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Reviews for Barfly

By : Letta
  • From ElfenDream on January 06, 2008
    hihi.. wonderful. A drunk Itachi.. whoho. so funny and sexy.. ^__^
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  • From Zigana on July 25, 2007
    I just stumbled across this one. I loved it!
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  • From Rosebud on May 31, 2007
    WOW...that was just.. HOT!!!!!
    I love Itachi/Naruto! ^^
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 13, 2007
    Aah that was good too. I took quotes and put them on my DA message thing, I hope that's okay. I credited them to you. I should put a link though, so people will then click on it and read it. I like ItaNaru (NaruIta, whatever). And I think Itachi can be so humorous sometimes. I can't even remember how many times I laughed. But it's those random comments out of nowhere that I just loved. Especially at the end when Neji had that paingint and Naru's like "Oh," then, "It's good." LOL I wish you had more on here.
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  • From on April 22, 2007
    Hahaha, lovin' it. Hmm, I am a bit late reading this! Such a bother. Okay, one important thing to say then: I'm corrupted.

    TnT
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  • From ANON - Menow on September 25, 2006
    That's right!! Down with the weepy-uke Naruto! We ARE talking about the future Hokage here!
    I really enjoyed your story. You're Naruto sounds exactly like I would imagine an older Naruto.
    This is one of the stories I have bookmarked so that I can return anytime I need some hot Naruto action. I really like the idea of him "stickin' it" to Itachi. I must say I was quite excited when I brought it up today and found there was a Part II. It was excellent, and I thought you did a geat job of describing these boys as drunk. In fact, some of it brought back memories (refrigeration units in space and homegrown music projects, that is) Now, I guess it was only fair to give Itachi his turn but I would love more Naruto seme action. So, the next time you feel like doing a little PWP, I hope you decide to come back and have a few more drinks with the Barflies!
    Also, if you ever need help getting through your stories, feel free to get in contact with me. I love working with authors. (I would make a great editor if I ever decide to stay in one place long enough)
    CHEERS!
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  • From ANON - innerchild on August 21, 2006
    yes, u have done well on the corruption. the first one you wrote was my first time reading an itachi and naruto fic, and i loved it. and i really liked this one as well.

    favorite line. "let's go have man sex."

    that's naruto for ya.

    -innerchild
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  • From ANON - Shosuro on August 21, 2006
    I love it!!!!!
    I wasn't really sure what to think when I read the pairing but I thought "what the hell!!!! Maybe it will be interesting!!"
    And it was!!! I thought the drunken conversations were the best!!!!
    I busted out laughing when Itachi wrote the little note for Sasuke, telling him he was out of the Uchiha Clan because of bad fashon taste!!!!!
    The sex was great!!! Are you going to continue with this story or are you going on to another story???? I would gladly read your other stories!!!
    Great job!!!!
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  • From ANON - liza on August 20, 2006
    Wow...You really impressed me with the first part in Barfly,(i think i read it on deviantart)the second part is just as good maybe better. I enjoyed the writing style through out the whole story. The thoughts of each person had me laughing so much, Itachi was my personal favorite, it sounded like he was stalking Naruto, you know with the spy and all. Drunk!Neji is amusing to the point of busting a gut, maybe one day he might go to outerspace with his inventions... hehe.... Yay for a second round of mansex with Naruto on top! I absolutely love Naruto as seme, I always thought as him as being an equal opportunity type of guy, he seems like he would enjoy being on both side. Maybe a sequel could be written on how "certain" ::coughSasukecough:: people find out about Itachi and Naruto, how about his reaction toward the letter if Itachi was drunk enough to send it, or how genius Itachi finds a way to keep in touch with Naruto to have glorious fun!sex! Great story, great writing, and great humor! Your writing style is one of the best!
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  • From ANON - STARR* on August 20, 2006
    Please oh please write an interlude or something on how Sasuke reacted to the letter Itachi wrote. PLEASE. Oh how I love this fanfic. Words cannot describe how happy I was that you decided to write another chapter. It's such an amusing peice of drabble that one just can't help but love. I really do hope you continue this. I just can't help but smile at how they get into those situations.
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  • From ANON - Zrina on August 20, 2006
    OMG, don't think I have ever laughed so much reading a fic!!! :D
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  • From ladygizarme on August 20, 2006
    aahhh this was sooo great! i loved both parts!! the raw and frantic, yet still somehow controlled chemistry and desire (and passion!) between the two that you described was just soooo hot! and i love the description of the added effects the alcohol had.. drunk itachi is so funny to me.. as are both their thoughts on how wrong the situation was and what the consequences might be later.. oh this was amazing, i wish for so much more now... oh and lmao for drunk neji and neji's reaction to finding out at the end.. um.. yeah, great work ^___^
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  • From ANON - Cindy on August 20, 2006
    How do you do it? I laugh so hard reading this story. The characters are so off the wall but still in character somehow. Maybe exaggeration, aye? Love it! Haven't found anythign else quite like this.

    "That's it - Sasuke's out of the Clan."
    "Maybe you should write him a letter."

    That and the conversation about Sasukre needing psycopath lessons are my favorites.

    And smexy stuff too? What more could a girl want?

    Thanks!


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  • From ANON - LadyD on August 20, 2006
    what about Sasuke's reaction to the letter? =O


    'sides that, i relly liked your story :]
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  • From ANON - Hestia on August 20, 2006
    Well I think your previous reviewers pointed out the truly great lines and moments--the letter to Sasuke and the two discussing his clothes, my favorites.
    Anyway, I just wanted to say that you pulled this impossible pairing off very well!
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