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Reviews for The Stage's Avenger

By : theyoungestuchiha
  • From ANON - viciouscallisto on May 12, 2006
    that was absolutely delicious. i like how you go back and forth between the past and present. i didn't find it confusing. anywho, i'm glad that itachi has noticed sasuke-kun again and i can't wait till the brothers meet up again. mmm i love this fic!
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  • From ANON - blackbloodedkunoichi on April 27, 2006
    OHHHHHHHHHHHH MYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD FINALLY YTOU FUCKING UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I'm real confused but I kinda get it buh I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE ITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT OMGEHOMGEHOMGEH I LOVE IT I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONG!!
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  • From ANON - blisblop on April 27, 2006
    Your use of descriptive passages is f'n breath taking.You make me feel some what the way Sasuke made Itachi feel at the end of chap 5.I want you ta live however.Just a real,absolute real joy to read.It had a physical impact."Chest like a furnace",just so many stunning,evocative images... so fast..but smooth,effortless,constant turns and sudden apperitions ,its an almost flawless flow,I can't see a flaw myself but.. its rather dazzeling,the use of flashbacks perfectly timed.Sasukes reaction to Itachi is brilliant.Its the way I like them and write them(You are better,there is no doubt about that but its really amazing for someone else to present it this way.)I probably sound like a raving idiot.It's your fault.I am sooooo glad you are keeping this up.Makes blowing a grand in the past four,five months on my computer worth it.It made me hungry,I lost weight but I wrote alot and now that I'm back here(well I am apauled{sp} really,the site what where is all the work????) its just made all that work I did to amuse myself during my computer drought worth it.... to see that these idea's can be worked out so well.Inspirational I guess you'ld say.Oh man I'm tired but I had to say HEY,however inchoherantly.Lovely,malevolent.Orochimaru's responces....man have I tried to acheive that delerious affect, you have.... gaugh...just so well done.Drool at ya later.DO NOT STOP.PLEASE >
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  • From ANON - oOKeairaOo on April 22, 2006
    It's very, very hard to keep Itachi and Sasuke in character in an Uchihacest fic that goes any longer than one chapter. And yet you manage it so amazingly well. It's long been my opinion that if there ever was anything between Itachi and Sasuke, it would be so incredibly fucked up that it would barely be recognizable as anything more than hate and lust, and you've just captured that (and so much more) perfectly. The last lines in your latest chapter? Perfect. The entire scene with Itachi hearing Sasuke's song had me practically staring at the screen with my mouth hanging open.

    I will admit that I do occasionally go all fangirly over the fics that put Itachi and Sasuke together in the end, with no angst and all the happy happy love one could imagine, OOC-ness be damned. However, as far as keeping everyone in character, and capturing every facet of Itachi and Sasuke's personalities, this is by far my very favorite Uchihacest fic. And it's not just Itachi and Sasuke, you've got Orochimaru just right, and even the brief conversation with Kiba left your readers feeling that the real Kiba had just strolled across their computer screens. I honestly don't know how to give this fic the praise that it deserves, so I'll just beg you for a new chapter, hopefully soon.
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