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By : Rian
  • From ANON - ninjakitty on December 10, 2007
    H-O-T
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  • From venia on December 09, 2007
    I forgot to say that I liked very much the ups and downs in the battle control(not only a physical control, but in confidence too)^^ and also that Sakura replied with logic when Sasuke expected her to get discouraged. *___* I can't wait to see what will happen with Naruto! This story is fantastic!
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  • From Meikyuu on December 09, 2007
    This story gives me the chills. There is nothing I like more than dark fiction, and this is my favorite triangle of all fandoms. I cannot tell you how thrilled I was when you updated! I think that your latest chapter does your story justice. I still feel terrible for Sasuke. I love SasuNaruSasu but at the same time I love NaruSaku. Still, in the end if things fall apart for these three, I hope that Naruto chooses Sasuke. That said, I'm rooting for you too, Sakura-chan! Thank you very very much for updating.
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  • From venia on December 08, 2007
    O___O I'm seriously impressed. Most of the fics that stop being updated for a long period, are not so good when they come back. People return to post a short chapter or get lazy and don't write again (leaving things incomplete).
    But despite the time it took, YOUR story is getting better and better with every chapter, damn it! How do you do this? Instead of a lower-quality-chapter that I expected, you managed to raise the interest to hights, while keeping a balance between the smut and the emotional part (especially Sasuke's frustration/jealousy). This was awesome! I could feel every thing being said, the emotions could be truly felt. And also, the characters behaved with some consistency, like real people, instead of coming up with totally random, non-credible ways of acting. What I'm trying to say is... they are IC (as far as your interpretation is concerned, at least XD not IC to the manga)
    I like your Sakura ^^(I'm thankful that you treat her relatively nicely, because >.> SOME people that write team7 Threesomes are so obvious in their hate for her, that it ends up being ridiculous and I wonder why they include a character they don't like since they are going to address people who like her anyway).I'm not talking about Sasuke's cruel thoughts about her, because simply it's the view he has of her in the story and it's normal. His voice is different from the author's though, which means you did a very good work ;D (this is something I always mess up when I write).
    I adore Naruto in his stubborn love and that cold bastard Sasuke too (his cruelty here reminds me of PIERO's Sasuke), who admitted to himself Sakura is his RIVAL(omg! XDDDDD yay) Their relationships are so different yet so fascinating.

    I can't wait to read what will happen next (oh and, right now this story is one of my favourites! love it!!!!!!)I will be waiting for an update, I hope it's soon ^^

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  • From SecretQuill on December 08, 2007
    it's so good, the lemons and the way you describe the characters! seriously i can feel the pain that both sasuke and naruto feel and it's like sakura's the only one who really sees anything clearly. it will be a real threesome right?? -with everyone loving everyone in the end? i hope so team7 belong together!
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  • From Jien on December 07, 2007
    NOOOOOOO!! I'm a die hard NAruSasu fan and reading Naruto leaving Sasuke is vey..sad!

    I dunno. .I prefer it if the ending were NaruSasu and they are beneficial friends with Sakura..but it's your story. =^.^=
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  • From yeagerbomb on December 07, 2007
    okay. i just read this all in one sitting.
    1: HOT!
    2: saskuto is my fav 3-way, EVER.
    3: HOT!!
    4: i love the jelousy thing. it makes it even hotter.
    5: HOT!!!
    great job overall. i've noticed a few small errors, but nothing much. i look forward to more!!~
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  • From roxnroll on December 06, 2007
    Sasuke is such a bastard. Oh well, we love bastards don't we? I can't wait to read more.
    Rox
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  • From StoryJunky on December 06, 2007
    I am so happy that you finally updated this story! I have been waiting for it wanting to know what would happen. I hope you can update soon!
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on December 05, 2007
    man, I thought this one was a lost cause, well Im glad you finally updated. Keep up the good work and update soon.
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  • From ANON - jasmin on December 04, 2007
    this is very good. thanks for writing
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  • From venia on September 04, 2007
    ahhh hey! you can't leave it like that! you just have to update!! it was a great story...;__;
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  • From Sugary on August 12, 2007
    *spits out juice from the juice box i'm currently drinking* oh my.. *looks at my juice box* good chapter. wow. i really like how you depicted Sasuke and Naruto. I really do. It wasn't the norm, but i liked it anyways. good work. :)
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  • From puppylover on April 20, 2007
    I started reading this story when you started posting it here, but lost it for a while. Lucky me that I refound it! Wow! Hot smex and incredible characterisations! You are doing an incredible job of building a new world for our favorite characters while still maintaining those parts of their personalities true. I am thoroughly impressed. I make me smile and giggle with/at the interactions and want to cry for the same characters in the same chapter. And with all your character development you still keep the smut coming and hot. A truly impressive job. I am too in awe to think of anything else to add.
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  • From on January 23, 2007
    That...was a lot more depressing than anything i was expecting. I had this horrible feeling of loss and i wanted to cry for both sasuke and Naruto. i don't know that i can allow myself to feel bad for sasuke because frankly he's been a huge bastard, but i can't help but feel like there is more going on with both of the boys--and that Sasuke is doing what he's doing because he's scared of losing his only friend.

    I, for one, think that Naruto deserves his fantasy (that part about naruto/sasuke/sakura) to come true--I mean he's a nice guy! but how to fix the rift sasuke (that idiot bastard) has created? Maybe Sakura can be the peace maker? No, that might backfire seeing as she's the problem as far as sasuke is concerned. I can't imagine that Naruto won't have doubts and regrets about what he did--especially if sasuke misses school or shows up limping or something?

    Oh! And there's always Neji! Maybe he can hit Sasuke upside the head and make the bastard feel a bit contrite. I imagine the Sasuke that was standing at the top of the stairs at the end of this chapter would be willing to drop his ice prince facade in order to bring naruto back and to get the pain in his chest to go away.

    You've hinted a little at backstories here and there. is there going to be more?

    I remember reading this when you first posted it and thinking, "nice smut, but no plot." I am pleasantly surprised to have run across it again with so many new chapters and a burgeoning, *kickass* plot (of which smut plays an important, not pointless, factor XD). Plus it's my favorite threesome. ^_^

    I want an update!! I want an update!! I want an update!!

    Please?
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