - nim istar on June 16, 2006
    great story. please update as soon as possible
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  • From ANON - Wow on June 16, 2006
    Wow...just wow.... that was amazing. I love this story, its by far the greatest story of NaruSaku ever written. Please update soon. I love this story, and GREAT JOB....UPDATE!
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  • From ANON - johnny2by4 on June 15, 2006
    great story.
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  • From ANON - Peacemaker of the Phoenix Soul on June 14, 2006
    Nice, chapter 5 is here and it was awesome. I didn't see the attack coming but that is what makes it good. Keep up the great work and update when you have time please.
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  • From ANON - TVO on June 14, 2006
    Yikes, things kind of took a dive here.

    I'm sort of getting tired of the people of Konoha hate Naruto thing. You don't ever really see the people of Konoha acting toward Naruto the way they did in this chapter in the anime or manga. Plus they are outlawed from talking about it.

    You really made a mess of Sakura in this chapter as well. I would think she could've come up with a way to protect or heal herself from this instance. Or at least Tsunade would've figured some stuff out. Considering how after the Sound Arc they were able to fully heal majorly f'd up Kiba, Neji, and Chouji who had internal bleeding and injuries and pretty close to death.
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  • From ANON - TVO on June 12, 2006
    Some more really cute Naruto/Sakura scenes. And it looks like Sakura is falling for this older and more mature Naruto pretty hard. So I look forward to the more "interesting" scenes with them.

    The chapter title is "calm before the storm," so I wonder what the storm is. Like a storm of love-making between Naruto and Sakura? Or a storm like a big fight or battle that will break out. Considering the site, I hope it's the former!

    Anyway, thanks for doing a Naruto/Sakura fic since we don't have nearly enough of these IMHO.
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  • From ANON - TVO on June 12, 2006
    This chapter was a little weird. But interesting seeing that Kyuubi has his own Fox demon family.

    One mistake though. You said the 5th Hokage imprisoned Kyuubi inside Naruto. The 5th Hokage is Tsunade. Yondaime is the 4th Hokage and the one that imprisoned the Nine Tails. Just a little nitpick.
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  • From ANON - TVO on June 12, 2006
    Alright, Naruto's back and Sakura is really ticked off and angry at him! But that's because she cares. I kind of like that after Naruto comes back after being away for a while that Sakura hits him, and causes to Naruto to embrace and comfort her. That's Sakura, and it was pretty sweet of Naruto.

    Look forward to more Naruto/Sakura scenes like from this chapter.
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  • From ANON - Peacemaker of the Phoenix Soul on June 11, 2006
    Ch.4 was very well done and I liked the Naruto/Sakura moments a lot. Keep up the good work and update when you have time.
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  • From ANON - Peacemaker of the Phoenix Soul on June 11, 2006
    Ch.3 was very good as well and I really enjoyed the family interaction. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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  • From ANON - Peacemaker of the Phoenix Soul on June 11, 2006
    Another great chapter and I like the plot very much, gonna read ch.3 soon. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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  • From ANON - Peacemaker of the phoenix Soul on June 11, 2006
    Wow, this story is really good and I can't wait for chapter two. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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  • From ANON - what on June 11, 2006
    Soooo... is this where it ended?.... if not, PLEASE undate. I loved it, 2 thumbs up
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