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Reviews for Avenger's Choice

By : Shakirah
  • From ANON - Serina on May 15, 2006
    I can't wait to read more of this. It's so depressing, but very few fics keep the characters, in character. Such a good story so far!
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  • From ANON - DevilLived on May 09, 2006
    Beautifully written, awesome job. You write both Naruto and Sasuke very well.

    I liked how you had Sasuke wait for Naruto to come down from the roof so that he'd be able to catch him if he fell, that was sweet.


    Can't wait till the next chapter, hopefully Naruto will kick some sense into Sasuke!

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  • From ANON - kitten53 on May 09, 2006
    Oh! I feel so bad for Naruto. I hope Sasuke doesn't do something stupid.
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  • From ANON - Bookworm51485 on May 09, 2006
    I liked this new chapter just as much as the last. Naruto must really love Sasuke because he can be a complete ass at times. Especially since it seems he had a choice between Sasuke and Neji and Neji would very likely be less of an ass to him. I'm guessing this is going to be a 10 part story, based on your numbers. Does this mean that you have all 10 parts already written or are you just planning for 10? And also are you going to end at the point that Sasuke does or doesn't have the surgery or are you planning to show a bit of the future after that point? The reason I ask is because of the quickly implied possiblity of Sasuke and Naruto having kids, any chance of seeing that happen? Anyways, enough of the questions. Again I really loved this chapter, despite how depressing it is at points. Other stories make an attempt at talking about Sasuke and the affect his family's murder had on him, but yours is the only one that actually made me feel sorry for him and to feel like I could really understand how and why he ended up the way he did. I don't especially like Sasuke as a character but you actually made me feel for him which isn't an easy thing to do because I tend to be a bit heartless towards characters I don't like. And I definitely feel for Naruto, that scene with Sasuke leaving made me want to cry. I can imagine his desperation, trying to get to Sasuke physically and emotionally, but not able to make it. So sad, I hope that the story gets happier soon and I hope that Naruto can convince Sasuke to have the surgery and it turns out well. I'm not going to assume that you're going to give the story a happy ending, but I'm definitely hoping for one.



    And hoping:D for an mpreg sorta. Yea I just had to add that one in for good measure. Oh yea and to add to the end your grammar and spelling are very good which makes me happy.
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  • From ANON - kitten53 on May 08, 2006
    OMG! that is so sad.
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  • From ANON - Bookworm51485 on May 06, 2006
    Wow, I'm definitely going to be following this story. I love your beginning, I love your writing style, I love your storyline, I love everything about this story. I liked the switches between past and present, I tend to hate it when author's do this because they seem to overdo the past and forget about the present but you kept a good balance. I liked the part of the fight that you showed with Itachi and Sasuke, though I wish we could have seen how he killed him, though I'm thinking we'll probably find out eventually. I can't wait until your next update, your story has me quite excited.
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  • From ANON - DevilLived on May 06, 2006
    That was very very well written. Awesome job!!!

    Is this going to be a chapter story, it better be!

    I loved how you wrote the Itachi/Sasuke fight, very well done.

    UPdate soon!
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