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Reviews for Amarutsu

By : bluegenjutsu
  • From Vague on February 28, 2008
    Hey there, I was reading your story and found that you have amazing talent as an author. This is why I am taking some time to invite you over to my website Laefe E-Publishing. I’m looking for young talented authors who have it in them to make creative original works.

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    Laefe is a new online epublishing and you are among the first group of authors invited over to the site. I hope that you will consider it. You can find Laefe at http://itsuwari.com/bookstore/. My name is Emilia Baptiste, you can call me Emi when we talk on msn @ waterempath@hotmail.com. All the information you will need will be on the website and anything that is not clear you can ask me.

    All I ask is that you give Laefe a look and see if it might be where you would like to further progress in your quest to writing your ultimate story. Thank you for your time and I do hope to hear from you soon.

    Emi Baptiste
    Admin of Itsuwari.com and Laefe Epublishing.

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  • From Sinslayer on January 02, 2008
    i love this story * hands out sasunaru brownies*. this story was so cute with just a bit of angst to make this story awwesome!!! great jpb!!!! ^__~
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  • From oohshiny on October 13, 2007
    UWAAAAAAA NICE JOB!!! i never wouldve thought of naruto having a bloodline limit, hes too dman powerful in the series already w/o the help of some super-mega-ultra-super-special-bloodline-limit-that-fathered-the-byakugan-and-sharingan too. NICE JOB!!!!!*GOOD GUY POSE*
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  • From kati on June 01, 2007
    hey i love your story the relationship between gaara and naruto scared me a bit at first because gaara was so dependant on him but then he got his head sorted which is good^^ but i was sad that they stopped kissing each other T.T i thought that was really cute!! thank goodness sasuke sorted himself out *phew* i was sared that he was gonna go off with orochimaru, im glad he stayed ^^ good work!!
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  • From roro237 on March 23, 2007
    I really enjoyed your story. I'm a romantic at heart and the happy ending was wonderful! Thanks for the great read.
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  • From ANON - Izzy on November 23, 2006
    hehehehehehhehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe i bet they were tired in the morning...
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  • From ANON - Anna on October 05, 2006
    My my my, I'm glad that I decided to hunt finished stories down, because I came across this one! It's like an utopy, I hope that the actual story was like that, everyone together and happy as they should be! Everything was just perfect, good job!
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  • From ANON - Jadebyrd on June 06, 2006
    I really loved your story, and just so you know the part when Sasuke called Naruto sweetheart literally made my heart melt!!!! I've never heard Sasuke refer to him in that way and i found it amazingly sweet.
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  • From ANON - Devilsheart on May 14, 2006
    Yey you finished ending wasnt as good as I hoped but still pretty nice
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  • From ANON - ILOVEIT D.J. on May 11, 2006
    THIS STORY IS SO FUCKING AWESOME XD!!! The first chapter almost put me off, good thing it didn't completely. Ah, if only the anime and manga belonged to YOU, the story, and the series would be a hell of alot better for us girls T_T :(. You know the real author should write a different version(yaoi XD!) Naruto for us girls especially to read, he'd make more money that way if he did, but then again he kinda did in the same series. Oh I should mention to all you girls, If your looking for some REAL SASUNARU go to Zettai Hentai or type it in on some search website to find it. Anyway I love the story and look forward to it being update in the hopefully near future!
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  • From ANON - kallipso on May 01, 2006
    Keep it coming. This is a fanastic ficce. I love the twist of Itachi being inncoent or is He? I think that you played it right though. Itachi may have hurt his brother mentally but never did he trully attack him. I can't wait to read more. Please keep it coming.
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  • From ANON - Emmy on April 30, 2006
    Wow...just...wow. I thought this fic was gonna be the same old thing of Naruto getting a bloodline limit, he and sasuke falling in love, killing orachimaru together and then living happily ever after. I am SO glad it isn't one of those fics! Your story is so deep, and full of real human emotions. This was such an incredible story to read through, I started on chapter 1 and read all the way without stopping, and i'm completely amazed. That, and starving for a new chapter, lol.

    I really can't say enough good things about this story. It just came up from behind and bit me in the ass, seriously. Naruto and Sasuke are so perfect together, you didn't rush the relationship or drag it along, and you made them falling in love make perfect sense. It wasn't weird or unlikely or anything. Your characterization is wonderful, and I love how you put Itachi in there, giving him a story and everything. I don't know about you, but personally, I don't think he killed his family. I loved reading the theory that was presented in your story.

    I have to point something out....

    "My old apartment was rented out and I don't want to live with the Hyuuga's. Way too crowded there.” Actually I'm worried they might try to steal my sperm or something even more horrible than that!"

    LOL! I was laying down in bed and actually had to put my head in the pillow because I was laughing so hard. Very wonderfully written, and something Naruto would probably think.

    Again, you've done an amazing job here! :)
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  • From ANON - D/H on April 30, 2006
    The story is different but your dialogue'z are very amatuerish and just seems like they were writting by an 14 yr old mind...

    It's not bad and i do and will look forward to your next chapters, but you need to work on the dialogue and characters..

    Everything is way off!!
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  • From ANON - W on April 30, 2006
    I like it. Kinda fluffy and OOC, but I like it. The twists and turns, and the admissions and changes all fit together pretty good. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Kativachan(2 lazy to log in) on April 29, 2006
    This was a very interesting twist. One I have never seen before. Awesome job! Damn ffn still not working...
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