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By : Georsama
  • From LadyLaran on December 28, 2007
    I have a feeling Ino is playing dirty. Tenten needs to beat the crap out of her!!! :-) Great job!
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  • From jupmod on December 28, 2007
    It's a good thing you didn't made a NaruIno lemon here, given it does not make any sense for Naruto to have sex with Ino after she dumped him. No one in his/her right mind would engage in any sexual relationships with an ex regardless. Ino is obvious playing with Naruto here, and Naruto has every right to not fully trust his ex-girlfriend.

    Now as for Ino's suggestion that Tenten is using Naruto, that's bullshit. Naruto only has to look as far as Tenten's reaction to the news that Kyuubi is sealed inside Naruto. Given Tenten accepted him fully, it should be good enough for Naruto to know that he can trust Tenten when it comes to his feelings. Also if Tenten was using Naruto to get in favor of the Hokage or someone else, she wouldn't have hit Naruto on the head in front of Tsunade in Chapter 1. Tenten would have acted too sweet and nice to Naruto in front of everyone, and this is not the case at all. She was herself, and given she is already a very good ninja, she really does not need any favors through Naruto or anyone to gain a position in ANBU or the likes. So in the end, it should be easy for Naruto see that Tenten is not using him at all, especially after they truly made love for the first time in Chapter 4 here. There's no way Tenten can fake such feelings to Naruto, who can see she truly meant them. :)

    So you can easily end this story with one more chapter, where Naruto and Tenten will come out in the open regarding their feelings for one another as well as no longer hide their relationship from their friends and everyone in Konoha. In the end, they end up in a loving relationship that lasts for the rest of their lives together. A happy ending all together. :)

    I look forward to the next chapter whenever it comes out. I honestly had been thinking a few days ago when the next chapter of "Beneficial Friends" will come out, thus I'm glad this story has been updated and will be finish on happy note for Naruto and Tenten. :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 28, 2007
    Never saw this pairing, but it worked! Nice job!!
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  • From Saitochan on October 28, 2007

    Oh, man! I sure hope you're not too busy to finish this fic! I've really really liked it so far, so I'd love to see an update soon.

    Please, Please, Please???
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  • From Casselia on October 09, 2007
    I really enjoy this story and the pairing. It is one I have never considered but within your story it is appropriate. I can't wait for more!
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  • From TheMetalCowboy on October 08, 2007
    Geor-Sama, I know that you don't like people making their own chapters for your works, but I have an idea for a side-story to this. It would be the conversation Naruto has with Hinata about how to perform oral sex on a woman. I was wondering if I have your permission to write this.
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  • From shadowdragontwister on September 14, 2007
    this story is off the awesome charts!!!! but lets get the masters thoughts on this oh Jiraiya...what do you want shadow your interrupting my research...this is worth it sit down and read this story (sits down and reads..........then jumps up) WOW i give it 2 thumbs way way way way up...that’s what i say....do me a favor shadow tell me when chapter 4 is up....will do boss....good now back to my research....later boss and see you later as well
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  • From NayNayThegreat on August 31, 2007
    loved it, I'm loving the story, the pairing is my fav part about this, never knew how cute a TenTen/Naruto pairing would be, its great seeing them together, and its like a breath of fresh air from all the sasuke/sakura crap on here, not that isn't done well, I just don't like the character of Sasuke, he's just too Emo for me, anyway goodjob on the last smut scene, loved it, the cuffs, the blindfold it was hot good job and keep the chapters coming *faves*
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  • From Jin on August 28, 2007
    My apologies, Geor-sama, I didn't mean to force your hand on this. I just spotted that chapter on another site and assumed you had forgotten to add it on here. I meant no offense. Also, I'm really looking forward to chapter four, because I know it'll be great.
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  • From DaffyD on August 08, 2007
    This is maybe the best Naru x Ten with or without a lemon on the web. Then you put a twist with Sakura finding out, and i'm like the last guy want she is doing with a key to his home, can it be more or is it just becuase they are teammates. Maybe it's Ino in a henge. Can't wait for the next chapter, update it very soon.

    P.S. I feel its only right that since Tenten took Naruto's cherry that he should be given the right to take Sakura's. I'm mean it really doesn't seem that Sakura would let Lee get in her pants and from the why iot looks set up, Sakuras nd Hinata could be going though some problems and had gone to Naruto for help but finds him and Ten-chan. Oh the many possiblies you can pull with this story.
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  • From spiritwolf30 on August 03, 2007
    I love this fic finally somebody does a Naruto/Tenten pairring hellto me it looks like almost everybody think Naruto isn`t good enough to be paired up with anybody else other then Hinata so THANK YOU for making a Naruto/Tenten pairring the only thing I can say is god Tenten is HOT and that I cann`t wait till you update again I just hope that the next update lol Sakura joins in lol that and I just hope that you will update more often becase I LOVE THIS FIC
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  • From on August 03, 2007
    Brilliant. I say you should just leave it complete there. That's an amazing end.
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  • From jupmod on August 03, 2007
    This story is getting to be quite good with the plot and drama unfolding as Tenten and Naruto's intimate relationship slowly would be known to the public. That public kiss would definitely start the gossip flying within the Konoha gossip grapevine, and of course, Sakura finding Tenten in Naruto's apartment would do as well. Though I wonder why Sakura has free access to his apartment, and why is she at his apartment so early in the morning?

    Also is Ino still angry at Naruto for that 'prank' he pulled on her? That glower she gave at Tenten and Naruto doesn't bold well if the bitchy Yamanaka wants revenge or something.

    The most interesting part of the unfolding story is the growing relationship between Naruto and Tenten. It started out as 'just friends', then became 'friends with benefits', but I sense that both are feeling more for each other as they get to know each other than in the bed. This and that they each will not want to have sex with anyone else than each other. Sounds very much like Naruto and Tenten are slowly falling in love with each other, it seems. :)

    See? You started as a one-shot but it's growing to become a good story with believable plot and emotions for the characters, especially Naruto and Tenten. :)

    I look forward to more chapters in the future. I particularly like to know the answers to the questions that cliffhanger left open. :)
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  • From serenagold on August 03, 2007
    HA HA>>> YES! Caught red handed!! ^^

    I absolutely loved this. I don't think I've ever read a real pairing between Tenten and Naruto before, but this one is absolutely fantastic! I'd have to say you've gotten all of the characters right. None of it felt OOC. Naruto's and Tsunande's interactions were so enjoyable dead on - and Tenten's shocked reaction to it - that the whole thing was funny as hell. Oh, and did I mention the smut? Shit, I wish my boyfriend was that good. x_@ (hehe, he does alright... but damn it, I want some of what Tenten's getting! ^^)

    Like I said, I absolutely loved this. Keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to chapter four. :)
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  • From Platinumsabr on August 02, 2007
    LOL, you definitely have to keep this up. I can't wait for your next chapter!! I love this pairing, good job!
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