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Reviews for Avenger's Choice

By : Shakirah
  • From Maedel on July 27, 2008
    Hey!
    It's been a while since you last updated...
    I am sorry I dind'd review any of the other chapters...
    I read this fic about one year ago and although I don't remeber all the things that happened I can#t forget about it. that's why I am reviewing now.. hoping that maybe you'll write a new chapter or at least a new story so that I can enjoy more of your writing skills
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  • From Vague on February 28, 2008
    Hey there, I was reading your story and found that you have amazing talent as an author. This is why I am taking some time to invite you over to my website Laefe E-Publishing. I’m looking for young talented authors who have it in them to make creative original works.

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    All I ask is that you give Laefe a look and see if it might be where you would like to further progress in your quest to writing your ultimate story. Thank you for your time and I do hope to hear from you soon.

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  • From crazychemgeek on July 13, 2007
    I'm sorry I didn't review every chapter. My only excuse is that I was so keen to read the next chapter that I didn't want to stop and review. I love this story. I love the way you interact Sasuke and Naruto. I could totally see it happening. I can't wait to read what happens next (hopefully Sasuke will take the surgery and they'll live happily ever after - I'm such a sap for a happy ending).
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  • From Allys on June 05, 2007
    This is a beautiful story. It's one of the most touching things I've ever read. It's been a little over a year since you've updated last. I'm not to going to get on you about it, because you ended in a comfortable place. I just wanted to tell you that this is amazing and to thank you for writing it, it's a damn shame it didn't get the attention it's worthy of, it may be because your beginning is a little sticky, but after that - oh my God. You have the characters down pat, like you've been carrying them in your back pocket. Especially Kakashi, I've never seen him represented so perfectly. I've seen people come really close, they get the wisdom part down, but only you got the infuriating part down :). And Sasuke, you handled him masterfully, not too many others can hit that balance of bastardly and sweet that makes him so lovable. Of course Naruto is Naruto and there's no way anyone could not love him. I also adore the angle you chose to take for this story. Not to be cheesy but it reminds me of 'The Notebook', and not the movie, the book. It has that sort of helpless beauty and love to it, and of course the back and forth format and hospital setting is similar. I know your issues on plagiarism and I'm not accusing you of anything like that. Because the similarities are of setting and feeling alone. I wanted to bring it up because that book is one of my favourite ones. But I liked your story more :). I can't begin to fully explain how you've touched me with this, for a myriad of reasons I'm unwilling to divulge. I just wanted you to know that you did ♥
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  • From raavyoune on April 02, 2007
    This is an amazing story! I was sad to see you hadn't updated in so long, but I hope you will soon!
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  • From Adi on January 25, 2007
    just wondering if you'll update anytime soon? i've been checking almost everyday XD
    would really like to know, please email
    thanks!
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  • From ANON - redtatsu on January 13, 2007
    Wow! Its been 7 months since your last update. If this story was taking place in real life Sasuke probably would be dead. Are you updating on another site or just stuck on this story? Well, I hope that you haven't given up on this cause I really have missed it.
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  • From ANON - Adi on January 09, 2007
    ok its now 3am here and my eyes hurt sooooooooooooooooooooooo much
    but i couldnt stop, that was one of the most amazing most IC piece of naruto fanfiction i've ever read. you probably get that a lot, but theres no harm hearing that more than once huh? :D
    i love that sasuke is such a prick, and so stubborn and just so sasuke
    i love that naruto waggles his eyebrows whens hes being pervy
    i really like that kakashi knows just what to say to irritate sasuke
    usually, when theres flashbacks, i got annoyed and confused, but in this fic i find myself looking forward to the flashbacks, (probably because thats where the lemons are XD)
    you couldnt improve this story if you tried, its just that perfect.
    i have an exam tomorrow, but reading your story nonstop was SO worth it
    you own my soul, and i hope you update soon

    XXX
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  • From ANON - Gonrie on December 03, 2006
    Are you a god or something? I love this story to no end.
    Update soon
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  • From ANON - sleepingzombe on December 01, 2006
    this is possibly one of the best sasu/naru fics i've read in a long time. Everyone is so in character that it's scary. I absolutely love the dynamic between naruto and sasuke and how he's still such a child eventhough he's suposedly all grown up. I'd love to read the rest of the story and see how it all turns out! Will sasuke be able to return to being a nija? will his and naruto's relationship change? All i can do is stay tunes for the next episode, i mean chapter, and hope that it comes along sooner rather than later. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - tamoyb on November 25, 2006
    absolutely beautiful. Your story was just so good I have no words. You made me shed some tears,I loved when Sauske was in the hospital and he kept asking if Naruto had eaten; it really showed how much he cared for him, it was really lovely. I bow to your greatness! You transition so smmothly between their past and present, its done unbelievably well. Keep up the good work and I hope you update the story soon. Drop me a line when it does get updated. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Log on November 21, 2006
    This was my absolute favourite chapter! I loved just about every word (even the ones with mistakes). ;) Awesome Awesome Awesome!
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  • From ANON - hanyou-elf on October 22, 2006
    damn. you did an amazing job with this story. you wrote poetically, beautifully, poignantly. i wanted to cry so many times in this story. i wanted to hold the boys and i wanted to make them feel better. you've got an unparalled story here. you're amazing, you are creative and inventive and emotional. you know how to create a story and a world that is real and interesting to the reader. you've done an amazing job with this story and i'm anxiously awaiting your next update. sasuke's going to have the procedure, but is it going to work? please, update soon, i'm waiting and if it's not too much trouble, i would love for an email to come when you do update.

    thank you!
    ~hanyou-elf
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  • From ANON - Log on October 19, 2006
    Awesome! I love how in character Naruto and Sasuke are. It makes the story so much more satisfying to read. Plus your sex scenes are damn hot. ^^ Which is the point, half the time. Nice! Looking forward to reading the rest of it. :D
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  • From ANON - Xo on September 11, 2006
    I'm in love with this story. It's beautifully written with just the right amount of everything in it! You're a wonderful writer and I am deeply moved by how well you describe every feeling that they have and share. Amazing. Just plain amazing. I'm so sad that you haven't updated, though! I do hope that whatever is keeping you from doing so will get cleared up, soon. I'm going to continue to wait patiently for more and until then, i'll keep re-reading the chapters I have! ^^

    -Xo
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