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Reviews for Revelations Of The Mind

By : Gavin

From ANON - spiritwolf30 on January 06, 2007
I thought this story was really really good the truth i`m not much into reading a Narto and Sakura fics but after reading this story I might start reading more of them please I hope that you update soon because I cann`t wait to read more of this story so please update soon
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From ANON - Josh on January 05, 2007
Hey great update keep it up and it isgetting better... Why did Sakura hit Naruto for and I guess if she is over Stressed from beingin there land being announced as a princess I guess that would do it... Now for the next chapter I know its going to be good so hope to hear from you soon...JTB8834@aol.com
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From ANON - logophobia on January 05, 2007
i love your story so much, though i don't think that pink is really naruto's color. still this is the best chapter so far, keep it up!!!!!
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From ANON - gryphonsknight on January 04, 2007
great job man keep up the good work
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From ANON - fanfic_lover on January 04, 2007
good work, please update
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From Jin on January 04, 2007
A beautifully written chapter. The descriptions of the ceremony were by far my favorite part. Naruto and Sakura seem to be getting closer every instant, and I look forward to seeing more. Update soon!
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From ANON - joy2 on January 04, 2007
it started out good but i lost interest in the fight scene in the 4th chapter. they could easily evade that attack if they where ( naruto and sakura ) that good according to your description in the story. :D

but nice story none the less.

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From ANON - ....... on January 02, 2007
update please the waiting is driving me insane
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From ANON - Jason on December 27, 2006
I have to say I love the way this story is going and I hope you don't drop it like I've seen people do before. I find this to be one of the best Sakura/Naruto fics I've read. I like the lighter side of Kyuubi because I've haven't seen that done often. In fact I think this is the third time I've seen someone put Kyuubi in this sort of kind gentle way and I applaud you for that because most people see Kyuubi is a mindless monster which nobody can state for sure because Narutos never reall had an in depth conversation with Kyuubi. I like the twist the story is taking and I hope there is more coming because I can see this fic could become rather long maybe even have a couple of sequels but thats up to you I guess. Just wanted to say I thoroughly enjoy this story and would be honored to be a beta for you if you need one. Thanks for the story.
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From ANON - Josh on December 13, 2006
Hey please update and keep going with this story.. I know you might be busy but I beg you to keep with this story it is just getting really good. I wanna know what happens and how did a few of the couples got together like Hinata and Lee. Neji and Tenten and when did they become an item and when did Temari and Shikamaru become husban and wife....JTB8834@aol.com
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From ANON - Anon on December 09, 2006
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From ANON - Anon on December 09, 2006
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From ANON - ... on December 07, 2006
please update
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From ANON - inunaito on December 06, 2006
I just got done reading" Revelations of the Mind" & loved it. I like how the story is turning out & hope that you continue with it. Please email me when you update it. Thanks
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From ANON - EyesOfCambria on December 01, 2006
oh my goodness, i love the plot lines to this story its so intricate and has so much depth, and the love you have described for the both of them is very well written. i really enjoyed reading what i have so far, and i really look forward to the next chapters to come, so please update soon i really cant wait!
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