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Reviews for Affective Desire

By : Cepheus
  • From ANON - lazykunoichi on October 30, 2006
    LMAO I so do love clueless Naruto, it's just so amusing to watch and Iruka, snort well that reaction of his was just priceless. Hail hail to the fox-boy!
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  • From ANON - Mysteryladytx on September 06, 2006
    oh man that was AWESOME...what a way to use Kage Bushin but what of the person that took over for him???

    THANKS, I hope you continue this soon:D
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  • From ANON - Norah on August 28, 2006
    It's so hot! ^____^
    I hope you will update soon cause I love it!!!
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  • From ANON - random person on July 15, 2006
    i love it! >.< update soon
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  • From ANON - ka-kun on July 06, 2006
    ack!! need... more!!
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  • From Loquora on June 29, 2006
    Oh, it's so hot! You have to post the next part soon. I cant wait!
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  • From ANON - Me on June 11, 2006
    OMG! PWEEEEEEEEEEEEZ UDATE ASAP!!!!!
    This is just such a mega kewl idea and I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
    ^-^ Hehehehe Naruto is a silly boi and Iruka's just soo cute! Must see Kakashi...(whom i adore! yay!)
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  • From ANON - hidebehindaname on June 02, 2006
    VERY hot! nice work, waiting for the next chapter X3
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on May 27, 2006
    OMG!! this is so frickin' great. i love this threesome but nobody ever does it! i'm so not moving from in front of my comp until i see and update. the only story that can make me move is 'winter release'. this is so going in my green-yaoi-book-of-greatness. (^__^)

    ~Devious
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  • From ANON - blue_genjutsu on May 27, 2006
    Great story so far! Can't wait for the threesome! :)

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  • From ANON - Just_me on May 27, 2006
    Aww, poor Naruto. I feel so bad for him...heheheh...not. *smirk*
    Nice story. I'm not gonna comment on spelling whatsoever, because I seriously suck at that. But please update soon..., although you already spoiled the coupling, it's just sooooo funny to see Naruto suffer. A bitch in heat he is. *sharp nod* And I can't wait to see Kakashi *heart*
    Hm, about the Kage Bunshin... How did the copy-naru know where to put his finger, if Naruto has no idea how to go any further then mere masturbation? Did he (Naruto) experiment?
    Also about your Bunshin dissapearing-talk in the end of your story, HOW exactly would Naruto use his Kage Bunshin if he DID know how to go further then jerking off? How to say/ask this... It's not sure that if Naruto enters a Bunshin, the Bunshin would go poof, but the chance is big. What about the other way around?
    I'm rambling, but what you said just made me curious about your thoughts on it all... Again, please update soon.

    ja ne ^^V
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  • From ANON - neosildrake on May 27, 2006
    Horay, the first part is here! ... and wow, what a first part... You did great! Top marks from me! The first part with Iruka was funny... and poor Naru-chan. Ir really did hit him hard. Nice use of the Kage Bunshin too. Reading this and having heard stories about how painfull a hard-on can be, makes me appreciate being of female gender.
    No comment about grammar and spelling, cuz as german native I do not think that I am good enough to judge.
    Anyway, you have us all waiting on hand and knees for the second part, believe it!
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  • From ANON - black_hole on May 27, 2006
    one word for this chapter... HAWT!!! more please ^.^
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