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Reviews for Come Home With Me

By : MsKeller
  • From ANON - Tarff on February 15, 2009
    That was really adorable. Truly. And it wasn't boring (like fanfics can sometimes get when the main characters get together quite a few chapters before the end). I definitely really liked it! Absolutely wonderful. And I liked the different complexities of their personalities and their confusion and whatnot. It was very... new. Yes, New. Anyways, really great job!
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  • From RyuuOokami on March 27, 2008
    You caught me already in the first chapter. I mean; Sasuke made a joke! Hehe. This story was really great, I like your language and Sasuke is so... I don't know but I liked the way he was searching for who he was. (I finds it kind of weird that he was the one that liked gardening when that's actually Naruto's thing in canon *smiles*).
    Anyways, I really enjoyed reading it and I sure will do it again someday. Good luck with future writing, you're a great author so far.
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  • From Vague on February 28, 2008
    Hey there, I was reading your story and found that you have amazing talent as an author. This is why I am taking some time to invite you over to my website Laefe E-Publishing. I’m looking for young talented authors who have it in them to make creative original works.

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    Laefe is a new online epublishing and you are among the first group of authors invited over to the site. I hope that you will consider it. You can find Laefe at http://itsuwari.com/bookstore/. My name is Emilia Baptiste, you can call me Emi when we talk on msn @ waterempath@hotmail.com. All the information you will need will be on the website and anything that is not clear you can ask me.

    All I ask is that you give Laefe a look and see if it might be where you would like to further progress in your quest to writing your ultimate story. Thank you for your time and I do hope to hear from you soon.

    Emi Baptiste
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 26, 2008
    I really enjoyed reading this fic. I especially liked how you dealt with Sasuke's return and his friends' reactions. Your portrayal of Naruto and Sasuke's emotional issues with respect to romantic love was very realistic. Given that for most of their lives one has focused on gaining recognition and the other on revenge, it's only natural that they'd have some difficulty. Thank you for sharing. :)
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  • From Vague on May 01, 2007
    Hello Author,
    I am a huge fan of yaoi and have started a site archiving all the good yaoi fiction. I am glad to say that your story has made it into the archive. Congratulations on telling a truly moving tale.

    About the Archive:
    The archive is nothing more than a site which links directly to good stories. I do not claim your story as my own but rather I encourage others to read and review it as it deserves that recognition.

    Your story is linked at http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php?showtopic=36. If you would like it to be removed from the archive or are concerned about anything then please send me an email. I will be glad to answer or remove it. Thank you.

    Vague
    Administrator of the Yaoi Fanfiction Archive (YFA)
    http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php
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  • From ANON - Rasengan22 on December 29, 2006
    Gosh, I was just going over this a little bit, and it really reminds me of starting out here. I still love Sasuke in this. I can't figure out why he's so different from other author's Sasuke's. Weird. I heart this story so much.
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  • From featherededge on October 22, 2006
    That story was just 'wow'. very moving, very well written, and very entertaining. Awesome job keeping them in character! Thanks so much for sharing your literary talents. I very much enjoyed reading!
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  • From ANON - Pixagi on October 14, 2006
    EEE!
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  • From ANON - Neko-Chan on October 14, 2006
    awwwwww, kawaii!!! Cute ending!! ^^ You did an amazing job with this fic! Cant wait to see more of your work!
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  • From ANON - Yuri-san (a.k.a. yuriipii) on October 13, 2006
    oh yay! happy ending! ^.^
    That was a very sweet "I love you" scene; one of the best I've ever read. :D
    I thought Sakura would wind up being their surogate. I can't really imagine anyone else doing it.
    And I like how the title words are also the last words in the story. (come home with me) I think stuff like that is spiffy. ^^ tee, hee.
    I would love to be e-mailed when you post the sequel:
    yuri--chan@hotmail.com
    p.s. I was practically giddy when I saw my (two) sceen name(s) at the end of the chapter ^^ *feels silly* =P thank you! XD

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  • From ANON - KarMegas on October 12, 2006
    Lol. Your A/N is true. where i live, people beat you for your birthday too. But unlike some countries that share the tradition, i still receive presents too. I remember on one of my b'days my mom woke up at the stroke of midnight to give me my birthday licks. lol. it was maddening. nice chap tooo
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  • From ANON - Carla on October 12, 2006
    That was a very beautiful story although I am surprised that they would need Sakura for having children as I would expect Naruto to transform with the sexy jutsu. After all, Sasuke seemed to be attracted to the girl(Mariko??) because she could almost be Naruto's female form, well, that is what I thought. Anyway, I think Sasuke would love to jump the female Naruto then having babies by AI. Has he ever actually seen Naruto doing his sexy jutsu in the anime? I dont recall.
    Oh well, I do want to be notified when you finally post a sequel to this story. Her is my email: carl_zoo@yahoo.com, please let me know as soon as possible. Thanks for the great fic!

    Sincerely

    Carla
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  • From ANON - Beth on October 11, 2006
    Memoriees... gosh, I can't believe this story is over. It's probably one of the first ones I ever read, did you know that? Not first first, but first sort of long-term, multi chapter story. But I am very pleased with the way it ended, I don't know how you managed to wrap up everything so well and not make it feel rushed. Ugh though, I bet the sequel's gonna kill me. But I can't wait to read about their bebes!!!
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  • From ANON - Cassie on October 11, 2006
    Oh you must email me when you get the sequel all ready!

    Email: starry_eyedstar@hotmail.com

    I loved this story! It was so well written! I can't wait for the next.
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  • From ANON - AnaLaPana83 on October 10, 2006
    Loved the ending!! Very nice, and i'm so glad you've decided to write a sequel. Thanks for the acknowledgment on having reviewed this fic along with the others. Anyway, i'd love to know when you post the first chapter of the sequel: analapana83@aol.com. Good luck!
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