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Reviews for Surprise no Jutsu

By : Trollmia
  • From ANON - Daga on November 17, 2013
    The first few chapters were hilarious :D :D :D Naru and Sasu characters were so well captured and the fox voice... priceless! I thought it would be the best story ever... but it didn't live up to my expectations... Don't get me wrong, it was nice story (and I rated it high) but just not as good and well thought in following chapters. You've rushed things too much and turned comedy into sugary romance - Sasu suddenly became nice and mushy (totally not him), the humor was gone as well. Last chapter was better but still not as funny as first ones and I don't quite like that out of nowhere Sasu turns to be the dominant lover.
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  • From ANON - Rennasakura on March 14, 2012
    wait... I though this is Narusasu (it was great up till the last chapter but)... how come it turn to SasuNaru(TT_TT) this chapter..>_
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  • From serenagold on December 19, 2009
    Aww cute.
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  • From spooksies on December 18, 2009
    muhahahahahahahah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    thanks for the laughs!!!

    miko
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  • From arabuzumaki on December 18, 2009
    I want a Naruto snuggle-bunny too *pouts* Why does Sasuke get all the good stuff *bigger pout*
    ty for the chapter
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  • From Hotanimeguysfan on December 13, 2009
    Chap 5

    BLISS!!! Just PURE HAPPY BLISS!!! Fangirl Squeel!!! This was very erotic in a very SWEET way.....sigh....happy smile...:) LOVE IT!!!! I just ADORE how you write!!! I love how the characters interact and how everything is described!!! I enjoy it all!!!
    HAPPY DANCE HAPPY DANCE HAPPY DANCE

    I am so looking forward to the next update!!! Can't wait Can't wait so EXCITED!!!
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  • From Hotanimeguysfan on December 13, 2009
    Chap. 4

    This is going BEAUTIFULLY!!! GRIN :) LOVE IT!! This is just so AWSOME!!
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  • From Hotanimeguysfan on December 13, 2009
    Chap 3

    This is getting really exciting and the suspense is killing me!! This is such sweet torture.....that I am completely hooked on your fanfiction!!! I so hope this turns into an ongoing longer story ....I just don't want to see this end anytime soon...its just going along so well and its just so much fun to read!!! PLEASE KEEP ON GOING!!! BEGGING!!!!!
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  • From Hotanimeguysfan on December 13, 2009
    Chap 2 The Madness Continues
    I really enjoyed this chapter and find it really cute....I love the demon fox's 2cents lol...funny he's awsome.
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  • From Hotanimeguysfan on December 13, 2009
    YAY!!! FINALLY!!!! I would love for that to happen .....ya I know it doesn't but still .....its what we ALL were thinking would be nice to have happen!!! SQUEEL!!!! GOOFY GRIN :)
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  • From YojiKato on December 02, 2009
    Love, love. Yeah,that's all I've got right now. Sorry, my grandmother(Of whom I am the sole caretaker at the moment) is in the hospital. (nothing serious, thank goodness) Anyhoo, keep up the good work, can't wait to read more. ^_^
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  • From ANON - bevino on December 01, 2009
    Oh lord, I've been ingnoring this story for days because of the summary (I am kind of fastidious) until tonight, when I saw who the author was. You! It's been so long since you wrote SasuNaru/NaruSasu! You're on my top ten awesome lemon writers, and on my top ten awesome Naruto fanfiction writers! Wonderful! Can't wait until the next update! Thaaaank you!
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on December 01, 2009
    =^_^= more please
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  • From spooksies on November 30, 2009
    DONT DO THAT!!!! i want MORE!!!!
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  • From Prism0467 on November 29, 2009
    Well, you have been scarce. Glad to know you're back.
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