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Reviews for Found You

By : theyoungestuchiha
  • From ANON - MewMew2 on April 22, 2009
    interesting. Please update once more when you can, I look forward to the next update.
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  • From yaoiismyantidrug on April 12, 2009
    I'm really enjoying reading this again ^__^ You have such a unique way with words, if I haven't said that already. Gai and Kakashi together are hilarious, and I love Kakashi's thoughts when he's trying to sleep... especially the bit about getting Sasuke some new shower supplies, heee!

    I think you missed an italics end-tag, though, about halfway through!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 22, 2009
    Thank you for continuing this story! It's a pleasure to read. I think the thing I like most in your writing is the characterisation of Kakashi. He is so himself here!
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  • From ANON - bluegirl on February 20, 2009
    I love this story. I'm glad you are reviving it. I just read your edited chapter one, and I'm about to read through again from the beginning, because I remember loving it when I read it, a long time ago.
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  • From ANON - darkneko on February 16, 2009
    This story is so good. I'd love to see it conitnued. I didn't think it needed an edit, but I like what you're doing with it now. Please keep writing, there aren't enough good Kakasasu fics in the world, and this is one of the good ones.
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  • From yaoiismyantidrug on February 15, 2009
    Ooooooooh, I LOVE this story! It's so unique, and so good!!! I found it quite a while back, and I don't know if I reviewed then - if I didn't, it was because I thought it had been discontinued. But... I am so glad you're doing it again! :D Your voice is so different and exciting, and the way you write is so interesting to read ^___^ And this pairing, I love them so much ♥ and I love the way you characterize them :D

    I'm just so happy you're going to be picking this back up!
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  • From Dragon7 on November 10, 2007
    Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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  • From ANON - PuppySlut on January 11, 2007
    I'm never disappointed in expecting your ego to be appropriately stroked.

    It's too bad it doesn't get choked or wrestled with nearly enough anymore.


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  • From ANON - DevilLived on December 13, 2006
    Ooh, I liked this chapter. Very well done. At some parts it was confusing to me who was talking, but it was pretty clear otherwise.

    I really liked how you wrote Gai. So funny....

    I liked the funeral too. Hell, the whole chapter rocked. Great job. Update soon, okay?
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  • From ANON - DevilLived on September 03, 2006
    OO, I can't wait to see how you write the battle between Sasuke and Gaara!!

    Great job, your writing has gotten better, if I can tell anything. Keep it up! I would write something more interesting but after trying to catch up with all the stories that have been updated while I was away, my mind is kinda dull.

    Anyways, I do know that this chapter was great! Thanks for updating and do it again soon!
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  • From ANON - blisblop on July 19, 2006
    You know it never ocurred to me that it wasn't written the way it was ment to be,however I also never knew I was reading a first draft, nope it didn't.I mean I don't need things spoon fed to me though the PWP fiend in me would be happier to know where I was before mid fuck but that's my problem.Do a rewrite for yourself if you want is my veiw.I mean let us read it naturally,gods, now I am second guessing myself.
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  • From ANON - Havoc Tellenoi on July 03, 2006
    Peaches, I've really enjoyed this story. I don't think there's really anything that wrong with it. I actually prefer styles like this to the wishy-washy stuff some people write. It's good to give indepth descriptions of some things and to make sure that if you're inside a character's mindspace that the thoughts while organized, still flow like they would for a real person, in that kinda groggy connected way that makes everything connect even when it doesn't seem to. Typos happen to everyone and there's really nothing wrong with them. The human mind doesn't even read entire words after awhile; it jsut picks up the important letters and forms the words as they should be.
    In this story, Found You, I've enjoyed the flow of it and they way the characters think. It's been interesting and fun and I really do find the way that Sasuke and Kakashi are characterized refreshing and uniqu. it's also been a fun read and I hope that you will continue to write more chapters for it.
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  • From ANON - dip on July 02, 2006
    ok i went and over a period of time came back to this story and have read all the chapters up to date. i have to say that i agree with that reveiwer ( except on the funny part, i got the jokes.). this story was really hard to read at points and confusing in others. my problem was with the actions. at certain points you couldn't tell how they were doing what ever they were doing. the last chapter for example fried my brain because i pictured sasuke on the bottom before you threw in there through all the thought chaos that kakashi turned him on his back or.. watever >3 with all this confusion, i still read through it because it was generaly good. just messy. i did love kakashi's meeting with iruka in the store, it was very cute and it just, well... urks the shiz out of me when i have to reread paragraghs to find out what they're doing then reread the thought and ect. so in general i agree that the story could use some structure and i'm glad your putting it on hold and taking more time with it because at heart it's a great story... =3
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  • From ANON - Sir Magus on June 28, 2006
    i liked ur story very much its totally awesome-i think that sasuke and Kakashi make a very cute couple-u should definitely keep adding chapters to this story i would very much appreciate it.
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  • From ANON - NightsEnd on June 28, 2006
    I've always liked the complexity of your sentences. There are some run-ons and typos that can be fixed, but I generally see those as minor and not much of a problem.

    I've also enjoyed the humor, but I do have a very morbid sense of humor. If some people aren't laughing...well, some of it just isn't meant to be funny to us, as you pointed out.

    Of course, it is your story; and if you feel that you need to revise, go ahead and do so. I'm not exaggerating or sugarcoating when I say that this is my favorite KakashixSasuke story out there. Or my favorite Sasuke-centered story, for that matter. I hope you still plan to finish it?

    Good luck,

    NightsEnd
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