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By : Redwitch05
  • From ANON - kirafics on July 02, 2006
    ok i'm going to be bad right now, i was read some of the reviews for broken and saw yours and good kakairu(kakashi & Iruka) fic is Side Effects its on fanfiction.net not here, but its my favoret kakairu and there are tuns of them that you can find if you look it up google, ( and i should know because I just looove the kakashi and iruka pair)!!! oh and i really liked your fic good work^_^!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Assassins_Kiss on June 30, 2006
    I'm confused but hopefully everything will be okay XD. Can you e-mail me if you update... this story is very interesting
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  • From ANON - Deion on June 10, 2006
    nice i lke
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  • From ANON - redcloudangel on June 07, 2006
    Such suspense. Well written. I really like it and want to know what happened. Too bad this site does not have the alert feature. I will check back.
    The chapter is too short. You should make the future chapters longer, unless you undate really quick. ^ ^
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  • From ANON - ss on June 07, 2006
    Ok... so you had me absolutely riveted. Althouth some of the paragraphs were rather long, I didn't mind since I was glued to the screen for the story. I hope you are able to update soon.
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on May 26, 2006
    That was really interesting. I would love to read more, so please update! And good job for your first real fanfic, everyone was really in character. There were a couple of grammar mistakes, but nothing major. I can't wait for your next update! If it's not too much trouble, would you mind emailing me when you update? Thanks!
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  • From ANON - tariray on May 21, 2006
    umm ok, i read the somewhat perplexingly puzzling hater's flame.

    is it me, or did this person swim through nearly 2000 yaoi SasuNaru/NarutoYaoi fictions to tell you, and your fic sucks because theyre not gay, etc, (btw- even my non-yaoi friends are saying that naruto is so very... yaoi- it aint no coincidence i say)....???

    *blink blink*- really.... i mean all the other fics are sasunaru or yaoi.... eeeeeeehh... .HAHAHAHAHAHA omg wat a turd... eheheh o my gawd that is actually funny...
    and if that dude carries an UZI, well pned bitch cuz youll have to face the army of armed HAGS with RPG's MPG's and yes, billions of tons of mortars and our trusty kalashnikovs.... yeah bitch i know my ammo... i (and all the other fans) pwn joo, hahaha
    keep ur story up... this is awesome... we shall fwap haters as we read.
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  • From ANON - tariray on May 21, 2006
    ZOMG
    its been ages since i've read a good, goood SasuNaru, let alone any kind of fanfic....
    I worship you... you are godly and Pwn-like in so many ways....
    Please keep it up i am absolutely intrigued!
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  • From ANON - FirePeleKa on May 18, 2006
    Excellent start!
    *pant* *drool* *whimper*
    I am, very much, looking forward to your updates!
    The only thing that may become a little tedious within the flow of the story, is the very skewed time sense. It may distort the mood that you are trying to create. Other than that, keep up the GREAT work!
    Now my blessing for writers: May your life be easy, so that you may have ALL the time in the world to write and update!
    ~___^
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  • From ANON - GlassVortexW on May 02, 2006
    For the 'I HATE YOU' retard: if you wanna talk shit next time to and about 99.9% of Naruto fans, atleast leave your pathetic name and email address.

    On with the Review. I love the suspense. I cannot wait for the next chapter. Unlike most of the people here, your fanfic doesn't sound like it's going to be straightforward or Cliché. And it hella doesn't sound like a story that we'll be able to theorize and predict the outcome of either. for one, what happened to Naruto? What's up with Neji and Sakura's mission (I wonder if they got any action *little perv in the back of my mind has been pestering me into say that ^//^*)? What happened to Sasuke? Who the hell is Beniko (She sounds more important than any of the other peeps mentioned on the targeting list), who was the person that was following Sakura, why does Kiba sound confused about the scents in the forest, since when did Shika become ANBU (Btw, love the touch. As soon as he said 'Troublesome', I knew it was him. Glad you put him in so early in the story), and seeing as how it was four days later, I wonder where the hell Sasuke and Naruto are.

    LASTLY, the most IMPORTANT question in the world, when will you update? ^^

    Victoria Leblanc
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  • From ANON - Michelle Fabian (lost shinobi) on April 29, 2006
    I looove this story, It doesn't confuse me at all. I love the ideas you have and I can't wait until you send me more of your work for me to go over :) I really hooked on it :P

    Michelle
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  • From ANON - Mija on April 28, 2006
    oooh wow so far you have got me soo hooked on this fic and its only the first chapter, it was totally intense and a bit confussing and only because of the little twists and no answers to all those questions, who is this black long haired ninja girl who broke out in a sob???? was it Sakura with dyed hair??? or someone else?? Hinata? but I so cant see her with long hair, and ten ten is already there, sigh omg you just have to update soon, I know I know I must be patiente, cant wait for a new chapter though, thank you for the totally excellent read, much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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  • From ANON - Matt on April 27, 2006
    Hey kid. Damn, it took me a while before I realized that you supposed to click that review button to leave a comment. couldn't it just have said 'comment'? Don't confuse people too much with the way you're writing. Or do you forget that people like me take a while to read in between metaphors? I like it tho. it's cool. U'r not killing Naruto tho. I know you too well. Second thought, maybe I don't. Intrigue me Shorty, (cause I know you hate me calling you that). Hurry with the next chapter. Ill stop teasing.
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  • From ANON - SakuraXSasuke_4Life on April 27, 2006
    Ewwwwww that's so gross. What inspired you to write this? I'm just kidding ^^ I love Sasuke and Sakura as a couple, but I couldn't pass up and see how you'd react to this comment. B/c basically, that's exactly how that hater commented you. They didn't read the story for Christ sakes. This is the first M/M fanfic that I just started reading last night. I hope you continue on with it. I haven't even read anything remotely gross, so I don't know where that person get's off trying to call you a whore. And honestly, this is in Adulfanfiction. And plus, it's under the category Male/Male. so yeah. I just found it a bit strange. Anyways, they just said crap to nearly 95% of Naruto fans. I know, crazy to admit, but there are more people that like them two guys together than any other. That's what inspired me to come here and check out the stories. I mean, it's not like they're real people. They're anime characters. I think that crazy person has been doing some crack. Why else would they be so offended by it. I wouldn't have bothered to leave you a comment if I didn't read the story and found it good. And it really is. I got confused from where Sasuke found Naruto. I can tell he was beat up. But when he passed out into his unconcious state, did Sasuke get attacked as well? Was that blood that Naruto felt on his face? It couldn't have been tears, right? Can't wait for the next chapter. Oh yeah, ignore that freako. They weren't even brave enough to leave their email address. What kind of stupid crackhead does that? -.- empty threats. oh, do people make request here? Like, you know how there are challenges? Well, can readers make requests? I was wondering if you'd write a Sasuke and Sakura fanfic? I hope it's not too much trouble. You can make it a one-shot if you'd like. It's just that I'm making a survey and well, okay ummmm, I feel nervous asking actually. Do you think you can email me please?



    XxX~Sakura Uchiha~XxX
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  • From ANON - Cassie on April 27, 2006
    Um...Im a little confused
    I think it was at the beginning that it seemed like Naruto was with Sakura... Was that past, present, hemm???
    What I got so far apart for whatever ^^^^that is, is that Naruto and Sasuke are missing and Naruto (and maybe now even Sasuke)
    is injured and Sakura and Neji are on there mission...am I close??
    Well good job anyway, I like it ^_^
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