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Reviews for As the World Falls Down

By : dragonflyelj
  • From SimpleCompromise on January 28, 2012
    T.T Amazing lol Dear God please update lol
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  • From RainMill on June 07, 2010
    That was an excellent update! This is one of the hottest stories on the site and nothing much has even happened yet. Your style is captivating. I really hope you continue this fic!
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  • From Tricia1224 on August 20, 2008
    Wow it has been a long time since I read this story. I am glad your muse for this story has returned. I look forward to the next chapter in this story.
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  • From MistressDragonFlame on August 13, 2008
    Oh yum. I like this chapter, but for the first part I was completely confused--it's been so long that I had forgotten what the previous chapter ended on.

    I wonder how Itachi's going to react when he realizes she's sexually aroused by him. I bet it's going to be fun, no matter, though.
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  • From Jes148 on July 08, 2008
    I'm so exicted you updated! :]
    It was worth the wait. point blank.
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  • From pyrehn on June 16, 2008
    I AM SO HAPPY THAT YOU ARE BACK! I'm so excited I am writing you a review before I even read the chapter that's how amazing you are
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  • From rxtechgirl on June 14, 2008
    Yay! you continued!!!!
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  • From TheColeTrain on June 13, 2008
    nice to see your back
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  • From Anbufan09 on June 12, 2008
    Ah man, I really do love this story! It's heavy but classy, and just done so well all the way around. I applaud you for being able to keep both Itachi and Sakura in character, but adding your own bit of spice to their personalities; something I've found only a rare few have been able to pull off with as much grace as you have achieved here. I sincerely hope that you continue to find your random, wonderful bouts of inspiration.
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  • From Ryokitty on June 11, 2008
    Ooh... now this one's an interesting read as well. I'm starting to really like this pairing too. lol Hope to read the next chapter soon!
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  • From MidnightDreamsx on June 10, 2008
    Oh my goodness! You left me speachless with your writing! Is magnificent creative and perfectly detailed. The plot and everything, is one of those stories you remember, that's how good it is. I had so much fun reading it, because is very entertaining and it just drags you in. Lovely! Please, I encourege you to keep writing. Don't stop. Is a precious piece of fan work and so far from me it deserves 5 outta 5 stars.
    ^^
    Thank you so much for posting this!
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  • From whitefrost on June 10, 2008
    Awww man, this story is sick. So twisted and perverted. Emaciated!Itachi is so NOT a turn on. And neither is Raped!Itachi. Well... maybe a little... I crave to read more. I think if you had just left the story as a oneshot it would warrant a severe fine from Itachi/Sakura fans everywhere. But since you are turning this into something with a bit more sustenance, we will let you off with a slap on the wrist: Quit hurting Itachi! Hasn't he suffered enough? You know you shouldn't speak ill of the dead.

    Who is going to take care of all these bastard Uchiha's? They're gonna need a daddy. I think Sakura should convince Sasuke to let Itachi live to be tortured with the "joys" of parenthood. That would be a suitable punishment, don't you think? Jk, that's a horrible idea

    I'll keep the reviews coming to encourage your motivation, since you have a wonderful way of writing. Have you thought about a career in novel writing? Your style is not too flowery or poetic, in the way many aspiring writers tend to lean towards. I think the best word to describe your writing is "descriptive".

    Hope to hear more from you soon!
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  • From moodymel on June 09, 2008
    I am really excited to see another chapter added to this story. It looks like Sakura and Itachi are getting closer. Things are definately starting to get interesting.
    P.S. my new email address is moddymel2@yahoo.com
    I haven't been able to change it yet.
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  • From emeraldfire84 on June 09, 2008
    I read this story a long time ago but had forgotten its name. I'm so glad you are continuing with it because I really like it. It doesn't follow the cliche Saku/Ita plots that have already been beaten into the ground.
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  • From roxnroll on June 09, 2008
    Great job. I'm so glad that you updated. Can't wait to read more.
    Rox
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