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Reviews for Leave me and I won't survive

By : hinatanaruto
  • From ANON - Rain on October 11, 2006
    XD that was awesome!
    YAY
    haha scarecrow and dolphin good couple 2 ^^
    but NaruSasu is my fav
    good job
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  • From ANON - Rain on October 11, 2006
    XD that was awesome!
    YAY
    haha scarecrow and dolphin good couple 2 ^^
    but NaruSasu is my fav
    good job
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  • From ANON - Loki on June 20, 2006
    that was well done I really enjoyed it. It'd be interesting to see how the dolphin and scarecrow got together ;P Thank you for a good read ^_^
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  • From ANON - Stacy on May 10, 2006
    Hey!
    Your story was cool! If you have the time could you write a kak/iru story pleeeeeeeeease!

    Your fan,
    Stacy
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  • From ANON - Bronwyn on May 09, 2006
    You really need to take a good look at your fic and realize all the problems with it. Your grasp of basic grammar, comma usage and sentence structure leave much to be desired. I read a few pages before these errors totally put me off from reading the rest of the story. I can overlook some grammar and comma mistakes, but you had really obvious run on sentences. You could benefit from re-reading your own work and getting a beta reader. Good luck with your future writing.
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