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Reviews for As the World Falls Down

By : dragonflyelj
  • From ANON - jennjennr on December 06, 2006
    Ooh, so good, I had wondered when this was going to happen, Sasuke trying to seduce Sakura, it was only a matter of time before he ran out of women to sleep with but her. I absolutly LOVED her reaction to Sasuke's advance, strong but still slightly love sick wonderful mixing of the two feelings! I also loved the ugh specimen collecting scene, their eyes meeting and the almost zing of desire both felt, great. I cannot wait to see them progressing further in their relationship, ackward though it may be. I also rerally loved the humor, I'm a sucker for humor and I loved the way you added it to this chapter, it really added the little iceing on the cake. Itachi's thoughts were wonderful, the almost normal and human thinking was fun, and very in character how he thought it while Sakura would have said it out loud, kinda like the nial polish question... ok well I'll cut the review off here since I'm shivering with cold making it very hard to type, thank you so much for reviewing, and please do so again as soon as you are able.
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  • From ANON - lupi on December 06, 2006
    i love this story! its so ripe with sexual tension you just want them to attack each other lol
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  • From ANON - J-Pop Princess on December 05, 2006
    I have just now stumbled onto this story and so far I am loving it! I think this is the first story I've ever read where I actually WANT Sakura to end up with Itachi. Weird huh? But good for you for being able to make the reader feel that way. The situation you've put the characters in is very unique and I like the descriptive style of your writing. I'll be waiting anxiously for updates!
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  • From WhiteWolfKyoko on December 05, 2006
    I love this story!! Awesome job!
    I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
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  • From ANON - broken dollz on December 05, 2006
    Plz continue!!!!!!!!!!! i love this!! please continue please!!
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  • From ANON - Kara-chan.a on November 21, 2006
    Yo! I love this story, actually I love all your stories and I just want to know when I can hope to see an update? I've been sitting on the edge of my seat unsatisfied for far to long now. PLEASE! Your killing me, I need an update. Your the goddess of lemon I swear it!
    -Kara-chan.a
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  • From ANON - harlita on November 07, 2006
    Okay!!
    Yes.
    More. you must update more. and then some more.

    Excellent writing. Excellent plot. Excellent character reactions. You have been bookmarked!!! *dances*
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  • From ANON - kataimiko on November 07, 2006
    PLEEEEEEEEAAASSSSEEEEEEE update this fic! Seriously, it is damn near impossible to find decent ItaSaku lemon fics, and yours is one of the best! Hopefully you have not given up on this fic...or completely forgotten about it. ;___;
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  • From ANON - ree on November 04, 2006
    great story! i can totally see this happening in "naruto", but anyways, i hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - bac on September 10, 2006
    This is really a very interesting plot; I can't wait to see where you go with it... Hmmm... what is up with Sasuke, does he just have no interest in Sakura or is he just an ass and figures if he gets involved with her she won't "work" for him??? UGH, WHAT IS HE THINKING!?
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  • From ANON - AMMY on August 04, 2006
    This is my first review on aff.net and i must say, i'm usually one of those people, who don't bother to review, regardless of whether i liked the story or not. I'm just plain lazy. However, this time i really have to thank you for this wonderful fanfic. How you described Sakura's feelings in this third chapter was absolutely great. I hope that you'll update soon ;D
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  • From ANON - Sanguine on August 02, 2006
    It's not b/c you're not good enough, Sakura-chan. Sasuke-baka just doesn't deserve you. GODDAMNIT!!! Going out with Itahci would show Sasuke, plus he's also much cooler and he actually feels something for you! XD

    Update soon!

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  • From ANON - Ox King on July 30, 2006
    Umm...wow, this is kind of twisted. A new chapter soon please, thanks.
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  • From ANON - Arryelle on July 27, 2006
    This story is awsome I love how you do their thoughts so perfectly I hope you can update soon I love this story alot.

    Arry
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  • From ANON - Kym on July 27, 2006
    Wow. o.o That's some really good writing there. =3 And the plotline is... Well, creepy. I feel angry for Sakura -- Inner!Me is going, "Break Itachi free and kick Sasuke's ass!" XDDDDD Nicely done. This has gone into my favorites, and I can't wait for the rest. ^_^
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