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Reviews for The Candy Store

By : Trollmia
  • From ANON - Yuri-san on October 16, 2006
    Icing!? Oh, how I love the way your storys end. XD
    Cute, fluffy, hot(XD), well written (I think you said "were" when you should have said "was" somewhere...can't remember ^^;;; *not helpful*). A little OOC, but I could care less =P I like the way you write them. ^^
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  • From SilverPhantom on September 15, 2006
    I liked the story and all, even though it seemed to move quickly in a few parts. Sasuke's thoughts in a few of the parts kind of threw me off. I think it would have made a bit more sense if it went to Sasuke before he entered the store or something, and having a few paragraphs that way, instead of just one random paragraph for each day. Otherwise I liked it, especially how you got the whole Konohamaru thing in.
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  • From ANON - OptimisticPessimist on September 03, 2006
    That was evil! Totally evil! How could you just end the fic like that? More, Author! ^______________^V
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  • From ANON - Autumn R on September 02, 2006
    i love this one..you are an awesome writer...;-; i just wish it didn't end like that
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  • From ANON - NoElement on September 01, 2006
    ICING!!!!!! BWAHAHAHAHAHA
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  • From ANON - Yaoi is aweomeO_O on August 31, 2006
    Wow this is awesome and well written! very nicely done ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 31, 2006
    I loved it! The end was so funny! I loved it when Sasuke made Sakura and Ino leave. I also loved how he was stalking Naruto! But the lemon was so HOT! I love your fics!
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  • From ANON - avila7989 on August 31, 2006
    WOW.... THIS IS AN AWSEOM FIC!!!! YOU SHOULD WRITE A SEQUL OR POST MORE CHAPTERS !!!!! THIS FIC ROCLS!!!!
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  • From ANON - lo on August 31, 2006
    That was cute, nice job. And very few errors, just keep up proof reading and soon your writing will get better. Good job.
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  • From ANON - sasuke/naruto fan on August 03, 2006
    i love sex...thank u sooooo much.
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  • From ANON - chelzi on August 02, 2006
    *snort of laughter*
    "Could it be icing?!!"
    that was great. i liked the whole story, and the lemon was pretty good, though half of it was in sasuke's mind, wandering. but the important parts were shown, so it's okay! i liked the whole idea of the story. you've really got some talent for writting!!^^~
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  • From ANON - Stupidity Unleashed on July 12, 2006
    LAWL! That was great. It was REALLY hard not to fidget while reading, since my little sister was watching tv like five feet away from me. She caught me drooling but just thought I was being stupid XP Innocents. You gotta love it
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  • From yaoiyummz on July 06, 2006
    haha...some sort of icing. ^^
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  • From ANON - glowstick-ninja on June 04, 2006
    yeah, i'm gonna say it again. you know, sudden urge. great job!

    now i'm going to read the wild child. ;)
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  • From ANON - glowstick-ninja on June 04, 2006
    i want me some of that icing. >:)

    great job! i really like the concept, but yes, sex on the counter where anyone could see.. that would be one candy shop i'd frequent. great job!
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