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Reviews for Pulse

By : Luciano
  • From Ikippiki on October 07, 2008
    Awww so hot! I'm totally a fan of yours! The way you write is just marvellous.
    I also really like the way sweetness and hot sex mingles in your chapters.
    Please write loads more!
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  • From RyuuOokami on May 30, 2008
    When Iruka just sat down to watch the blowjob-lesson. Well that cracked me up. But somehow I expected that from him.
    I liked your story a lot.
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  • From 757 on September 29, 2007
    This is such a great story~!

    I love it ♥♥♥
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  • From YamiKaeko on July 25, 2007
    Hey I like Carrots and Pears. *snickers* Now I'll never look at them the same way. This story was so smexy I loved it!
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  • From despairs on July 25, 2007
    This story was wonderfully detailed. It had me hooked from start to finish.
    It has just the right combination of humor and sexiness.
    I have to admit the idea of Sasuke practicing blowjobs on a carrot was a shock lol
    but it was a GOOD shock to say the least. I was expecting something totally different
    but i guess my mind was in the gutter after all those perfect lemons i had read.

    You have done a great job on this fic and i hope you continue to write even more in the future.
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on April 29, 2007
    I absolutely loved this!!

    The last chapter reminded me of some good times.

    Nothing good ever comes from sticking girls, a box of wine and pizza in a hostel room. Educational, very.
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  • From ANON - Jonata-kun on December 19, 2006
    I loved your story! It really freaked me out when you added the star wars line. I just had finished watching the last two movies and the 4th one in school! I pretty much jumped up from my chair and pointed at the screen. Great job, I hope to read more by you soon.
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  • From ANON - innerchild on November 12, 2006
    this was a really cute fic. not to mention, sexy. and i can't believe that sasuke went to kakashi for lessons on blowjobs! that was great. especially when iruka came in and helped out. lol, that was great.

    i was at my mom's house when i read this. i straight up hate being with my mom, so this kept me in a some what good mood while i was around her. thanks! anyway, i'll be looking at your other works, cause this kicked ass.

    -inc
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  • From ANON - Andie on November 10, 2006
    I loved the story hehe Uke!Sasuke makes me happy XD
    though i also love when they take turns... ah but still I love Sasuke as the bottom one =P

    Anyway, It was a great story. I'm happy that Neji end up with his crush and Kakashi really make me laugh heh
    he is such a pervert. You have to love him :)
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  • From ANON - DevilLived on November 10, 2006
    That was an awesome story, great job I loved every word of it.

    I ADORED how you wrote Kakashi in this fic (and especially this chapter) he is hilarious and just so... Kakashi.

    My fav line:

    'Must be because I ate the equivalent of a blue whale stuffed with cocktail weenies. Mmmm cocktail weenies, there they are staring at me mockingly from the center of the table.'

    LOL

    Anyways, keep it up!
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  • From promise2003 on November 10, 2006
    Kakashi and the cocktail weenies...moo lover, very moo...Kakashi lost his mind somewhere and he thinks its frolicking in the chips. These were the funniest parts and I laughed my ass off as I read them. You do humor so very well.

    I also vote for you writing a Neji and Gaara fic. I would LOVE to see that. I never thought of them as a good couple before, but you piqued my interest with the pool scene. I can't wait for your other fic though (yay for Genma/Hayate).

    Thank you so very much for writing this little fun fic. I had almost not realized that you'd updated (and duh to me since your fic was two above mine on the latest updates...neurally blind as a bat, I am). *Lemon Drops Loves you and your fic* Keep writing! I can't wait to see what you come up with next.
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  • From ANON - Ryo Toya on November 10, 2006
    What a wonderful, wonderful fic! I love the whole thing, and the humor is to die for. Great job, and good luck with your new works!
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  • From ANON - Jessica on November 09, 2006
    ~Very nice~!...I absolutely love your story! The writing style was flawless in its execution...the transitions were perfectly spaced and the switch of POVs really flowed well! Everything was perfect!...It had a perfect balance of humor and angst!...I especially loved Kakashi's POV! You had his voice down; in fact, all the characters were IC (I totally laughed at Gai and Rock...they're precious!)...but seriously, really great story! I loved your subtlety and awesome 'Wow!' factor (those love scenes were ~HOT~!)...awesome job and can't wait to chack out your others! ^-^
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  • From DemonBlaze on November 09, 2006
    The last chapter was great.
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  • From oraday on November 09, 2006
    Finally! It was years ago that I read this and it's great you finished. Loved the SasuNaru at the end there. I'm a bigger fan of uke Naruto than seme Naruto so that was awesome!

    Ne, I'm wonderin' if you could write a NejiGaara companion fic, you know, one about their night after the party^.^
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