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Reviews for The need to breed

By : Trollmia
  • From ANON - Anon on June 11, 2010
    I have read this fic before and thought that it was an awesome pairing. I still that way. I am glad to see that you've written something more recent. I look forward to reading it.
    Keep writing about not so common pairings. Iruka is one of those that doesn't get much loving...well unless it is yaoi. He so can be straight! Great job!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 14, 2007
    I had read this fic some time ago, but I just like unusual pairings! It is also about time that Iruka got some love...HE IS NOT GAY!!!! Most fics always portray him as such....
    This fic is one of my "go to ones" I have come to read and re-read. Great job!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 13, 2007
    Finally!!! A Fic that doesn't portray Iruka as gay!!! What is up with that?
    Anyway, thanks for this one. It was very good. Anymore of him but with Shizune...that is something, huh?
    Gread job!
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  • From promise2003 on October 07, 2006
    Yay for finding a way to make this pairing, it is rare. I liked the fact that Iruka and Temari balanced each other well.
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  • From ANON - TerraChrono on October 01, 2006
    Wasn't the ending a little... rushed? It felt like you had slammed your hand on the fast-forward button the closer you came to the end of the fic. Also, as tempting as it can be at times, try to avoid 'happil-ever-after'-type endings. The sheer level of cliché involved with this ending-type tends to give people a bad impression of the fic, something like a bad aftertaste from food or drinks; it implies sloppy worksmanship due to haste or, even worse, a lack of creativity, which I don't believe to be the case. On the whole, it was an excellent fic, but the above-mentioned flaws, in addition to somewhat cheesy dialoguein multiple parts of the story, gave me pause for whether to continue reading or not. Don't let reader-disinterest kill your fiction.

    Keep up the hard work
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  • From ANON - Twilight Garden on September 26, 2006
    this was very good i liked it alot
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  • From ANON - meliny on September 24, 2006
    that is definately an interesting story. . . i have a question, what made you think of temari and iruka? that is a new one by me i found it rather interesting.
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  • From ANON - Nasis on September 23, 2006
    A very cute story! I hope to see more from you. I really enjoyed the pairing, it's not one that I had ever thought about.
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  • From ANON - mel on July 21, 2006
    Wow! I really liked this story. Good job!
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  • From ANON - BloodyMary123 on June 19, 2006
    Dude,continue this. I got so wet that masturbation didnt even help.(P.S: My boyfriend is in florida for now, so I cant get any real dick)
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  • From ANON - anna on May 22, 2006
    Hello there,

    Wow! It's the first fic i've read about this pairing but the story is so cool! You're great and i really hope that you'll continue writing. Hmm...who's gonna be featured in your next chapter? When you've posted it, can you tell me please? Thanks a lot!

    love,
    a big fan of Temari
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  • From ANON - nonengel on May 04, 2006
    nice story, the character perspectives, particularly temari's came across nicely
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  • From ANON - James on May 02, 2006
    verry good
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